for Twisted Hearts: Tough Love6/21/2005 c1 EightverseScribe
Excellent work.I enjoyed your characterization of Robin and your credible,if brutal,handling of Terra's redemption thoroughly.
Excellent work.I enjoyed your characterization of Robin and your credible,if brutal,handling of Terra's redemption thoroughly.
6/21/2005 c1 
8Red Phoenix Star
Heavy...
Seriously... this was... *really good.*
I'm glad Terra is alive.
Are you going to write a sequal to this? Maybe while Terra's in Atlantis healing, Beast Boy could come and visit her to let her know he still cares and misses her? (Yeah, I'm a shameless BB/Terra fan).
You really hit it on the mark. It's so good to see someone write a fic that actually addresses the reason behind Terra's pain instead of bashing her or writing her off as a ** or a traitor. Robin was extreme, but ompassionate. Kudos to you.
Please write more!
8Red Phoenix StarHeavy...
Seriously... this was... *really good.*
I'm glad Terra is alive.
Are you going to write a sequal to this? Maybe while Terra's in Atlantis healing, Beast Boy could come and visit her to let her know he still cares and misses her? (Yeah, I'm a shameless BB/Terra fan).
You really hit it on the mark. It's so good to see someone write a fic that actually addresses the reason behind Terra's pain instead of bashing her or writing her off as a ** or a traitor. Robin was extreme, but ompassionate. Kudos to you.
Please write more!
6/21/2005 c1 Talleyrandishktu
Quite a story. Constructed, evidently at great length, and by necessity so. Redemption of Terra in a few quick words is simply a plot device- something that can be used, but not that can bear scrutiny as an integral part of the story without a proper telling like the thorough treatment here. I don't know if I think Robin -would- cross his lines, but if he were to, it's indeed powerful.
Quite a story. Constructed, evidently at great length, and by necessity so. Redemption of Terra in a few quick words is simply a plot device- something that can be used, but not that can bear scrutiny as an integral part of the story without a proper telling like the thorough treatment here. I don't know if I think Robin -would- cross his lines, but if he were to, it's indeed powerful.
6/20/2005 c1 TTF
This is really nicely put. They should've aired this instead of the one the writers made. Good Job.
This is really nicely put. They should've aired this instead of the one the writers made. Good Job.
6/20/2005 c1 TTF
This is really nicely put. They should've aired this instead of the one the writers made. Good Job.
This is really nicely put. They should've aired this instead of the one the writers made. Good Job.
6/20/2005 c1 heyday451
you sir are a frickin' genius. As for whatever it may have taken for you to come to such a deep understanding of the human psyche I grieve for you, don't mix that up with pity, pity helps no one. But for the realization itself I am glad that such an understanding exists. For a while I thought I was the only one to think about some of this stuff. Just remember; only a jackass can change the world.
you sir are a frickin' genius. As for whatever it may have taken for you to come to such a deep understanding of the human psyche I grieve for you, don't mix that up with pity, pity helps no one. But for the realization itself I am glad that such an understanding exists. For a while I thought I was the only one to think about some of this stuff. Just remember; only a jackass can change the world.
6/20/2005 c1 dan
...that..was...AWSOME...i can't wait for your other fics.
...that..was...AWSOME...i can't wait for your other fics.
6/20/2005 c1 6Emmery
Oh my god. I am speecheless right now. This has to be one of the most beautifully written fan fictions I have EVER read. If only the show were more like your writing. It took me a while to read, but I just couldn't stop! This was mind numbingly brilliant. I'm putting you on an author watch for your next TT story. Beautiful work!
6EmmeryOh my god. I am speecheless right now. This has to be one of the most beautifully written fan fictions I have EVER read. If only the show were more like your writing. It took me a while to read, but I just couldn't stop! This was mind numbingly brilliant. I'm putting you on an author watch for your next TT story. Beautiful work!
6/19/2005 c1 16wordbearer
Holy mother of god. Just ouch... If this wasn't a fanfic, I'd be worried about your pschological state. Very dark, very direct, almost sick on many levels. If I wasn't payign close attention, I'd forget who was Slade and who was Robin... This is an AU without fear. Bravo. Bravo indeed. Keep up the good work. Write that anti-BB/Rae fic. I'll be here to review...
16wordbearerHoly mother of god. Just ouch... If this wasn't a fanfic, I'd be worried about your pschological state. Very dark, very direct, almost sick on many levels. If I wasn't payign close attention, I'd forget who was Slade and who was Robin... This is an AU without fear. Bravo. Bravo indeed. Keep up the good work. Write that anti-BB/Rae fic. I'll be here to review...
6/19/2005 c1 4PhantomWriter92
That was amazing. I don't think I've ever read something that beautifully written in my life. Amazing, mind-blowing, spectacular. It was deep, beautiful, fufilling, and rich in details. The true lesson she learned and the way Robin told it, was brilliantly put together. The surprises,and the action so well orchestrated. Their personalitites were perfect, exactly as I could ever imagine. I am stunned, you have created a masterpiece.
4PhantomWriter92That was amazing. I don't think I've ever read something that beautifully written in my life. Amazing, mind-blowing, spectacular. It was deep, beautiful, fufilling, and rich in details. The true lesson she learned and the way Robin told it, was brilliantly put together. The surprises,and the action so well orchestrated. Their personalitites were perfect, exactly as I could ever imagine. I am stunned, you have created a masterpiece.
6/19/2005 c1 76GuardianSoulBlade
This is a very interesting fic. Robin practically morphed into Batman, when it comes to brutality, but tough love is what Terra needed and this is a great alternate storyline that could have well happened. Ilike it. Very interesting.
76GuardianSoulBladeThis is a very interesting fic. Robin practically morphed into Batman, when it comes to brutality, but tough love is what Terra needed and this is a great alternate storyline that could have well happened. Ilike it. Very interesting.
6/19/2005 c1 morsmordre
That was mindblowingly good...I just loved both the physical and mental torture Robin inflicted on Terra (not that I'm a sadist or anything). Well written.
That was mindblowingly good...I just loved both the physical and mental torture Robin inflicted on Terra (not that I'm a sadist or anything). Well written.
6/18/2005 c1 linkinfreak1011
WOW. That.Was.AMAZING! Icant wait until the rest of the series comes out!
WOW. That.Was.AMAZING! Icant wait until the rest of the series comes out!