for Testing the Heart1/29/2008 c1 
3Etsuko An
Guess who?
I like this fic. I like the Miroku Sango drama.
Not to fond of the kagome inuyasha stuff. skip that. eww.
I don't really like that pairing.
BUt good job, Kone-chan.
Yours Truly...
3Etsuko AnGuess who?
I like this fic. I like the Miroku Sango drama.
Not to fond of the kagome inuyasha stuff. skip that. eww.
I don't really like that pairing.
BUt good job, Kone-chan.
Yours Truly...
2/4/2006 c1 6Coffee-Rules
My God!
You have got to keep writing!
I have finished my fourth chapter already and my story is 3 times as long as Sisters in Time!
You have to rely try harder!
6Coffee-RulesMy God!
You have got to keep writing!
I have finished my fourth chapter already and my story is 3 times as long as Sisters in Time!
You have to rely try harder!
10/19/2005 c1 hpfan142
o interesting interesting. i agree with koneji. need more description. not alot but just a bit more ^-^ muhahaha i have spoken
kass AKA fire AKA st.kimmy
o interesting interesting. i agree with koneji. need more description. not alot but just a bit more ^-^ muhahaha i have spoken
kass AKA fire AKA st.kimmy
6/20/2005 c1 3Lyra the Heretic
Details are good in moderate amounts, just like candy! Good story so far, I think you should have Miroku and Inuyasha get into a fight, and Inuyasha say he had no idea why he said that Kag didn't matter because he loves her, and Miroku's SO surprised that he has to go tell Sango, and Inuyasha follows him to stop him, and they get there and Kags there, and Mir tells, so Inu tells. OR... Kag could find out about what Inu said, and be all boohoo (Mir told her) and she goes to Sangos room but Inu andMir are there too saying "He loves you!" "Oh yeah? well HE loves HER!" inadvertantly pointing to Kag, who is now standing in the doorway. says Inu, "I-I DO NOT!" then Kag starts crying, ang Inu notices her... y'all sot out the rest, if you like angst, pick the first one, you know, she finds out what he said later, and gets upset. that choice might be fluffier, too. Sorry, I'm probly nnoying you. well, good story!
3Lyra the HereticDetails are good in moderate amounts, just like candy! Good story so far, I think you should have Miroku and Inuyasha get into a fight, and Inuyasha say he had no idea why he said that Kag didn't matter because he loves her, and Miroku's SO surprised that he has to go tell Sango, and Inuyasha follows him to stop him, and they get there and Kags there, and Mir tells, so Inu tells. OR... Kag could find out about what Inu said, and be all boohoo (Mir told her) and she goes to Sangos room but Inu andMir are there too saying "He loves you!" "Oh yeah? well HE loves HER!" inadvertantly pointing to Kag, who is now standing in the doorway. says Inu, "I-I DO NOT!" then Kag starts crying, ang Inu notices her... y'all sot out the rest, if you like angst, pick the first one, you know, she finds out what he said later, and gets upset. that choice might be fluffier, too. Sorry, I'm probly nnoying you. well, good story!
6/20/2005 c1 darknessgurl
It is way cool so far. For the first chapter.
It is way cool so far. For the first chapter.
6/20/2005 c1 7RazzyPop
I love this story so far! No offense, ChiChi, but Koneji was right: there's supposed to be more description. I think I know what I'm talking about-I've been reading chapter books since 1st grade! AND writing stories! Yup, I'm quite the bookworm. Lol. Anyway, awesome chapter. I really really really really really really really really really really really really hope that you update soon! Oh, and if you're wondering about all the "really's", I'm always super hyper, even when I just wake up! (which I just did)
Anyway, update soon PLEASE!
Love,
Kelcie aka Razzy the Beheaded Chicken OR Razz the Spazz
7RazzyPopI love this story so far! No offense, ChiChi, but Koneji was right: there's supposed to be more description. I think I know what I'm talking about-I've been reading chapter books since 1st grade! AND writing stories! Yup, I'm quite the bookworm. Lol. Anyway, awesome chapter. I really really really really really really really really really really really really hope that you update soon! Oh, and if you're wondering about all the "really's", I'm always super hyper, even when I just wake up! (which I just did)
Anyway, update soon PLEASE!
Love,
Kelcie aka Razzy the Beheaded Chicken OR Razz the Spazz
6/20/2005 c1 InuB
ohh i not thatt bad...well maybe a am so if you don't update soon u shall feel my wrath muhahahahaha..(cough)Er...this is awkward..bye.
ohh i not thatt bad...well maybe a am so if you don't update soon u shall feel my wrath muhahahahaha..(cough)Er...this is awkward..bye.
6/19/2005 c1 InvictusCanisDeus
Your story is fantastic the way it is, I can't wait to read the rest of it.
Your story is fantastic the way it is, I can't wait to read the rest of it.
6/19/2005 c1 5fruity.tooty
A... update soon. Thats all I can say. But It's so depressing when you put kikyo and Inuyasha together like that. Stop doing that. Keep on writting I want to see what happens. But untill then I'll be looking for the story.
P.S
I like the long chapters.
Sincerely,
Sakura day spa
5fruity.tootyA... update soon. Thats all I can say. But It's so depressing when you put kikyo and Inuyasha together like that. Stop doing that. Keep on writting I want to see what happens. But untill then I'll be looking for the story.
P.S
I like the long chapters.
Sincerely,
Sakura day spa