for Pitfalls of the Palantir12/15/2012 c2 KatiKates
I've read this story a few times, it never gets old!
One of the many lines that just crack me up is,
"The wind gently ruffled his hair, then thought better of it and set it back in its usual perfect position." Love it!
Great job with this story! I love it!
I've read this story a few times, it never gets old!
One of the many lines that just crack me up is,
"The wind gently ruffled his hair, then thought better of it and set it back in its usual perfect position." Love it!
Great job with this story! I love it!
9/1/2012 c5 koba
I had jst found your sequel and had to start from the beginning . Orange tang, the drink of star sailors and astronauts. Very cute!
I had jst found your sequel and had to start from the beginning . Orange tang, the drink of star sailors and astronauts. Very cute!
7/22/2012 c6 
1Glory Bee
Inglor's conversation just makes me smile, his mild sarcasm is a big hit with me. :)
1Glory BeeInglor's conversation just makes me smile, his mild sarcasm is a big hit with me. :)
4/26/2012 c36 Lilo
Totally loved it ...One of my favorites...Have you read In the house of Elrond?(of Aeawen )Also a favorite.Loves her work and yours stories about Inglor and Haleth. Please keep on...
Totally loved it ...One of my favorites...Have you read In the house of Elrond?(of Aeawen )Also a favorite.Loves her work and yours stories about Inglor and Haleth. Please keep on...
12/4/2010 c36 Freezeazy
So does he love her back or not? AAAH! XD
So does he love her back or not? AAAH! XD
10/17/2010 c36 14The Lauderdale
Hail Lalaeth:
I was reading this story preparatory to tackling "Til Death Do Us Part" for the MEFAs. It's a good thing I wasn't eating peas or I would have sent them flying many times over. From furious mortal staking down oblivious Elf in the path of a lemming migration, to the fabulous bouncing palantir of Amul Sul, this has been a wonderful day of reading. All laughter aside, I came to really care about both Haleth and Inglor. Moments of real poignancy amid the madcap antics made them both rounded and real. I'll be reading "The Finder" now before I finally tackle TDDUP, but I just had to review before I went any further.
Thank you for writing this! It has been way too much fun.
14The LauderdaleHail Lalaeth:
I was reading this story preparatory to tackling "Til Death Do Us Part" for the MEFAs. It's a good thing I wasn't eating peas or I would have sent them flying many times over. From furious mortal staking down oblivious Elf in the path of a lemming migration, to the fabulous bouncing palantir of Amul Sul, this has been a wonderful day of reading. All laughter aside, I came to really care about both Haleth and Inglor. Moments of real poignancy amid the madcap antics made them both rounded and real. I'll be reading "The Finder" now before I finally tackle TDDUP, but I just had to review before I went any further.
Thank you for writing this! It has been way too much fun.
10/8/2010 c36 Anonymous
Easily the best fan fic I've ever read.
Easily the best fan fic I've ever read.
7/25/2010 c36 3Justified Assassin
I adored this story. Your writing is very mature, and it's obvious that you have skill. I loved how the development of the characters lasted all throughout the story, and I loved the fact that the romance developed throughout the whole story as well. Although I desperately wanted Inglor and Haleth's romance to develop further than it did, I'm glad that you didn't end the story with them falling into each others arms and professing their undying love towards each other. Anyway, I've already started reading the sequel to Pitfalls of the Palantir, and I'm having just as much fun reading that as I had reading this one. I anxiously await your updates!
3Justified AssassinI adored this story. Your writing is very mature, and it's obvious that you have skill. I loved how the development of the characters lasted all throughout the story, and I loved the fact that the romance developed throughout the whole story as well. Although I desperately wanted Inglor and Haleth's romance to develop further than it did, I'm glad that you didn't end the story with them falling into each others arms and professing their undying love towards each other. Anyway, I've already started reading the sequel to Pitfalls of the Palantir, and I'm having just as much fun reading that as I had reading this one. I anxiously await your updates!
6/15/2010 c36 teacalm
So thrilled to come across your series. I read, reread, and reread my favorite parts of this story. I love to speculate how Inglor and Haleth are going to end up together. I almost wish that it will be good ending, even in your sequel to this story, but I'll take any ending. Your stories are definitely one of the best written ones in fanfiction. It makes me want to read LOTR and Silmarillion over and over again. Thanks so much for taking the time to write.
So thrilled to come across your series. I read, reread, and reread my favorite parts of this story. I love to speculate how Inglor and Haleth are going to end up together. I almost wish that it will be good ending, even in your sequel to this story, but I'll take any ending. Your stories are definitely one of the best written ones in fanfiction. It makes me want to read LOTR and Silmarillion over and over again. Thanks so much for taking the time to write.
8/27/2009 c36 3Raina Meldamiriel
i absolutely loved it and i hope that haleth and inglor end up together. i think they would make a fantastic couple ^^ though i do wonder if you where hinting that haleth might be part elf , for although she ages you have made hints like her being able to communicate though mind speak with inglor and theirs something else but i cant remember it right now lol ^^ i can hope though lol , i can't wait to read more i hope you do a sequel , in fact i shall go and check now ^^ , so if you havent i hope that you consider doing one ^^
3Raina Meldamirieli absolutely loved it and i hope that haleth and inglor end up together. i think they would make a fantastic couple ^^ though i do wonder if you where hinting that haleth might be part elf , for although she ages you have made hints like her being able to communicate though mind speak with inglor and theirs something else but i cant remember it right now lol ^^ i can hope though lol , i can't wait to read more i hope you do a sequel , in fact i shall go and check now ^^ , so if you havent i hope that you consider doing one ^^
6/22/2009 c36 22WindSurfBabe
I have placed this story in my Favourites. How could I not? It is so moving, so funny and bittersweet... I loved the characters you have created, their tempers, flaws and qualities. I loved the interaction between them and, as I read on, I started to feel as though they were not only two creatures from an author's imagination, but also friends of mine. This is why I felt sad when I finished the story; but its place amongst my Favourites will allow me to read it over and over again with the same delight.
I laughed at Inglor's supposed cluelessness and Haleth's stubbornness. I hoped, as I read the last chapter before the epilogue, that she may find the courage to tell him how she feels, and that he might feel the same... But it's just as well that the story ended this way; we can imagine the ending we prefer. I, personally, like to think that Haleth would shout it out in a moment of anger and, after a moment of bewilderment, Inglor would make her understand that he felt the same... But that's just me, a hopeless romantic.
Thank you so much for this story! I wouldn't say that it changed my life, but it certainly brightened by day, and that's a lot already. Thank you, thank you!
Windsurfbabe
22WindSurfBabeI have placed this story in my Favourites. How could I not? It is so moving, so funny and bittersweet... I loved the characters you have created, their tempers, flaws and qualities. I loved the interaction between them and, as I read on, I started to feel as though they were not only two creatures from an author's imagination, but also friends of mine. This is why I felt sad when I finished the story; but its place amongst my Favourites will allow me to read it over and over again with the same delight.
I laughed at Inglor's supposed cluelessness and Haleth's stubbornness. I hoped, as I read the last chapter before the epilogue, that she may find the courage to tell him how she feels, and that he might feel the same... But it's just as well that the story ended this way; we can imagine the ending we prefer. I, personally, like to think that Haleth would shout it out in a moment of anger and, after a moment of bewilderment, Inglor would make her understand that he felt the same... But that's just me, a hopeless romantic.
Thank you so much for this story! I wouldn't say that it changed my life, but it certainly brightened by day, and that's a lot already. Thank you, thank you!
Windsurfbabe
1/10/2009 c36 10Clodia
This is fantastic. The characterisation is excellent and the references are subtle enough to make me feel smart when I occasionally catch them as they flash past. Also thanks for the summary, for when I didn't. Very entertaining. Thank you!
10ClodiaThis is fantastic. The characterisation is excellent and the references are subtle enough to make me feel smart when I occasionally catch them as they flash past. Also thanks for the summary, for when I didn't. Very entertaining. Thank you!
1/4/2009 c36 FlashingLight
You can't just end it like that?
What about Haleth and Inglor? You can't just leave us hanging! That would be too mean!
Please say there's going to be a sequel?
x
You can't just end it like that?
What about Haleth and Inglor? You can't just leave us hanging! That would be too mean!
Please say there's going to be a sequel?
x
1/2/2009 c36 catinthehat007
liked it and thought it was very amusing. it drove me crazy not knowing what happened in the end but i think you made a wise choice ending it open like you did, hope to read more from you :)
liked it and thought it was very amusing. it drove me crazy not knowing what happened in the end but i think you made a wise choice ending it open like you did, hope to read more from you :)