for Touch Me Not8/22/2005 c1 
10Shoomy2003
YOU.
YES. YOU.
YOU BETTER WRITE PROFESSIONALLY SOMEDAY.
OR I WILL...
HUNT YOU DOWN AND MAKE YOU.
YES. YOU.
YOU BETTER.
BECAUSE THIS IS GOOD **.
10Shoomy2003YOU.
YES. YOU.
YOU BETTER WRITE PROFESSIONALLY SOMEDAY.
OR I WILL...
HUNT YOU DOWN AND MAKE YOU.
YES. YOU.
YOU BETTER.
BECAUSE THIS IS GOOD **.
8/9/2005 c1 15Lavender Valentine
I never, ever, thought I'd enjoy a Miroku/Kagome pairing, much less find one that would make me cry. This was absolutely beautiful.
15Lavender ValentineI never, ever, thought I'd enjoy a Miroku/Kagome pairing, much less find one that would make me cry. This was absolutely beautiful.
7/29/2005 c1 32DreamScene
so sad, but even when weaknesses are exposed, there are chances to be redeemed.
great story. i really enjoyed reading it. hope to see more from you.
32DreamSceneso sad, but even when weaknesses are exposed, there are chances to be redeemed.
great story. i really enjoyed reading it. hope to see more from you.
7/24/2005 c1 40Micayasha
Wow. I loved this. LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED and... well, loved. (*Adds to Fav Stories*)
40MicayashaWow. I loved this. LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED and... well, loved. (*Adds to Fav Stories*)
7/19/2005 c1 3Gabi Web
Very beautiful stuff. I don't really care if this is counted as a songfic, because I LOVE songfics. (I had one deleted from the site and am still bitter.) Nicely done.
3Gabi WebVery beautiful stuff. I don't really care if this is counted as a songfic, because I LOVE songfics. (I had one deleted from the site and am still bitter.) Nicely done.
7/18/2005 c1 13Elementary Magpie
Oh, this is beautiful. Sad and desperate and somehow completely believable. Thank you!
13Elementary MagpieOh, this is beautiful. Sad and desperate and somehow completely believable. Thank you!
7/7/2005 c1 Tatsinda
HOLY CRAP ON WHEELS, THAT IS A GREAT FANFIC! And a GREAT short story. Man, it gave me chills, it made me squeak, it was throughly entertaining and fabulously deep and effective. THANK YOU, YOU ROCK!
HOLY CRAP ON WHEELS, THAT IS A GREAT FANFIC! And a GREAT short story. Man, it gave me chills, it made me squeak, it was throughly entertaining and fabulously deep and effective. THANK YOU, YOU ROCK!
7/1/2005 c1 random reader
that totally rocked my socks off.
that totally rocked my socks off.
6/30/2005 c1 25Duzzie
And yet another great succes. I love Miroku/Kagome one shots, and this one was just SO DAMN GOOD. Thank you very much.
25DuzzieAnd yet another great succes. I love Miroku/Kagome one shots, and this one was just SO DAMN GOOD. Thank you very much.
6/29/2005 c1 27Lucinda the Maid
After reading the astounding "Air", I visited your profile and found this ficcie. I'll be honest; I didn't want to read it. Being the Miroku/Sango supporter that I am, and, before this fic, never being able to read a MirKag without x-ing off the window halfway through, it took a really hard kick in the @$$ on my part for me to say "To heck!" and read it. And, as with "Air" I was not disappointed. (I think from now on with alternative pairing fics, I should completely ignore that little voice in my head that screams "Canon, damn you! Canon!")
Your use of symbolism in all of your fics (I have read others; I chose to review only this one, though, because, strangely enough, it was my favorite) is excellent. How ironic that Miroku, the butt-groping, womanizing monk, manages to restrain himself for so long from touching Kagome... and then giving in. The image of the touch-me-not was great; yes, Miroku and Kagome "touched", and yet, they're still finding a way to survive through the pain they're both going through. At least that's my interpretation. My brain works in weird ways. Kagome seemed a little despondent in this story, contadictory to her typical "genki" self, but it can be excused. All in all, wonderful. Beautiful work. ((bows))
27Lucinda the MaidAfter reading the astounding "Air", I visited your profile and found this ficcie. I'll be honest; I didn't want to read it. Being the Miroku/Sango supporter that I am, and, before this fic, never being able to read a MirKag without x-ing off the window halfway through, it took a really hard kick in the @$$ on my part for me to say "To heck!" and read it. And, as with "Air" I was not disappointed. (I think from now on with alternative pairing fics, I should completely ignore that little voice in my head that screams "Canon, damn you! Canon!")
Your use of symbolism in all of your fics (I have read others; I chose to review only this one, though, because, strangely enough, it was my favorite) is excellent. How ironic that Miroku, the butt-groping, womanizing monk, manages to restrain himself for so long from touching Kagome... and then giving in. The image of the touch-me-not was great; yes, Miroku and Kagome "touched", and yet, they're still finding a way to survive through the pain they're both going through. At least that's my interpretation. My brain works in weird ways. Kagome seemed a little despondent in this story, contadictory to her typical "genki" self, but it can be excused. All in all, wonderful. Beautiful work. ((bows))
6/29/2005 c1 9Greenaleydis
Wow. This story was so unique and brilliant... I have never read anything like this before. It's like, you are literally a genius.
PLEASE keep writing more like this, if you can.
-Amu-
p.s. The pairing was great... I have only read one other Miroku and Kagome one. And the way you wrote this made you just understand what was going on.
9GreenaleydisWow. This story was so unique and brilliant... I have never read anything like this before. It's like, you are literally a genius.
PLEASE keep writing more like this, if you can.
-Amu-
p.s. The pairing was great... I have only read one other Miroku and Kagome one. And the way you wrote this made you just understand what was going on.
6/27/2005 c1 Smaragd
A Miroku/Kagome eh? Interesting...
I don't think that this story is a violation of FFNet policy, but hey, that's just the humble opinion of one reviewer.
This story is so...amazing and original. Quite 'brilliant' is what it is. I have never seen such a unique way of writing a songfic. Writers mostly write a lyric, write a paragraph, write a lyric, write a paragraph. Great Job! -_^
I can't wait for the next chapter of Butterfly." It's surely going to be as good as the newest chapter of "Mobius."-and this one-shot)
A Miroku/Kagome eh? Interesting...
I don't think that this story is a violation of FFNet policy, but hey, that's just the humble opinion of one reviewer.
This story is so...amazing and original. Quite 'brilliant' is what it is. I have never seen such a unique way of writing a songfic. Writers mostly write a lyric, write a paragraph, write a lyric, write a paragraph. Great Job! -_^
I can't wait for the next chapter of Butterfly." It's surely going to be as good as the newest chapter of "Mobius."-and this one-shot)