for One shot for a couple of friends9/1/2008 c6 iheartKaiMaxlovely
I have a wee suggestion for you...UPDATE! Please get to the rescue part! If you could see me, I'd be on my hands and knees right about now...
I have a wee suggestion for you...UPDATE! Please get to the rescue part! If you could see me, I'd be on my hands and knees right about now...
8/29/2008 c7 Jay
When will the next chaptor be up i love this story
When will the next chaptor be up i love this story
4/23/2007 c6 
27princessezzy
Suggestion:UPDARE! Kai has to go rescue Max of course! please don't keep us in suspense!
27princessezzySuggestion:UPDARE! Kai has to go rescue Max of course! please don't keep us in suspense!
11/8/2006 c6 14cajun-beauty
These chapters are really short, this is really good but i think it would be improved with length and I want to see Boris is gonna do to max...
14cajun-beautyThese chapters are really short, this is really good but i think it would be improved with length and I want to see Boris is gonna do to max...
10/9/2006 c6 Kayla
update soon please!
update soon please!
7/6/2006 c6 10Max-4-ever
nu he got max! good chapters but most of them could be longer and you dont have to put the last chapter in with the next one. and if you was going to do that then you could have just made all three of thoes chapters into one. this isnt a flame just some friendly advice.
Max: great now im going to be used.
Kai: . damn you boris!
Me: Plz continue!
10Max-4-evernu he got max! good chapters but most of them could be longer and you dont have to put the last chapter in with the next one. and if you was going to do that then you could have just made all three of thoes chapters into one. this isnt a flame just some friendly advice.
Max: great now im going to be used.
Kai: . damn you boris!
Me: Plz continue!