for Somewhere I Belong III11/1/2012 c19 
26That Gryffindor Flame
I. Absolutely. Loved. This.
I started reading the first one in the trilogy 11 o clock last night, i finished the second at 5 this morning, and finished this one was 4:20 in the afternoon. I have become EXTREMELY attacted to these characters! They are amazing and you are an amazing writer. I loved how you made Harry's pain last through all three novels, but how it only really came to closure once Draco was his brother. LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT. You are going to be a professional author right? Because if you aren't, I am SO disappointed. Congratulations on the best Harry Potter fanfiction I have EVER read in my entire life, and I read a damn lot of it. I hope you contuine to write in the future and thank you for allowing me to read this amazement :D
p.s this was sort of a review for all three novels :D
26That Gryffindor FlameI. Absolutely. Loved. This.
I started reading the first one in the trilogy 11 o clock last night, i finished the second at 5 this morning, and finished this one was 4:20 in the afternoon. I have become EXTREMELY attacted to these characters! They are amazing and you are an amazing writer. I loved how you made Harry's pain last through all three novels, but how it only really came to closure once Draco was his brother. LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT. You are going to be a professional author right? Because if you aren't, I am SO disappointed. Congratulations on the best Harry Potter fanfiction I have EVER read in my entire life, and I read a damn lot of it. I hope you contuine to write in the future and thank you for allowing me to read this amazement :D
p.s this was sort of a review for all three novels :D
10/25/2012 c17 beta
You say in this chapter that Draco had never before been to the Burrow, but he'd actually spent the night there on a cot, in a room with Harry and Ron. Also, after everyone gets to headquarters, you fail to mention Jenson or give him a cup of tea when everyone else gets one.
You say in this chapter that Draco had never before been to the Burrow, but he'd actually spent the night there on a cot, in a room with Harry and Ron. Also, after everyone gets to headquarters, you fail to mention Jenson or give him a cup of tea when everyone else gets one.
10/25/2012 c16 Guest
I can't imagine why in the world Harry would worry about Zane being loose, since Zane is always loose. There was no reason to chase him into the woods as if he were a domestic pet instead of an independent sentient being who has taken care of himself for years. There was a comment from Sirius about how he can relate to Zane's protective attitude. Zane actually seems 10 times smarter and emotionally mature and stable than Sirius.
I can't imagine why in the world Harry would worry about Zane being loose, since Zane is always loose. There was no reason to chase him into the woods as if he were a domestic pet instead of an independent sentient being who has taken care of himself for years. There was a comment from Sirius about how he can relate to Zane's protective attitude. Zane actually seems 10 times smarter and emotionally mature and stable than Sirius.
10/25/2012 c14 guest
It's interesting that in your characterization of Harry, he constantly lies throughout all three stories, and has no redeeming features whatsoever. He has had a traumatic life, and it is no wonder that people pity him and want to help him, but I can not see any reason that anyone would actually like him or want him to be their friend.
It's interesting that in your characterization of Harry, he constantly lies throughout all three stories, and has no redeeming features whatsoever. He has had a traumatic life, and it is no wonder that people pity him and want to help him, but I can not see any reason that anyone would actually like him or want him to be their friend.
8/16/2012 c19 6Lilah the Artist
This is really a wonderful story!
I like sad stories and Severitus and when Draco changes to the light side. This ff combines these things and I love it!
The only thing I noticed is that there are a few tiny plot-mistakes, like that you once wrote that Draco had never been at the Burrow when he was there earlier. Those mistakes aren't important at all and I doubt that many people even notice them but I wanted to tell you so you can decide on your own what you do with them.
6Lilah the ArtistThis is really a wonderful story!
I like sad stories and Severitus and when Draco changes to the light side. This ff combines these things and I love it!
The only thing I noticed is that there are a few tiny plot-mistakes, like that you once wrote that Draco had never been at the Burrow when he was there earlier. Those mistakes aren't important at all and I doubt that many people even notice them but I wanted to tell you so you can decide on your own what you do with them.
5/21/2012 c19 1Lw117149
I just finished the entire series I loved it felt bad for harry and draco and sev. But I liked how you incorporated everyone and I llo forward to your next works... *S*
1Lw117149I just finished the entire series I loved it felt bad for harry and draco and sev. But I liked how you incorporated everyone and I llo forward to your next works... *S*
3/18/2012 c19 SafaiaFureia
Thank you! That was a wonderfully thought out and written set of stories, even if they were painful at times as well. I love how you ended up having the people Harry ended up closest to be those that, with the exception of Voldemort, were his worst enemies. I read in your profile that you were thinking of starting a IV, I honestly dont know if I want you to or not lol. On one hand I would love to see the storyline continue at least till the end of thier 7th year but on the other hand this really was a great spot to leave off at. It would be interesting to see how Draco settles back in given the other Slytherines reaction of his not accepting the dark mark and Voldemorts death, but, I dont know if I want to find that out more or leave it as it is.
I truely enjoy your writting and am glad to see that you are not dissing yourself nearly as much as you were when writting the other set. Please keep up the good work! I noticed you havent written anything in a while and I hope that you will write some more again at some point.
Thank you! That was a wonderfully thought out and written set of stories, even if they were painful at times as well. I love how you ended up having the people Harry ended up closest to be those that, with the exception of Voldemort, were his worst enemies. I read in your profile that you were thinking of starting a IV, I honestly dont know if I want you to or not lol. On one hand I would love to see the storyline continue at least till the end of thier 7th year but on the other hand this really was a great spot to leave off at. It would be interesting to see how Draco settles back in given the other Slytherines reaction of his not accepting the dark mark and Voldemorts death, but, I dont know if I want to find that out more or leave it as it is.
I truely enjoy your writting and am glad to see that you are not dissing yourself nearly as much as you were when writting the other set. Please keep up the good work! I noticed you havent written anything in a while and I hope that you will write some more again at some point.
12/4/2011 c2 kandaz
So before Harry didn't have a door to his room but this chapter Harry is injured and Snape leaves his room then "He pushed open the partially opened door and stepped inside." Then it says: "holding the door open with his hand"
~KZ~
So before Harry didn't have a door to his room but this chapter Harry is injured and Snape leaves his room then "He pushed open the partially opened door and stepped inside." Then it says: "holding the door open with his hand"
~KZ~
12/2/2011 c18 DreamLuna
Ohmigod. This chapter was perfect. Mostly because I love your version of Draco and he kind of plays a starring role here although in a bit of a disturbing way. I liked this a lot Thank you and I can't wait to read the last chapter. :)
Ohmigod. This chapter was perfect. Mostly because I love your version of Draco and he kind of plays a starring role here although in a bit of a disturbing way. I liked this a lot Thank you and I can't wait to read the last chapter. :)
8/24/2011 c11 2Celevon Teardust
So. Much. ANGST! blurgh... this kind of mad me sick to my stomach and cry my eyes out. I love the fic alot but I think I'm on angst overload... that's never happened before...
2Celevon TeardustSo. Much. ANGST! blurgh... this kind of mad me sick to my stomach and cry my eyes out. I love the fic alot but I think I'm on angst overload... that's never happened before...
7/30/2011 c17 Blonde604
I love the SIB stories, you've done an excellent job! I've actually read them multiple times. Anyways I don't know why I never noticed before but in this chapter when Harry, Draco, and Jensen go to Ron's house when Snape Manor is being attacked you say that Draco has never set foot in the Burrow. However in Chapter 7 he went with Harry to the Burrow and spent the night. I was just wondering if I misunderstood something. Sorry if others have already pointed this out to you. I just wanted to make sure you knew. :)
I love the SIB stories, you've done an excellent job! I've actually read them multiple times. Anyways I don't know why I never noticed before but in this chapter when Harry, Draco, and Jensen go to Ron's house when Snape Manor is being attacked you say that Draco has never set foot in the Burrow. However in Chapter 7 he went with Harry to the Burrow and spent the night. I was just wondering if I misunderstood something. Sorry if others have already pointed this out to you. I just wanted to make sure you knew. :)