for Dark Mask of Truth9/1/2005 c1 thisaccounthasbeendeactivated
I very much like this story, and I would be very much like to be your beta.
reitashnehelena
I very much like this story, and I would be very much like to be your beta.
reitashnehelena
8/14/2005 c1 
29FerPotter
Hi Jessica! I just read the e-mail you sent to WIKTT and had to review. Nice first chapter! Your story is a promissing one. Keep the rest of it like the first chapter and it will be a classic.
I'll be waiting for an update!
FerPotter
29FerPotterHi Jessica! I just read the e-mail you sent to WIKTT and had to review. Nice first chapter! Your story is a promissing one. Keep the rest of it like the first chapter and it will be a classic.
I'll be waiting for an update!
FerPotter
8/13/2005 c1 1thesunsout.honey
Sounds really interesting. I like reading other people's theory's about Snape. One error at the end though, you wrote 'hard pill to shallow' instead of swallow.
Keep writing!
1thesunsout.honeySounds really interesting. I like reading other people's theory's about Snape. One error at the end though, you wrote 'hard pill to shallow' instead of swallow.
Keep writing!
8/11/2005 c1 firewall
Keep on writing! I'm enjoying the story and the storyline. I think you are wise to ask for a beta. It's always good to have someone edit your work. You may want them to go over this chapter when you find one. I'm looking forward to the new chapter soon.
Keep on writing! I'm enjoying the story and the storyline. I think you are wise to ask for a beta. It's always good to have someone edit your work. You may want them to go over this chapter when you find one. I'm looking forward to the new chapter soon.
8/10/2005 c1 Rose
Well you have me intrested. ^_^ I do hope you'll continue with the story. Great first chapter.
Well you have me intrested. ^_^ I do hope you'll continue with the story. Great first chapter.
8/9/2005 c1 June W
This is a great start! Hermione as co-head of Slytherin? Wonder how the students will like that... Umm, is Severus really dead, or will he appear later in this fic? Has Harry ever put his memory into a Pensieve, of the night Dumbledore died - i.e., does anyone know that Dumbledore offered to help Draco? Did Draco survive the war? When is the next chapter coming?
This is a great start! Hermione as co-head of Slytherin? Wonder how the students will like that... Umm, is Severus really dead, or will he appear later in this fic? Has Harry ever put his memory into a Pensieve, of the night Dumbledore died - i.e., does anyone know that Dumbledore offered to help Draco? Did Draco survive the war? When is the next chapter coming?
8/9/2005 c1 1msenterprise
Loved the premise of this story. If you are still in need of a beta, please let me know. I'd love to do it! Just email me and let me know.
1msenterpriseLoved the premise of this story. If you are still in need of a beta, please let me know. I'd love to do it! Just email me and let me know.