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21twistyguru
Excellent story! I'm looking forward to reading the sequel, and watching Harry (with Imhotep's help) squish Voldie like a bug.
21twistyguruExcellent story! I'm looking forward to reading the sequel, and watching Harry (with Imhotep's help) squish Voldie like a bug.
4/27 c28 1bookdaughter
This is awesome. I love erasing cross overs, but this one takes the cake. You are a fantastic writer that is great at combining these two genre. Please updated soon!
1bookdaughterThis is awesome. I love erasing cross overs, but this one takes the cake. You are a fantastic writer that is great at combining these two genre. Please updated soon!
12/20/2012 c3 Anamcara-Quinntanna
Like your story. I to have some tats and you are correct it is the bone thats the problem. When I had mine done it reminded me of the second degree burns that I had gotten when I was out in the sun too long. then it was just annoying because it itched all the time it was healing.
Like your story. I to have some tats and you are correct it is the bone thats the problem. When I had mine done it reminded me of the second degree burns that I had gotten when I was out in the sun too long. then it was just annoying because it itched all the time it was healing.
11/24/2012 c28 Mango Supreme
good god what a way to end the story.
but a very quality piece of fanfic, good job. :D
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this
good god what a way to end the story.
but a very quality piece of fanfic, good job. :D
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this
8/2/2012 c28 Notableword
This could really have been great, This new Harry is quite interesting though he isn't truly explored in the story.
My main problem with this story is that it primarily seems like a rehash of The mummy returns and the HP books, the times where you could have provided truly original content (harrys upbringing/training as a medjai and the introductory stage of hogwarts) are completely skipped, there also seems to be no character development at all, every character is exactly the same from start to finish.
Hopefully you will perceive my review as a critique rather than a flame, since that is what it was meant to be.
Cheers
This could really have been great, This new Harry is quite interesting though he isn't truly explored in the story.
My main problem with this story is that it primarily seems like a rehash of The mummy returns and the HP books, the times where you could have provided truly original content (harrys upbringing/training as a medjai and the introductory stage of hogwarts) are completely skipped, there also seems to be no character development at all, every character is exactly the same from start to finish.
Hopefully you will perceive my review as a critique rather than a flame, since that is what it was meant to be.
Cheers