for The Crow Innocent Eyes1/11/2006 c2 
2enternal fire
he he he, well I see wut u mean when u wrote in the intro that u've become serious. I'm sometimes like that wit my stories. I don't see wut u did wrong, but then again crow is a movie or in this case since it is under comic, either way is a distant memory to me now. anyways ur discriptive details are very good I don't see the bad things about it. At first I thought the officer was smoking until I read further more that his house burned down. isn't that screwy. wow dedcated the story to ur parents that's some thing.
2enternal firehe he he, well I see wut u mean when u wrote in the intro that u've become serious. I'm sometimes like that wit my stories. I don't see wut u did wrong, but then again crow is a movie or in this case since it is under comic, either way is a distant memory to me now. anyways ur discriptive details are very good I don't see the bad things about it. At first I thought the officer was smoking until I read further more that his house burned down. isn't that screwy. wow dedcated the story to ur parents that's some thing.
12/22/2005 c2 5RhythmOfTheWarDrum
Very good so far. I'm writing a Crow fanfic as well...then again I'm writing for several other movies and I can never seem to finish them. BTW, what is the fourth one called? I've either seen the 4th or 3rd...can't remember...anyways...please continue!
5RhythmOfTheWarDrumVery good so far. I'm writing a Crow fanfic as well...then again I'm writing for several other movies and I can never seem to finish them. BTW, what is the fourth one called? I've either seen the 4th or 3rd...can't remember...anyways...please continue!