for Close Calls7/18/2010 c12 
8AnimeRoxx
I hope you finish this story soon. You haven't updated since '06 and now it's '10. Message me and tell me what's up.
8AnimeRoxxI hope you finish this story soon. You haven't updated since '06 and now it's '10. Message me and tell me what's up.
10/11/2009 c1 Sarah
The story itself is good, but the lack of spaces in between paragraphs burns my eyes. @_@
The story itself is good, but the lack of spaces in between paragraphs burns my eyes. @_@
6/11/2009 c9 PrincessofNyx
I've only read a little but but the first 8 chap. ( I believe) need to be redone, the writing is fine, it's just that the format is rather squished together and needs to be redone. But otherwise it seems as though this is a great story
I've only read a little but but the first 8 chap. ( I believe) need to be redone, the writing is fine, it's just that the format is rather squished together and needs to be redone. But otherwise it seems as though this is a great story
2/28/2006 c12 2Muneca-de-trapo
i like this story alot so i'm adding it to my favorites! i'll be waiting for the next chapter.
2Muneca-de-trapoi like this story alot so i'm adding it to my favorites! i'll be waiting for the next chapter.
2/27/2006 c1 3manzanita
The summary of this story looks good but I can't read the story. The lack of paragraphs makes my eyes cross after reading a few lines. Please start a new paragraph when somebody speaks it makes everything easier to understand. I look forward to being able to read your story soon, I hope.
3manzanitaThe summary of this story looks good but I can't read the story. The lack of paragraphs makes my eyes cross after reading a few lines. Please start a new paragraph when somebody speaks it makes everything easier to understand. I look forward to being able to read your story soon, I hope.
1/25/2006 c11 phantomshadowdragon
Cool. What about everyone else who's upstairs? Are Danny's parents going to find out that the ghost stuff is off and turn it back on before Danny can get the plan started? Or maybe some ghosts try to attack while he's asleep? Or try to kidnap him then exspose him the next day? Just giving some ideas.:)
Cool. What about everyone else who's upstairs? Are Danny's parents going to find out that the ghost stuff is off and turn it back on before Danny can get the plan started? Or maybe some ghosts try to attack while he's asleep? Or try to kidnap him then exspose him the next day? Just giving some ideas.:)
1/25/2006 c1 phantomshadowdragon
Why didn't Danny tell the people about Vlad being half ghost? Also what happened to Wulf? I like Wulf he's in my top 3 favorite characters of DP.
Why didn't Danny tell the people about Vlad being half ghost? Also what happened to Wulf? I like Wulf he's in my top 3 favorite characters of DP.
1/24/2006 c5 phantomshadowdragon
You forgot to put in what the ghosts wre fighting over to do to Danny. You wrote "cool ghosts fighting over who would me!" I put the word kill in the blank betwen "would" and "me".
You forgot to put in what the ghosts wre fighting over to do to Danny. You wrote "cool ghosts fighting over who would me!" I put the word kill in the blank betwen "would" and "me".
1/18/2006 c1 8Wingg-ed Wolf
Whoo that toke me a long time to read. I love the idea but it was really hard to read I think you should put in some spaces. All in all good story
8Wingg-ed WolfWhoo that toke me a long time to read. I love the idea but it was really hard to read I think you should put in some spaces. All in all good story
1/15/2006 c6 bavarde
This is a really good story! But I think you should seperate the sentences more cause it's hard to read when it's all clumped together. But I love it it's so funny and creative! Kisses for you!
~beachbum330
This is a really good story! But I think you should seperate the sentences more cause it's hard to read when it's all clumped together. But I love it it's so funny and creative! Kisses for you!
~beachbum330