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1Ellana Undomiel
This is the second time I read this story so it shows how much I love this story! The characters are great, their personality is developped and your writing is awesome! You're aweome and I hope you'll write a new story soon!
1Ellana UndomielThis is the second time I read this story so it shows how much I love this story! The characters are great, their personality is developped and your writing is awesome! You're aweome and I hope you'll write a new story soon!
11/9/2012 c33
25Zoe Alice Latimer
I enjoyed this a lot. I kept picturing Katie McGrath as Lothiriel, which made everything ten times better. And I have to say I got really excited when A Wild Aragorn Appeared. I think my favorite chapter was... 17, I think? When Lothiriel drowned a man, simply because it was a huge moment for her character, both fitting in with what we knew of her before and leading into what happened next. I loved the humor as well, although it made the style dissonant to the books. That honestly didn't bother me as much as the (not serious but recurring) grammar mistakes... a lot of missing commas. But that's a pet peeve. The story entertained me start to finish. :)
25Zoe Alice LatimerI enjoyed this a lot. I kept picturing Katie McGrath as Lothiriel, which made everything ten times better. And I have to say I got really excited when A Wild Aragorn Appeared. I think my favorite chapter was... 17, I think? When Lothiriel drowned a man, simply because it was a huge moment for her character, both fitting in with what we knew of her before and leading into what happened next. I loved the humor as well, although it made the style dissonant to the books. That honestly didn't bother me as much as the (not serious but recurring) grammar mistakes... a lot of missing commas. But that's a pet peeve. The story entertained me start to finish. :)
5/9/2012 c33
4Padfootkicksbutt
awesome story! i just love how they visit faramir and eowyn :D and the archery contest ;D
4Padfootkicksbuttawesome story! i just love how they visit faramir and eowyn :D and the archery contest ;D
4/19/2012 c33
4Blackroses191191
Hello, I have read this a few times now and I unfortunatly have a tendancy to forget to review, so this time I made sure I did!
I really enjoy this story, I like how you have developed the relationship between the two characters.
You are a really skilled writer.
4Blackroses191191Hello, I have read this a few times now and I unfortunatly have a tendancy to forget to review, so this time I made sure I did!
I really enjoy this story, I like how you have developed the relationship between the two characters.
You are a really skilled writer.
12/25/2011 c33
2Tinkirbell
Loved this one too! write more so I can read more...I think I will settle for short stories if it means they will come faster *wink*
:)
2TinkirbellLoved this one too! write more so I can read more...I think I will settle for short stories if it means they will come faster *wink*
:)
11/6/2011 c32
1Glory Bee
This is one of my faves of all your stories Lia. I absolutely adore your versions of Eomer and Lothiriel, they simply sparkle with passion and wit! I also liked how well you wrote the supporting characters, especially Eowyn, Legolas and Amrothos. I appreciated that you kept the angst quotient down in your story and it was a real pleasure watching this beloved couple falling in love through to their beautiful wedding ceremony and wedding night without ever being too explicit. :)
1Glory BeeThis is one of my faves of all your stories Lia. I absolutely adore your versions of Eomer and Lothiriel, they simply sparkle with passion and wit! I also liked how well you wrote the supporting characters, especially Eowyn, Legolas and Amrothos. I appreciated that you kept the angst quotient down in your story and it was a real pleasure watching this beloved couple falling in love through to their beautiful wedding ceremony and wedding night without ever being too explicit. :)
10/5/2011 c33 Glory Bee
What a delight for me to be able to read this completed story all in one day, one very happy day for me.:) Loved everything about it but especially the dialogue between Eomer and Lothiriel, this couple had powerful chemistry and I yearned for them to come together as husband and wife. Simply a beautifully written story and you are an extremely talented writer and I am so happy I discovered your work. :)
What a delight for me to be able to read this completed story all in one day, one very happy day for me.:) Loved everything about it but especially the dialogue between Eomer and Lothiriel, this couple had powerful chemistry and I yearned for them to come together as husband and wife. Simply a beautifully written story and you are an extremely talented writer and I am so happy I discovered your work. :)
9/18/2011 c33
8littlemsstrawberry
Finally I am done with this story! I love it! But I'm curious, where and how did you know about some stuff about Eomer and Lothiriel? Wikipedia does not say much about after the war and during the rebuilding. May I know where you get your sources from? I look forward to your next story. I hope you'll write something soon again.
8littlemsstrawberryFinally I am done with this story! I love it! But I'm curious, where and how did you know about some stuff about Eomer and Lothiriel? Wikipedia does not say much about after the war and during the rebuilding. May I know where you get your sources from? I look forward to your next story. I hope you'll write something soon again.
9/11/2011 c33 Marie
This is a great story that I enjoy re-reading from time to time. Thank you for sharing it!
This is a great story that I enjoy re-reading from time to time. Thank you for sharing it!
