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11/11/2011 c1 99CKLizzy
You're a hopeless romantic, do you know that? ;) That was so sweet. A bit surprising and unusual, but still very sweet.

I was laughing so hard at Kathryn's reaction at Chakotay throwing away the box in anger. I can so hear her saying that. *lol*

I want such a disc, too! *sighs*

A lovely story, wonderfully written (as always ;)). Thank you for sharing!

DrLiz :)
1/28/2010 c1 5Kamai6
Well Done!

Kamai6
6/27/2009 c1 kitcat19us
great story
8/10/2008 c1 8bina W
This was a very pretty story.

Bina
8/6/2007 c1 1AHealingRenaissance
...sigh...I could seriously use some of that truth serum myself :D
6/3/2007 c1 Kate Andromeda
;) Again a wonderful story idea well done. Thank you. Can you get me such a 'heart's truth', too. ;)
12/1/2005 c1 2love-hurts-me-bad
hehe dis is funny and cute at d same time xx
11/9/2005 c1 94DianeB
I *adore* the way you spin a story! And I'm impressed to death with the way you can find something in an episode that many of us would be hard-pressed to recall and connect it seamlessly to a larger, very plausible, J/C story. Well done!
11/7/2005 c1 22Mriana
Great story, Miz! I esp. got a good laugh out of this part:

"Right. I mean, after all, food is just nutritional biomatter." They both laughed. "This stuff is called surstromming."

"It sounds bad already."

That was really funny. Thanks for sharing. :)
11/5/2005 c1 1eternity-99
Perfect!
11/3/2005 c1 amrose
I like your way with words as well as the "realism" (so to speak- perhaps insight would be a better word). You weave cannon and JC together well in this story. My favorite line:

"I cared too much, Chakotay. I couldn't be your lover and also be your captain, and I thought it was too late for things to be different between us. Seven years is a long time to deny the truth. I thought you'd moved on and that you'd just feel pity for me if I told you how I feel."

This makes all those years (seasons 4-7) seem as love supressed but not lost. Thanks.
11/2/2005 c1 lilblt
Nice story, Mizvoy.

Loved the cute ending when something suddenly came up ;)
11/2/2005 c1 Ayjah
Wow now that was wonderful :) Keep it up :) maybe even a longer chapter story sometime of J/C of course ?

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