for Heart's Truth11/11/2011 c1
99CKLizzy
You're a hopeless romantic, do you know that? ;) That was so sweet. A bit surprising and unusual, but still very sweet.
I was laughing so hard at Kathryn's reaction at Chakotay throwing away the box in anger. I can so hear her saying that. *lol*
I want such a disc, too! *sighs*
A lovely story, wonderfully written (as always ;)). Thank you for sharing!
DrLiz :)
99CKLizzyYou're a hopeless romantic, do you know that? ;) That was so sweet. A bit surprising and unusual, but still very sweet.
I was laughing so hard at Kathryn's reaction at Chakotay throwing away the box in anger. I can so hear her saying that. *lol*
I want such a disc, too! *sighs*
A lovely story, wonderfully written (as always ;)). Thank you for sharing!
DrLiz :)
6/3/2007 c1 Kate Andromeda
;) Again a wonderful story idea well done. Thank you. Can you get me such a 'heart's truth', too. ;)
;) Again a wonderful story idea well done. Thank you. Can you get me such a 'heart's truth', too. ;)
11/9/2005 c1
94DianeB
I *adore* the way you spin a story! And I'm impressed to death with the way you can find something in an episode that many of us would be hard-pressed to recall and connect it seamlessly to a larger, very plausible, J/C story. Well done!
94DianeBI *adore* the way you spin a story! And I'm impressed to death with the way you can find something in an episode that many of us would be hard-pressed to recall and connect it seamlessly to a larger, very plausible, J/C story. Well done!
11/7/2005 c1
22Mriana
Great story, Miz! I esp. got a good laugh out of this part:
"Right. I mean, after all, food is just nutritional biomatter." They both laughed. "This stuff is called surstromming."
"It sounds bad already."
That was really funny. Thanks for sharing. :)
22MrianaGreat story, Miz! I esp. got a good laugh out of this part:
"Right. I mean, after all, food is just nutritional biomatter." They both laughed. "This stuff is called surstromming."
"It sounds bad already."
That was really funny. Thanks for sharing. :)
11/3/2005 c1 amrose
I like your way with words as well as the "realism" (so to speak- perhaps insight would be a better word). You weave cannon and JC together well in this story. My favorite line:
"I cared too much, Chakotay. I couldn't be your lover and also be your captain, and I thought it was too late for things to be different between us. Seven years is a long time to deny the truth. I thought you'd moved on and that you'd just feel pity for me if I told you how I feel."
This makes all those years (seasons 4-7) seem as love supressed but not lost. Thanks.
I like your way with words as well as the "realism" (so to speak- perhaps insight would be a better word). You weave cannon and JC together well in this story. My favorite line:
"I cared too much, Chakotay. I couldn't be your lover and also be your captain, and I thought it was too late for things to be different between us. Seven years is a long time to deny the truth. I thought you'd moved on and that you'd just feel pity for me if I told you how I feel."
This makes all those years (seasons 4-7) seem as love supressed but not lost. Thanks.
11/2/2005 c1 Ayjah
Wow now that was wonderful :) Keep it up :) maybe even a longer chapter story sometime of J/C of course ?
Wow now that was wonderful :) Keep it up :) maybe even a longer chapter story sometime of J/C of course ?
