for Phantoms and Shadows8/29/2011 c4 
8Dannichigo
XD I don't think I'll be able to keep a straight face either! XD I want ot see a mini omake comic of that! XD
8DannichigoXD I don't think I'll be able to keep a straight face either! XD I want ot see a mini omake comic of that! XD
4/30/2011 c4 KyuukiTheAnimeFreak
I really wish you'd continue this, I love it! If I begged and pleaded and groveled would you write more? I'd love to see another game where Kaitou Kid is summoned when there is an audience! I can imagine the reactions! There'd be Kid fan's spazzing, and maybe a couple police freaking out, maybe Kid would be aware of and indulge the audience in some way, and maybe he'd prank the enemy duelist by dying his hair, maybe Kid and Yami would have a minor argument when he's summoned much to everyone's confusion, maybe Yami Bakura would be there and throw a tantrum, maybe Kaito and his friends would be there and Hakuba would have a heart attack while Aoko finds insult in Kids appearance, maybe Akako would realize the connection and start hurling threats, maybe Kaito/Kid would meet Yugi's friends and there'd be some kind of WTF moment... Lots of spaztic thoughts in my head...
All I can do is ask 'please?' with my best set of puppy eyes.
Yuu-chan ;3
I really wish you'd continue this, I love it! If I begged and pleaded and groveled would you write more? I'd love to see another game where Kaitou Kid is summoned when there is an audience! I can imagine the reactions! There'd be Kid fan's spazzing, and maybe a couple police freaking out, maybe Kid would be aware of and indulge the audience in some way, and maybe he'd prank the enemy duelist by dying his hair, maybe Kid and Yami would have a minor argument when he's summoned much to everyone's confusion, maybe Yami Bakura would be there and throw a tantrum, maybe Kaito and his friends would be there and Hakuba would have a heart attack while Aoko finds insult in Kids appearance, maybe Akako would realize the connection and start hurling threats, maybe Kaito/Kid would meet Yugi's friends and there'd be some kind of WTF moment... Lots of spaztic thoughts in my head...
All I can do is ask 'please?' with my best set of puppy eyes.
Yuu-chan ;3
4/6/2011 c4 A Midsummer Night's dream
Ahahahaha...a Kaitou KID card, I would want that!And from the way you described his card, it looks awesome~! XD
Ahahahaha...a Kaitou KID card, I would want that!And from the way you described his card, it looks awesome~! XD
2/4/2011 c1 33Taranea
OMG, OMG, this is awesome!^^ I love crossovers and you've written this one perfectly well :D I love Kid's cheekiness, Yami Bakura's hilarious ticked-off mood, Ryu's cute resignation when he wobbles around wheneveer the crazy happens, Yami's awesome save-the-day antics...faved!^^
33TaraneaOMG, OMG, this is awesome!^^ I love crossovers and you've written this one perfectly well :D I love Kid's cheekiness, Yami Bakura's hilarious ticked-off mood, Ryu's cute resignation when he wobbles around wheneveer the crazy happens, Yami's awesome save-the-day antics...faved!^^
1/12/2011 c4 3Kitty-Chan UchiNaru no Miko
Hmmm, methinks the pharaoh needs to have a little chat with a certain meddling witch about messing with people he has claimed.
3Kitty-Chan UchiNaru no MikoHmmm, methinks the pharaoh needs to have a little chat with a certain meddling witch about messing with people he has claimed.
6/29/2009 c4 5Silver Cateyes
:blinkblink: Kaito has a yami? And the way these things work, now that he's been made aware that he has a yami, they're going to become more and more individualistic... and start talking to each other... and get more powerful... ooh, Hakuba's going to be so ** if he ever figures out what went down. Not to mention Bakura.
Hope you feel like continuing this!
Silver Cateyes
5Silver Cateyes:blinkblink: Kaito has a yami? And the way these things work, now that he's been made aware that he has a yami, they're going to become more and more individualistic... and start talking to each other... and get more powerful... ooh, Hakuba's going to be so ** if he ever figures out what went down. Not to mention Bakura.
Hope you feel like continuing this!
Silver Cateyes
5/23/2009 c4 1APatchOfSunlight
To me, you could do no wrong. The Kaitou Kid has a special place in my heart as do crossovers, to combine both is blissful...
This makes me wonder how Conan would be if the barrier card was used on him... Is that thought even worth a omake?
Critically. I have know idea how Kaito and Yugi met. How he became such an important friend. How they discovered each other's secrets. I usually like some orientation when chucked into the middle of a story even if it's in the form of flashbacks.
Thanks for this.
-Josey
1APatchOfSunlightTo me, you could do no wrong. The Kaitou Kid has a special place in my heart as do crossovers, to combine both is blissful...
This makes me wonder how Conan would be if the barrier card was used on him... Is that thought even worth a omake?
Critically. I have know idea how Kaito and Yugi met. How he became such an important friend. How they discovered each other's secrets. I usually like some orientation when chucked into the middle of a story even if it's in the form of flashbacks.
Thanks for this.
-Josey
10/5/2008 c4 2Ami the Elemental Sorceress
Ohh, i can't wait for the next chapter. hmm... i think you should maybe have more people interactions' than just 4 characters(5 if you count yugi and yami as seperate). possibly an outside view, to show the story from a different angle, maybe from yugi's side since we kinda have that with akako on kaito's side. are you going to have pairings? if you do, it could either drastically effect the story, or be a minor thing. or it could be with out pairings and go in an entirely different direction. just a thought.
2Ami the Elemental SorceressOhh, i can't wait for the next chapter. hmm... i think you should maybe have more people interactions' than just 4 characters(5 if you count yugi and yami as seperate). possibly an outside view, to show the story from a different angle, maybe from yugi's side since we kinda have that with akako on kaito's side. are you going to have pairings? if you do, it could either drastically effect the story, or be a minor thing. or it could be with out pairings and go in an entirely different direction. just a thought.
6/13/2008 c4 1Estrella85
I really don't think I can find anything to critisize. I actually read another fic similar to this, it has Kaito stealing some of Joey's cards so Yami challenges him to a shadow game. I really like your plot too. ^_^ Very well written. Hope to see more chapters.
1Estrella85I really don't think I can find anything to critisize. I actually read another fic similar to this, it has Kaito stealing some of Joey's cards so Yami challenges him to a shadow game. I really like your plot too. ^_^ Very well written. Hope to see more chapters.
2/2/2008 c3 72peppymint
Are you planning on continuing this? It is a great story and I admit I am curious about how things are going to turn out now that Kid is a shadow monster. Besides, it would so be worth it to see Snake get caught in one of the magician thief's new tricks.
72peppymintAre you planning on continuing this? It is a great story and I admit I am curious about how things are going to turn out now that Kid is a shadow monster. Besides, it would so be worth it to see Snake get caught in one of the magician thief's new tricks.
5/31/2007 c4 52Dragon's Clan
That is so funny, I like it. lol, Kaiba is the Skeptical Priest now this is a laugh.
52Dragon's ClanThat is so funny, I like it. lol, Kaiba is the Skeptical Priest now this is a laugh.
4/30/2006 c4 31val'tanelle
wah I'm confused @_@ didn't like also how did story progressed =[ I'll still read it though...
31val'tanellewah I'm confused @_@ didn't like also how did story progressed =[ I'll still read it though...
4/15/2006 c4 Karen
Its really good. One of the more unexpected-but-actually-works-because-the-writer is talented fic.
You might want to ...er..."elaborate" on the duel a bit more. Eventhough I know about Kaitou and Yu-Gi-Oh the duel was a bit...confusing...
Interesting how you made Kid as in the summoned card as a different person to Kaitou. In a way you might have intentionally made Kaitou and Kid just like a hikari and yami.
With Kaitou's knowledge in thievery in the modern era (unlike Bakura since he was like from the very very past), perhaps you should have a scene where Kaiba and Kaitou meet wiht Kaitou giving tips on booting up security. I can just see kaiba refusing and then Kaitou stealing something from kaiba in a high security area and Yami and Yuugi just laughing their heads off at Kaiba's expression when Kaitou does succeed.
You writing style suits this fic. However, like I said before you might want to try elaborating and making it a bit clearer when writing duels. And you also might want to make your description a bit more detailed. For example, what it the "bilious yellow-green coils"? Actually that made me confused for a minute because I was thinking "What the heck are those". A
nd when I read "Back on his side of the field, the card that had lurked ominously face down now held delicately between two gloved fingers, a small slip of card that vanished as an agile hand splayed wide" at first I was confused because I thought you were talking about Yami and then that didnt make sense until I re read the first part of the duel like 3 times. Anyway, you can ignore this comment. I'm not trying to insult you or anything. Actually, you write better than me or some of the other fics that I've read. It's just that you have to remember when someone reads a fic, they don't really remember a hundred percent of what they read in that chapter 2 seconds ago when they read the next paragraph. Which was why i didnt get that sentence because i momentarily forgot about the "face-down card on the other side of the field radiated foreboding" and didn't make the connection to the "card that had lurked ominously face down" in that sentence. Anyway, dont take it personally.
The story is very good. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon ok? :)
Its really good. One of the more unexpected-but-actually-works-because-the-writer is talented fic.
You might want to ...er..."elaborate" on the duel a bit more. Eventhough I know about Kaitou and Yu-Gi-Oh the duel was a bit...confusing...
Interesting how you made Kid as in the summoned card as a different person to Kaitou. In a way you might have intentionally made Kaitou and Kid just like a hikari and yami.
With Kaitou's knowledge in thievery in the modern era (unlike Bakura since he was like from the very very past), perhaps you should have a scene where Kaiba and Kaitou meet wiht Kaitou giving tips on booting up security. I can just see kaiba refusing and then Kaitou stealing something from kaiba in a high security area and Yami and Yuugi just laughing their heads off at Kaiba's expression when Kaitou does succeed.
You writing style suits this fic. However, like I said before you might want to try elaborating and making it a bit clearer when writing duels. And you also might want to make your description a bit more detailed. For example, what it the "bilious yellow-green coils"? Actually that made me confused for a minute because I was thinking "What the heck are those". A
nd when I read "Back on his side of the field, the card that had lurked ominously face down now held delicately between two gloved fingers, a small slip of card that vanished as an agile hand splayed wide" at first I was confused because I thought you were talking about Yami and then that didnt make sense until I re read the first part of the duel like 3 times. Anyway, you can ignore this comment. I'm not trying to insult you or anything. Actually, you write better than me or some of the other fics that I've read. It's just that you have to remember when someone reads a fic, they don't really remember a hundred percent of what they read in that chapter 2 seconds ago when they read the next paragraph. Which was why i didnt get that sentence because i momentarily forgot about the "face-down card on the other side of the field radiated foreboding" and didn't make the connection to the "card that had lurked ominously face down" in that sentence. Anyway, dont take it personally.
The story is very good. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon ok? :)