for Second Chances10/23/2009 c18 Anon
I would have commented every chapter thus far, but it's just too exciting to stop! As it is, I've gotta go for dinner. I LOVE YOUR FIC! :D
I would have commented every chapter thus far, but it's just too exciting to stop! As it is, I've gotta go for dinner. I LOVE YOUR FIC! :D
5/4/2007 c26 
7Fuzzy Eared
I loved this story and read it in one sitting because I truly appreciate how you stayed true to the characters. I'm not entirely sure how fond I was of the introduction of all of the supernatural - it all seemed a little too convenient at times for me to really believe in it, but I did very much enjoy this story all the same. Pardon me for saying so, but it seemed like you were very rushed while writing the last "saga" of the fic - everything after Kyuzo's transformation into a true demon. I say so because everything was so well developed and wonderfully put together up to that point and then, like I said, it all just kind of fell together with a Happily Ever After ending because of nothing more than simple Deus Ex Machina.
I adored this story, but I do wish that it might have taken a less fairy tale turn. Lol, then again, if I really want a fic to go one way I should write one myself and stop berating other fanfiction authors over his or her creative decisions. ^^ I can't wait to read more from you.
7Fuzzy EaredI loved this story and read it in one sitting because I truly appreciate how you stayed true to the characters. I'm not entirely sure how fond I was of the introduction of all of the supernatural - it all seemed a little too convenient at times for me to really believe in it, but I did very much enjoy this story all the same. Pardon me for saying so, but it seemed like you were very rushed while writing the last "saga" of the fic - everything after Kyuzo's transformation into a true demon. I say so because everything was so well developed and wonderfully put together up to that point and then, like I said, it all just kind of fell together with a Happily Ever After ending because of nothing more than simple Deus Ex Machina.
I adored this story, but I do wish that it might have taken a less fairy tale turn. Lol, then again, if I really want a fic to go one way I should write one myself and stop berating other fanfiction authors over his or her creative decisions. ^^ I can't wait to read more from you.
8/28/2006 c26 Kilandra Iosis
WOW! I had no intentions of starting AND finishing this tonight, but I could not pull myself away. I am usually not a fan, nor do I ever like this type of fanfic, but you wrote so well, and did it so well, that I just could not stop. Plus... could you ever go wrong with Kyuuzou? :) You did a wonderful job, and my only thing now is trying to find where you posted the "good" stuff at! A++
WOW! I had no intentions of starting AND finishing this tonight, but I could not pull myself away. I am usually not a fan, nor do I ever like this type of fanfic, but you wrote so well, and did it so well, that I just could not stop. Plus... could you ever go wrong with Kyuuzou? :) You did a wonderful job, and my only thing now is trying to find where you posted the "good" stuff at! A++
4/6/2006 c26 annoynimous purposeful
I really liked the story but I was rather upset at the epilogue just because the main point of the story was that Kyuuzou was alive again and now he is dead... It makes me cry... He's just such a wonderful good guy and I love him
the end.
Good great wonderful job though, the plot was superb, perhaps one day I will be able to read another one of your stories...
I really liked the story but I was rather upset at the epilogue just because the main point of the story was that Kyuuzou was alive again and now he is dead... It makes me cry... He's just such a wonderful good guy and I love him
the end.
Good great wonderful job though, the plot was superb, perhaps one day I will be able to read another one of your stories...
4/6/2006 c5 annoynimous purposeful
Hee hee hee! I'm so happy that Katsushiro is dead, even if just maimed beyond relief... Sadly I don't think he ever had a mind to destroy... God I hated that kid... Never was he ever a man to me... Hate is the only thing that I feel but that gory wonderful death that you have bestowed upon him has made me feel much better... Thank you for bringing Kyuuzou back to life! ^_^
Hee hee hee! I'm so happy that Katsushiro is dead, even if just maimed beyond relief... Sadly I don't think he ever had a mind to destroy... God I hated that kid... Never was he ever a man to me... Hate is the only thing that I feel but that gory wonderful death that you have bestowed upon him has made me feel much better... Thank you for bringing Kyuuzou back to life! ^_^
3/27/2006 c26 Oisa
Gorgeous piece of work. I'm so happy to have read something that is so well done! Although, I thought maybe it would have been more appropriate to use Japanese/Chinese gods considering how 'traditional' the source material is for S7. *shrugs and smiles* Doesn't really matter though, I'm satisfied and deeply appreciative of your writing!
Gorgeous piece of work. I'm so happy to have read something that is so well done! Although, I thought maybe it would have been more appropriate to use Japanese/Chinese gods considering how 'traditional' the source material is for S7. *shrugs and smiles* Doesn't really matter though, I'm satisfied and deeply appreciative of your writing!
3/8/2006 c20 heihachi-lover
ahh!I wanna read that smutty chapter but what's up with fanfiction net?Is there anyway I can read it?
ahh!I wanna read that smutty chapter but what's up with fanfiction net?Is there anyway I can read it?
2/27/2006 c26 32narrizan
WoW! Yay I finished. A totally awesome read. Brilliant story and plotlines. Beautiful characterisations and pretty solid OC's. Very good writing. And because you asked earlier, even though you probably have your own by now. Here is my tpersonal take on what each chapter said to me.
Possible titles:-
1 Afterlife
2 Servitude and Strangeness
3 Demon’s Assassin
4 Uneasy Impossibility
5 Bloodlust
6 Fighting Regret
7 Wandering
8 Settling
9 Trading
10 Yesterday’s Ghost
11 Riddles and Rumours
12 No Contest
13 Distraction
14 Reasons
15 Deal
16 Buying
17 Need and Want
18 Searching
19 Truths
20 Battle
21 Blood
22 Light and Shadows
23 Lure
24 Dream
25 Second Chances / Mirrors & Angels
26 Life
As stated, these are suggestions only, and how I came up with them is, as I read each chapter I just pinned down the main emotion/feeling/sense of what each one was trying to say. You probably can tell the effect of the writing as I read. ^_^ .
This is just in case you were still looking for titles.
The other thing that I did notice, nothing to do with the writing, is there were some spelling mistakes. Some seemed like it was the ff gremlins swallowing letters up and joining some of your words together. (It doubled a paragraph on me a couple of times and they’re fond of eating up your spacings)Anyway just so you know.
But I ramble. I look forward to the back story of Kyuuzou's Assassin background. Please congratulate yourself as you have managed to possess me for a day and a half at least... crying children, hungry husband notwithstanding...Hehe! I get my own back for being ignored whilst he's online gaming! But I ramble. I leave you once again a squeeing fangirl...*Waves a huge Kyuuzou Banner*-
zan ^_^
32narrizanWoW! Yay I finished. A totally awesome read. Brilliant story and plotlines. Beautiful characterisations and pretty solid OC's. Very good writing. And because you asked earlier, even though you probably have your own by now. Here is my tpersonal take on what each chapter said to me.
Possible titles:-
1 Afterlife
2 Servitude and Strangeness
3 Demon’s Assassin
4 Uneasy Impossibility
5 Bloodlust
6 Fighting Regret
7 Wandering
8 Settling
9 Trading
10 Yesterday’s Ghost
11 Riddles and Rumours
12 No Contest
13 Distraction
14 Reasons
15 Deal
16 Buying
17 Need and Want
18 Searching
19 Truths
20 Battle
21 Blood
22 Light and Shadows
23 Lure
24 Dream
25 Second Chances / Mirrors & Angels
26 Life
As stated, these are suggestions only, and how I came up with them is, as I read each chapter I just pinned down the main emotion/feeling/sense of what each one was trying to say. You probably can tell the effect of the writing as I read. ^_^ .
This is just in case you were still looking for titles.
The other thing that I did notice, nothing to do with the writing, is there were some spelling mistakes. Some seemed like it was the ff gremlins swallowing letters up and joining some of your words together. (It doubled a paragraph on me a couple of times and they’re fond of eating up your spacings)Anyway just so you know.
But I ramble. I look forward to the back story of Kyuuzou's Assassin background. Please congratulate yourself as you have managed to possess me for a day and a half at least... crying children, hungry husband notwithstanding...Hehe! I get my own back for being ignored whilst he's online gaming! But I ramble. I leave you once again a squeeing fangirl...*Waves a huge Kyuuzou Banner*-
zan ^_^
2/27/2006 c20 narrizan
yes ff does that sometimes , i guess to safeguard the really umm... young folk who may come across. so innocent or not URL's tend to get swallowed up. Nothing to do with your pc, or your skills. so ho hum...dare I ask it? yeah go on...could you send me the link via e-mail, because trust me even on the pm or the reply link, ff has found a way to chew it up and swallow it too! ^_^ pretty please!
ooh yes...I should be sleeping..no really...and this fic rocks!
yes ff does that sometimes , i guess to safeguard the really umm... young folk who may come across. so innocent or not URL's tend to get swallowed up. Nothing to do with your pc, or your skills. so ho hum...dare I ask it? yeah go on...could you send me the link via e-mail, because trust me even on the pm or the reply link, ff has found a way to chew it up and swallow it too! ^_^ pretty please!
ooh yes...I should be sleeping..no really...and this fic rocks!
2/27/2006 c14 narrizan
*winks* I got it the references to your other fic...can't wait for that one! *hugs herself gleefully* ^_~ - zan
Sorry, thought I'd just let you know.
*winks* I got it the references to your other fic...can't wait for that one! *hugs herself gleefully* ^_~ - zan
Sorry, thought I'd just let you know.
2/27/2006 c11 narrizan
Big! Mistake...must stop now...too sleepy...no really must go. *Yawn* too addictive cannot resist...Man I have a demon in me that says read this ... mwaha.ha! otherwise no sleep will you get...must resist must sleep!...*Aargrh!
- *falls over* -
^_~ zan
Big! Mistake...must stop now...too sleepy...no really must go. *Yawn* too addictive cannot resist...Man I have a demon in me that says read this ... mwaha.ha! otherwise no sleep will you get...must resist must sleep!...*Aargrh!
- *falls over* -
^_~ zan
2/27/2006 c10 narrizan
Okay one, became two, became three, so here I am and as addictive as it is I have to stop, it being nearly 3 am and I have to be up at 6:15 latest so I can get my girl reaady and send her to school!
Have no fear I will get to the end and say more then. Until next time, good night!
- zan
*rushes off to sneak in jus' one more* ^_~
Okay one, became two, became three, so here I am and as addictive as it is I have to stop, it being nearly 3 am and I have to be up at 6:15 latest so I can get my girl reaady and send her to school!
Have no fear I will get to the end and say more then. Until next time, good night!
- zan
*rushes off to sneak in jus' one more* ^_~
1/21/2006 c25 9Ame Mika'zuki
whatta nice ending! ^_^ sorry i didnt review much...but even if i didnt, i still read all the chapters, i assure you. would you mind if i help you in thinking of chapter names?^^
amazing...the time i read the last lines here in this chapter was the exact time "all the way" played in my playlist!^_^=
you did really great in this story! ^o^V
9Ame Mika'zukiwhatta nice ending! ^_^ sorry i didnt review much...but even if i didnt, i still read all the chapters, i assure you. would you mind if i help you in thinking of chapter names?^^
amazing...the time i read the last lines here in this chapter was the exact time "all the way" played in my playlist!^_^=
you did really great in this story! ^o^V