for A Change of Heart4/20/2006 c5 Samantha-Girl Scout
lol! any way... you should be creative... like have Jazz do something sweet for... for HIS birthday! lol that would be so cute!
lol! any way... you should be creative... like have Jazz do something sweet for... for HIS birthday! lol that would be so cute!
4/16/2006 c4 
5Samantha-Girl Scout
whoah... any way... CONTINUE OR I SHALL HAVE TO USE THE WORDS"OR ELSE" AND THIER MEANING! HA HA!
5Samantha-Girl Scoutwhoah... any way... CONTINUE OR I SHALL HAVE TO USE THE WORDS"OR ELSE" AND THIER MEANING! HA HA!
4/16/2006 c4 56katiesparks
When they were fighting the LunchLady tucker was supposed to say "Yeah trained by her dad"not"our death"(P.S.Keep up the good work!)
56katiesparksWhen they were fighting the LunchLady tucker was supposed to say "Yeah trained by her dad"not"our death"(P.S.Keep up the good work!)
1/9/2006 c3 53Lonestarr
Again, a good story, but you really need to put spaces between your sentences. Also, check the spelling. On the basis of creating stories, you're a good writer, and doing these things can help you be a great one.
53LonestarrAgain, a good story, but you really need to put spaces between your sentences. Also, check the spelling. On the basis of creating stories, you're a good writer, and doing these things can help you be a great one.
12/27/2005 c3 11Sparky the Wonder Weasel
Nice chappy. Please continue. May I make a suggestion?...try to space stuff out a little bit, it is just easier for me to read. You don't have to listen to me.
11Sparky the Wonder WeaselNice chappy. Please continue. May I make a suggestion?...try to space stuff out a little bit, it is just easier for me to read. You don't have to listen to me.
12/13/2005 c2 5Samantha-Girl Scout
how can you say no part 3? how! this is just TOO good... you can't just stop! lol please i like this too much for you to stop!
5Samantha-Girl Scouthow can you say no part 3? how! this is just TOO good... you can't just stop! lol please i like this too much for you to stop!