5/21 c19 Hell Sword
i love your making more chapters yay :)
love the story up to now.
Are you going to have Al in it?

5/17 c19 12Amaya Zorifuki
Woah! I can't believe you still remember this fic after all this time. That's amazing, good on you sweetie.

I love you in spite of the years gone by, you were able to pick right back up without me getting stuck and having to look back on anything. I remembered everything I needed to remember.

7/24/2012 c18 30Thief of Black Winged Hearts
Wow, this story is amazing! Please continue, I beg you!

6/21/2012 c16 LeFay Strent
I loved this chapter. It's my favorite so far. And Armstrong! Yay, I knew it would be him! And the fight between Mustang and Ed was perfect and so was the ending of this chapter.

6/5/2011 c18 8dreamschemer
It's a good story so far, but other than watching Ed express emotion, we haven't seen anything else he can do! I'd love to see an echo of some of Ed's smarts in the anime/manga be reflected in your fic. This is a bot that can not only intake information at a staggering pace, but apply it and use it in everyday scenarios. I'd love to see a scene where Ed gives expert economic advice because he truly learned everything he could from that book Roy handed him early on. I'm also interested to know what kind of capabilities Ed has, considering that Scar was a veritable arsenal. But please, don't tell us all at once!

8/19/2010 c18 89GintaxAlvissForever
Who boy, 18 chapters in one sitting. Took me 4 hours to read it all but I must say, when stories from TV Tropes are recomended, they are ALWAYS the good ones! Hot damn!

I love the way you incoporate Chobits with FMA. It's so good that I had no idea that Chobits could go into this deep. I love how everyone is in character and how you incorporate almost all the characters into the story. Now, I'm just missing Alphonse but that to can wait.

But I noticed that you haven't updated in a while. I hope you update soon, but now I know that you've been working on this story for 4 years and that even if you take forever, as long as you update, it will be fine. So, I'll stay tune. Continue to upload!

Momo M. Taro or Pepper from Fallen Angel

3/20/2010 c18 1Bored Bunny
HEY!

This is a most interesting story combination - and you write it so well!I really like how you are building up the little romantic moments between Ed and Roy, and I can't wait 'til the next chapters!

:D

12/12/2009 c18 7itachigurlsaiyaku
First time reading a Persocom! Ed story and I totally fell in love with this! ~3 Keep up the good work.