for Until the End of Time10/17/2007 c1 sJs2
wow. that was pretty good. i'd try and put more detail about the world of the white women. try 2 tell what it looks like (even tho u do mention that it's dark!) GOOD JOB! i'm a total inkfan 2! lol
wow. that was pretty good. i'd try and put more detail about the world of the white women. try 2 tell what it looks like (even tho u do mention that it's dark!) GOOD JOB! i'm a total inkfan 2! lol
1/23/2007 c2 JamieGlasgow4
I love this fic! Keep updating will you? This is one of the best Dustfinger fics I've ever seen.
I love this fic! Keep updating will you? This is one of the best Dustfinger fics I've ever seen.
8/7/2006 c2 me
i liked the way you emphasized the slow, numbing effect of the place. the only descrepancy i've found is that in the book, dustfinger talks in third person to himself a lot-even when he first gets back to the inkworld; 'listen, dustfinger, you're back!' he told himself firmly. 'forget the boy-yes, you've lost him, but you have your own world back instead, a whole world. you're back, can you finally believe it?' but overall pretty good ^.^
i liked the way you emphasized the slow, numbing effect of the place. the only descrepancy i've found is that in the book, dustfinger talks in third person to himself a lot-even when he first gets back to the inkworld; 'listen, dustfinger, you're back!' he told himself firmly. 'forget the boy-yes, you've lost him, but you have your own world back instead, a whole world. you're back, can you finally believe it?' but overall pretty good ^.^
1/8/2006 c2 phantom stallion
too choppy. paragraphs arent made to be one line or so long. I just dont feel that Dustfinger would sit around moping like that, asking himself questions he ought to already kno the answer to.
too choppy. paragraphs arent made to be one line or so long. I just dont feel that Dustfinger would sit around moping like that, asking himself questions he ought to already kno the answer to.
1/5/2006 c1 Ponee
that was so cool. i was thinking about writing one like it, but then you did, so i dont have to! yay!
that was so cool. i was thinking about writing one like it, but then you did, so i dont have to! yay!
12/30/2005 c2 StopBlowingHolesInMyShips
wow...this is well-written and an interesting idea!
~ships
wow...this is well-written and an interesting idea!
~ships
12/27/2005 c2 sorry u dont no mi
Hi, I just wanted to say thanks, It's hard finding good fanfic writers for stories that aren't harry potter. Also, I love Dustfinger- he's always been my favorite, ever since that first scene in Inkheart, standing out in the rain. Was it just me, or did he sort of remind you of Strider(from the lord of the rings)? Anyways, good job on portraying him...I think I would go crazy with boredom there with the white ladies!
Hi, I just wanted to say thanks, It's hard finding good fanfic writers for stories that aren't harry potter. Also, I love Dustfinger- he's always been my favorite, ever since that first scene in Inkheart, standing out in the rain. Was it just me, or did he sort of remind you of Strider(from the lord of the rings)? Anyways, good job on portraying him...I think I would go crazy with boredom there with the white ladies!
12/26/2005 c2 
5Duckweed
So sad..*Sniff*
Very creepy. Are you going to have him hang with the other dead guys on his days off?
5DuckweedSo sad..*Sniff*
Very creepy. Are you going to have him hang with the other dead guys on his days off?
12/25/2005 c2 4Maddycat2000
Er... I updated quickley. The whole things not really a happy thing, but I think I'm still writing pretty good. *shrug*
4Maddycat2000Er... I updated quickley. The whole things not really a happy thing, but I think I'm still writing pretty good. *shrug*
12/24/2005 c1 Maddycat2000
I'm personally proud of this one. I like it very much. I hope all of you do too. Not many seemed to have taken a look at it, but it doesn't bother me. I'll probably have a new chapter out soon... yes I review all my own fics.
I'm personally proud of this one. I like it very much. I hope all of you do too. Not many seemed to have taken a look at it, but it doesn't bother me. I'll probably have a new chapter out soon... yes I review all my own fics.
12/24/2005 c1 5Duckweed
Hey, that was kinda good. Are you planning on continueing it?
I was actually considering writing a fic about what Dustfinger was thinking when he died, but knowing me it would be a bit weird and twisted. I always thought that Dustfinger would kinda panic a bit at first.
Just so you know: "Roxane" only has one "n" in it.
5DuckweedHey, that was kinda good. Are you planning on continueing it?
I was actually considering writing a fic about what Dustfinger was thinking when he died, but knowing me it would be a bit weird and twisted. I always thought that Dustfinger would kinda panic a bit at first.
Just so you know: "Roxane" only has one "n" in it.