for Haunted11/15/2010 c5 
2BlissfulGP
Awe, this was such a sweet story. X3
I recently started placing these two together as a couple and I love it. ^^
I am conflicted with pairings for Cloud, though. I think he looks good with Sephiroth, Leon, and Vincent. :sweat:
Maybe someday I'll be able to choose between them! XD
2BlissfulGPAwe, this was such a sweet story. X3
I recently started placing these two together as a couple and I love it. ^^
I am conflicted with pairings for Cloud, though. I think he looks good with Sephiroth, Leon, and Vincent. :sweat:
Maybe someday I'll be able to choose between them! XD
6/17/2009 c5 3xxLivingPuppetxx234
This story was gut wrenchingly, heart stoppingly, and maddeningly beautiful. If you haven't figured it out, I absolutely love your writing! Can't wait to read another!
3xxLivingPuppetxx234This story was gut wrenchingly, heart stoppingly, and maddeningly beautiful. If you haven't figured it out, I absolutely love your writing! Can't wait to read another!
5/8/2009 c5 A Third Full
Oh wow, this is a good story. It was interesting from beginning to end and I had to read it all in one go. Great job on that.
Now on another note, there are a few 'word' mistakes. I think you might mean one word but accidentally typed another. They are here and there between the chapters, but they are not too great in numbers to inhibit the understanding of the sentences.
Also, some parts about Cloud's and his Brothers' past doesn't seem to add up, or rather, it didn't make any sense. Like the part about clones. There is a great potential there to develop some back story, it would be interesting.
All in all, this is a great story indeed. Thank you for finishing it.
Oh wow, this is a good story. It was interesting from beginning to end and I had to read it all in one go. Great job on that.
Now on another note, there are a few 'word' mistakes. I think you might mean one word but accidentally typed another. They are here and there between the chapters, but they are not too great in numbers to inhibit the understanding of the sentences.
Also, some parts about Cloud's and his Brothers' past doesn't seem to add up, or rather, it didn't make any sense. Like the part about clones. There is a great potential there to develop some back story, it would be interesting.
All in all, this is a great story indeed. Thank you for finishing it.
3/18/2009 c5 nancy
I really loved your story, n_n please write more! =D
I really loved your story, n_n please write more! =D
2/10/2009 c5 31xxRainbow-muffinsxx
IT WAS BEAUTIFUL! i cried when vincent wasnt there in chappy 4! -wipes tear- u get 5 tins of ur fave cookies and if u dont like cookies u get 5 bags or ur fave candy lolz and if u dont like candy...hmm idk what to put lol u get 5 random glomps! well i loved it!
31xxRainbow-muffinsxxIT WAS BEAUTIFUL! i cried when vincent wasnt there in chappy 4! -wipes tear- u get 5 tins of ur fave cookies and if u dont like cookies u get 5 bags or ur fave candy lolz and if u dont like candy...hmm idk what to put lol u get 5 random glomps! well i loved it!
7/29/2008 c5 15Existence's Bane
I did like this story. It wasn't cliche, and it had its twists, so it kept you reading.
Just a suggestion: maybe you should try adding some more detail and check on grammar before posting. That would make your writing even more awesome.
15Existence's BaneI did like this story. It wasn't cliche, and it had its twists, so it kept you reading.
Just a suggestion: maybe you should try adding some more detail and check on grammar before posting. That would make your writing even more awesome.
6/1/2008 c5 Tiffany
freakin amazin, your a good writer,keep it up! vincent and cloud are hot together and i like the way how vincent loved cloud like that, cute!
freakin amazin, your a good writer,keep it up! vincent and cloud are hot together and i like the way how vincent loved cloud like that, cute!
12/26/2007 c5 34Marjon
I'm speechless. It's so beautiful. You really caught me into it. Wow, really, I can't even give you a proper review it seems.
It's too bad there are hardly any good VincentxCloud fanfics, but you surely made one of a great piece! Keep on going like this and I'm sure this won't be the last time I'll read this. Great work *bows*
34MarjonI'm speechless. It's so beautiful. You really caught me into it. Wow, really, I can't even give you a proper review it seems.
It's too bad there are hardly any good VincentxCloud fanfics, but you surely made one of a great piece! Keep on going like this and I'm sure this won't be the last time I'll read this. Great work *bows*