for Ideology1/31/2006 c13 HeraBates
I like the way that you built up the tension between Pyro and Rogue and then had them come to some sort of truce. The way that he noticed her looking at Magneto, and connected it to the way that she noticed that he looks at Gambit.
Rogue has developed since the start of the fic, and even in comparison to a recent chapter where she would say that she was fine there has progressed into her actually liking it.
I like the way that you built up the tension between Pyro and Rogue and then had them come to some sort of truce. The way that he noticed her looking at Magneto, and connected it to the way that she noticed that he looks at Gambit.
Rogue has developed since the start of the fic, and even in comparison to a recent chapter where she would say that she was fine there has progressed into her actually liking it.
1/30/2006 c12 
6Miss Information
Mystique's...hobby threw me a bit, but why the heck not, huh? Knitting is still a step up from crocheting or sewing dolie dolls. :)
I absolutely loved the bit between Rogue and Magneto, though with the streak of sass she's displaying I'm wondering if you're going to have her tell him to stop being so damn arrogant already. Smug old git...
The Pyro-hatred is interesting. I'm wondering if he'll confront her on his hate or just outright try to kill her. Hm...I'm actually hoping for the second possibility, though I don't know why. He's too pigheaded to talk things out, in any case.
Anyway, I hope to see updates soon...! This is a brilliant story so far and...well, you've got my weakness in one; Rogue/Magneto. *sigh!*
6Miss InformationMystique's...hobby threw me a bit, but why the heck not, huh? Knitting is still a step up from crocheting or sewing dolie dolls. :)
I absolutely loved the bit between Rogue and Magneto, though with the streak of sass she's displaying I'm wondering if you're going to have her tell him to stop being so damn arrogant already. Smug old git...
The Pyro-hatred is interesting. I'm wondering if he'll confront her on his hate or just outright try to kill her. Hm...I'm actually hoping for the second possibility, though I don't know why. He's too pigheaded to talk things out, in any case.
Anyway, I hope to see updates soon...! This is a brilliant story so far and...well, you've got my weakness in one; Rogue/Magneto. *sigh!*
1/29/2006 c12 HeraBates
The kind of hostile relationship that she has with Pyro (or more the way that he is hostile towards her) is interesting. I liked that you made it because he had feelings for Bobby and it seems to make sense looking back at his past actions.
I loved the way that you wrote the conversation between Magneto and Rogue on the little balcony. There was just something about it that seemed very real.
The kind of hostile relationship that she has with Pyro (or more the way that he is hostile towards her) is interesting. I liked that you made it because he had feelings for Bobby and it seems to make sense looking back at his past actions.
I loved the way that you wrote the conversation between Magneto and Rogue on the little balcony. There was just something about it that seemed very real.
1/28/2006 c10 10angw
This is an interesting twist. What will happen when she confronts the Xmen while in Magnetos team? :D
10angwThis is an interesting twist. What will happen when she confronts the Xmen while in Magnetos team? :D
1/27/2006 c11 HeraBates
Their training seems fun yet painful.
It's interesting how the relationship between the members of the Brotherhood seem closer than that of the X-men, but it makes a lot of sense considering how they've been treated in the past.
Rogue overcooking the pasta was amusing, and it is actually very easy to do when you don't really know what you're doing.
I liked her reaction to seeing the numbers, but not knowing what to say. It would be hard, knowing what they mean and yet not really understanding what he has experienced.
Their training seems fun yet painful.
It's interesting how the relationship between the members of the Brotherhood seem closer than that of the X-men, but it makes a lot of sense considering how they've been treated in the past.
Rogue overcooking the pasta was amusing, and it is actually very easy to do when you don't really know what you're doing.
I liked her reaction to seeing the numbers, but not knowing what to say. It would be hard, knowing what they mean and yet not really understanding what he has experienced.
1/26/2006 c10 HeraBates
I was wondering how he would find out that she was telling the truth about getting a lift there, he wouldn't take anything at face value and I think you have made that clear.
I liked the way that you wrote Magneto's firm belief in what he does. He is a very passionate character and that makes him interesting, scary and yet appealing at the same time.
I am curious about the training that she will be going through, and to seeing how she adjusts to life with the Brotherhood.
I was wondering how he would find out that she was telling the truth about getting a lift there, he wouldn't take anything at face value and I think you have made that clear.
I liked the way that you wrote Magneto's firm belief in what he does. He is a very passionate character and that makes him interesting, scary and yet appealing at the same time.
I am curious about the training that she will be going through, and to seeing how she adjusts to life with the Brotherhood.
1/26/2006 c10 Lesley
You actually come up with good points that explain how Rogue would join the Brotherhood. It'd be interesting to see what's happening on Xavier's side though. Keep up the good work!
You actually come up with good points that explain how Rogue would join the Brotherhood. It'd be interesting to see what's happening on Xavier's side though. Keep up the good work!
1/26/2006 c10 raven
othis is getting good! So whats going on with the X-men and what about logan? How is he taking that Rogue left?
othis is getting good! So whats going on with the X-men and what about logan? How is he taking that Rogue left?
1/25/2006 c9 Eliza
Rogue/Magneto that's just stupid... and it's not well written and unrealistic.
Rogue/Magneto that's just stupid... and it's not well written and unrealistic.
1/23/2006 c9 Fizzleup
And now you add a twist with her meeting Gambit. Still looks interesting.
And now you add a twist with her meeting Gambit. Still looks interesting.
1/22/2006 c9 HeraBates
It was interesting seeing the way that the Brotherhood reacts when Magneto isn't there in comparison to when he is there. Their mood changes in an instant.
I like the way that you seemed to make the group have this friendly banter, and that they seem to be on equal footing when it comes to chores/cooking.
It was interesting seeing the way that the Brotherhood reacts when Magneto isn't there in comparison to when he is there. Their mood changes in an instant.
I like the way that you seemed to make the group have this friendly banter, and that they seem to be on equal footing when it comes to chores/cooking.
1/22/2006 c8 HeraBates
There is something dark and yet captivating about the way that Magneto demands respect. I like the way that he used the metal cuffs, and the metal circlets to keep her not only from being able to use her powers against him but as a way to control her. She is basically a puppet that he can move around at will.
I did see one thing that confused me; When Rogue first goes into the room it is described as being windowless, but near the end of the chapter she looks out the window in her room.
There is something dark and yet captivating about the way that Magneto demands respect. I like the way that he used the metal cuffs, and the metal circlets to keep her not only from being able to use her powers against him but as a way to control her. She is basically a puppet that he can move around at will.
I did see one thing that confused me; When Rogue first goes into the room it is described as being windowless, but near the end of the chapter she looks out the window in her room.
1/21/2006 c8 9Crimson Lipstick
This is all getting very strange. In a good way, of course. Ah, so we finally get to see some more members of the Brotherhood. They're very much in character too :-) Your plot honestly intrigues me. I like the direction it's going in anyway. Well done.
9Crimson LipstickThis is all getting very strange. In a good way, of course. Ah, so we finally get to see some more members of the Brotherhood. They're very much in character too :-) Your plot honestly intrigues me. I like the direction it's going in anyway. Well done.