for Behind These Red Eyes3/1/2006 c4 
19L'ange-Sans-Ailes
great story, good ending, kinda sappy but ehh... overall it was really good.
19L'ange-Sans-Ailesgreat story, good ending, kinda sappy but ehh... overall it was really good.
2/22/2006 c3 L'ange-Sans-Ailes
oh how are johnny and shadow gonna get out of this one?
please please up-date soon.
oh how are johnny and shadow gonna get out of this one?
please please up-date soon.
1/9/2006 c2 53Lonestarr
Your structure needs work, to say the least, but this is a fascinating 'what if?' backstory on Johnny 13 and Kitty. Can't wait for the next chapter.
53LonestarrYour structure needs work, to say the least, but this is a fascinating 'what if?' backstory on Johnny 13 and Kitty. Can't wait for the next chapter.
1/8/2006 c2 19L'ange-Sans-Ailes
fantastic. two up-dates is great. and its pretty creative of you to make shadow a seperate entity when johnny was alive.
19L'ange-Sans-Ailesfantastic. two up-dates is great. and its pretty creative of you to make shadow a seperate entity when johnny was alive.