4/27/2009 c10 12Nedy Rahn
You have a good story, though I am not familiar with the second part of this Crossover. I am familiar with Stargate though. I was happy to read something that was well written compared to most Fanfictions I have read of late. You do however have a problem I even am working on. Every so often a word was missing from a sentance or phrase that I had to fill in for myself. I do that when I write too fast. I think the words out, but in typing them into the story I sometimes leave some of them out and don't catch the mistake until I go back and proof read. Other than that this is a good story.

7/1/2006 c8 sheba
This storie is so great keep it up thanks

4/4/2006 c1 katiedid
This is great, It took me awhile to find this story but please keep going. You have taken my favorite books with my favorite TV show and made a great story.

Thanks So Much.

Katiedid

1/26/2006 c3 tsa33
Very interesting so far, please keep going.