for Harry Potter and the Path of Faust2/23/2011 c6 Maxvel
Realy good one. Cant wait for more. Memento mori
Realy good one. Cant wait for more. Memento mori
12/29/2010 c6 omh666
I have to say I f***ing love this story. And on top of that I love your taste in music. Or at least the band you keep mentioning throughout this story. Love the plot and the descriptive details. Hoping to see a new chapter soon as possible. Keep up the amazing work.
I have to say I f***ing love this story. And on top of that I love your taste in music. Or at least the band you keep mentioning throughout this story. Love the plot and the descriptive details. Hoping to see a new chapter soon as possible. Keep up the amazing work.
12/25/2010 c6 Slythorion
A truly remarkable story but why didnt FAUST aka Harry just transfer Dumbledorks mark to a death eater? Never fear my review is here.
A truly remarkable story but why didnt FAUST aka Harry just transfer Dumbledorks mark to a death eater? Never fear my review is here.
12/15/2010 c6 
5Fox of Apocolypse
The plot line's good, the characters are excellent...but I must admit, the English is crappy. And the story seems a bit rushed, but that's not too much of a dilemma. I would be happy to beta for you, if you'd like. Just PM me.
Re-edit the next chapter to the best of your ability before posting it. I skipped the end of this chapter because it was hurting my eyes to read.
Darkestfury
5Fox of ApocolypseThe plot line's good, the characters are excellent...but I must admit, the English is crappy. And the story seems a bit rushed, but that's not too much of a dilemma. I would be happy to beta for you, if you'd like. Just PM me.
Re-edit the next chapter to the best of your ability before posting it. I skipped the end of this chapter because it was hurting my eyes to read.
Darkestfury
12/3/2010 c1 misteryman526
Interesting idea but your writing style is just too weak to carry this story. Since you have gone seriously AU on this, you can't depend on your readers knowledge of the characters to help support the story, so you need a lot better character development. I'd suggest a rewrite, with a prologue that fleshes out the motivations of important characters (showing that Dumbledore is a Dark Lord, and Harry's friends aren't honest, and introducing Lou). Then you could open the next chapter with Harry in the bedroom and meeting Lou.
Interesting idea but your writing style is just too weak to carry this story. Since you have gone seriously AU on this, you can't depend on your readers knowledge of the characters to help support the story, so you need a lot better character development. I'd suggest a rewrite, with a prologue that fleshes out the motivations of important characters (showing that Dumbledore is a Dark Lord, and Harry's friends aren't honest, and introducing Lou). Then you could open the next chapter with Harry in the bedroom and meeting Lou.
11/4/2010 c6 3Adele365
Damn. Your talent for bloody mayhem is incredibly amusing. I'm glad I found this after the hiatus and not before, judging by your A/N. Anyway, if you're writing again, awesome. Love the story!
3Adele365Damn. Your talent for bloody mayhem is incredibly amusing. I'm glad I found this after the hiatus and not before, judging by your A/N. Anyway, if you're writing again, awesome. Love the story!
10/5/2010 c6 5theprincedonte
Great story so far, might want to get a spell check on the chapters. Eagerly anticapting more.
5theprincedonteGreat story so far, might want to get a spell check on the chapters. Eagerly anticapting more.
9/27/2010 c5 Fayneir
*** Dumbledore...manipulative bastard...hope he dies in agony. Awesome fic so far.
*** Dumbledore...manipulative bastard...hope he dies in agony. Awesome fic so far.