for You Keep Me Coming back For More3/21/2008 c3 
74JJ Rust
Not too bad. I thought you did a good job with Fred's character. I would have liked to have seen some internal conflict regarding his feelings toward both Katie and Angelina. Also, chapter two contained quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes. It also wouldn't hurt to expand some of these scenes, too.
74JJ RustNot too bad. I thought you did a good job with Fred's character. I would have liked to have seen some internal conflict regarding his feelings toward both Katie and Angelina. Also, chapter two contained quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes. It also wouldn't hurt to expand some of these scenes, too.
9/28/2007 c7 17ActionsSpeakLouderThanWords
I love how Oliver is so cluless. I want to see what George does!
17ActionsSpeakLouderThanWordsI love how Oliver is so cluless. I want to see what George does!
12/27/2006 c7 14Hope-W
great chap!I'm really happy that george doesn't like ketie, he may help Angelina lot!
update soon!
happy new year
14Hope-Wgreat chap!I'm really happy that george doesn't like ketie, he may help Angelina lot!
update soon!
happy new year
12/27/2006 c7 1aDeathlyHallow
Yeah your back.
Ugh, i hate katie stupid **.
And Why aren't angelina and oliver not together, they are sweet ;)
Love it that fred is so jaleous!
x
1aDeathlyHallowYeah your back.
Ugh, i hate katie stupid **.
And Why aren't angelina and oliver not together, they are sweet ;)
Love it that fred is so jaleous!
x
8/3/2006 c1 HPGBH
I loved your fic! i can't belive you have stoped writting ...please put the next chap!
I loved your fic! i can't belive you have stoped writting ...please put the next chap!
6/11/2006 c6 14Hope-W
LOVED IT !
great fic...a really great fic!
please update as soon as possible please...loved it so much!
I really want to now what Katie is planing...and how was fred and Oliver talk!
kisses
14Hope-WLOVED IT !
great fic...a really great fic!
please update as soon as possible please...loved it so much!
I really want to now what Katie is planing...and how was fred and Oliver talk!
kisses
5/6/2006 c6 akkiej
omg! I want to know what happend next... well i hope oliver and Angelina stay together!
omg! I want to know what happend next... well i hope oliver and Angelina stay together!
3/2/2006 c4 3quidditchgirlie
ooh! Fred and Agelina Fic, my fav well, one of them! I can't wait to see what happens in this, very exciting. I can't wait for the next chappie! I'm just hoping that in the end they end up together hehehe ah!
3quidditchgirlieooh! Fred and Agelina Fic, my fav well, one of them! I can't wait to see what happens in this, very exciting. I can't wait for the next chappie! I'm just hoping that in the end they end up together hehehe ah!
2/19/2006 c4 Coreysband76
The story has progressed in a different way then I would have expexted, but...I like it. Ch 4 wasn't as bad at all, it leaves us in suspense of what is to come. I noticed a few grammatical errors, which were confusing, but overall I liked it. Update soon.
The story has progressed in a different way then I would have expexted, but...I like it. Ch 4 wasn't as bad at all, it leaves us in suspense of what is to come. I noticed a few grammatical errors, which were confusing, but overall I liked it. Update soon.
2/18/2006 c4 akkiej
Wow..Pretty cool chapter!
Can't wait
Wow..Pretty cool chapter!
Can't wait
2/6/2006 c3 pretzel.in.an.egg
lol, Nah his character is good. We don't know much about him really, so you can do whatever you like! Update soon!
~Claudia
lol, Nah his character is good. We don't know much about him really, so you can do whatever you like! Update soon!
~Claudia
2/5/2006 c3 akkiiej
no. you deffinetley not make him a different person.
Kinda like his additude!;)
I can't wait to read more off it.
(sorry for my english, its reallt bad, Iam From holland, I know lame excuse;) )
no. you deffinetley not make him a different person.
Kinda like his additude!;)
I can't wait to read more off it.
(sorry for my english, its reallt bad, Iam From holland, I know lame excuse;) )
1/22/2006 c2 1aDeathlyHallow
Hai,
I love your sory so far.
but i have a question.
You title: you keep me coming back for more, Is that from the song of ashlee simpson new album I am me
Coming back for more?
Akkiej
1aDeathlyHallowHai,
I love your sory so far.
but i have a question.
You title: you keep me coming back for more, Is that from the song of ashlee simpson new album I am me
Coming back for more?
Akkiej