for Old Soldiers Never Die5/8 c26 Guest
Brilliant Story!
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Brilliant Story!
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5/6 c26 
1ZylerLee
It is a bit choppy in the first few chapters but it quickly smoothes out. That being said this has to be one of the best stories I have ever read.
1ZylerLeeIt is a bit choppy in the first few chapters but it quickly smoothes out. That being said this has to be one of the best stories I have ever read.
5/2 c7 7DracoDreams-2
Nice I enjoyed the Omake it was good to see Killer McCoy and Zimmerman in this storyline it brings back good memories of the writings of W.E.B. Griffin I read all of the books on WW2 and Korea
7DracoDreams-2Nice I enjoyed the Omake it was good to see Killer McCoy and Zimmerman in this storyline it brings back good memories of the writings of W.E.B. Griffin I read all of the books on WW2 and Korea
4/25 c26 24Sar'Kalu
Wicked cool story, good amount of backstory added with a fairly good amount of research and whatnot, anyway, main complaint, being an Australian myself, you spelt Aussie wrong, so if you would be so kind to fix that, that'd be right grand. Cheers, mate, and you have yourself a good arvo.
24Sar'KaluWicked cool story, good amount of backstory added with a fairly good amount of research and whatnot, anyway, main complaint, being an Australian myself, you spelt Aussie wrong, so if you would be so kind to fix that, that'd be right grand. Cheers, mate, and you have yourself a good arvo.
4/23 c3 Susan M. M
A Letter of Marque for Major Potter and the 95th Rifles? Would Richard Sharpe approve?
A Letter of Marque for Major Potter and the 95th Rifles? Would Richard Sharpe approve?
4/23 c2 Susan M. M
Harry's magical puissance (albeit not yet completely trained) plus the knowledge and experience of Her Majesty's finest Squib NCOs ... neither Fudge nor Riddle will not what hit them.
Harry's magical puissance (albeit not yet completely trained) plus the knowledge and experience of Her Majesty's finest Squib NCOs ... neither Fudge nor Riddle will not what hit them.
4/19 c20 1syft3land
Loved your omake, I can picture 8 year old girl guides playing football with Death Eater heads :D If I didn't know any better, I'd say you were having a good time writing these chapters, but that would be an understatement, wouldn't it? I both look forward to and dread the rest of the story; I'm looking forward to find out how this is going to end, yet dread to finish reading it, at it would mean I'd have to find a new source of entertainment. Who knows, maybe I'll find the rest of your stories just as entertaining as this one? :D Keep up the good work, I'll make sure to read more of your stories after I finish this one :)
1syft3landLoved your omake, I can picture 8 year old girl guides playing football with Death Eater heads :D If I didn't know any better, I'd say you were having a good time writing these chapters, but that would be an understatement, wouldn't it? I both look forward to and dread the rest of the story; I'm looking forward to find out how this is going to end, yet dread to finish reading it, at it would mean I'd have to find a new source of entertainment. Who knows, maybe I'll find the rest of your stories just as entertaining as this one? :D Keep up the good work, I'll make sure to read more of your stories after I finish this one :)
4/16 c5 syft3land
Creativity: Check. Spelling: Check. Good Plot: Check. Congratulations, author, you have gained the respect of yet another reader, and a fellow writer. I've never seen anything like this, and me being interested in anything that is used in the context as the word 'military' or it's synonyms is just another bonus for you. I haven't spotted anything wrong so far, and among all the fanfics I've read, this one is placed somewhere among my top three favourites. The only thing that's left to make this complete (in my eyes) is a battlefield with Death Eaters on one side, and Major Potter with a bunch of soldiers and armored vehicles on the other. Again, excellent work, and keep delivering :)
May your creativity forever flow, and your stories remembered for an eternity.
Creativity: Check. Spelling: Check. Good Plot: Check. Congratulations, author, you have gained the respect of yet another reader, and a fellow writer. I've never seen anything like this, and me being interested in anything that is used in the context as the word 'military' or it's synonyms is just another bonus for you. I haven't spotted anything wrong so far, and among all the fanfics I've read, this one is placed somewhere among my top three favourites. The only thing that's left to make this complete (in my eyes) is a battlefield with Death Eaters on one side, and Major Potter with a bunch of soldiers and armored vehicles on the other. Again, excellent work, and keep delivering :)
May your creativity forever flow, and your stories remembered for an eternity.
4/9 c9 8Contramancer
This is good stuff. The 'Power He Knows Not' is because Volvo-mart (I get a kick out of making the Dark Lord sound like a used car dealership) has willfully ignored them...
8ContramancerThis is good stuff. The 'Power He Knows Not' is because Volvo-mart (I get a kick out of making the Dark Lord sound like a used car dealership) has willfully ignored them...
4/7 c7 2jacksonkanepotter4ever
Woah wait. You meaning to tell me that Frank and Alice are Moody's...hey, tell me if I'm wrong, ok?
2jacksonkanepotter4everWoah wait. You meaning to tell me that Frank and Alice are Moody's...hey, tell me if I'm wrong, ok?
4/1 c14 Tribernator
What I always hated about inspections is how they were rarely legit. Take the Air Force as an example. You get the first "free" inspection. It doesnt count for anything. Now, anyone with a functioning brain stem should be able to tell whats coming next. There are a dozen or more subjective points to the inspection that they can tear apart and claim you failed. Its a motivational tool to make you try even harder for the "real" inspections later on. Your bed isnt made "tight enough" your boots arent shiny "enough" "Look at all this dust!" as they show you immaculate white gloves. And even the real ones are silly because once again, over half of it is subjective so its clear that you will pass or fail mainly off of the TI's whim. They serve a purpose I guess. Teaching attention to detail, fostering teamwork as everyone goes over everyone elses space to make sure its all perfect, etc. But its a lot of stress with a false purpose they either expect you to figure out for yourself, as they will never admit it, or dont care if you understand as long as you do what they expect.
What I always hated about inspections is how they were rarely legit. Take the Air Force as an example. You get the first "free" inspection. It doesnt count for anything. Now, anyone with a functioning brain stem should be able to tell whats coming next. There are a dozen or more subjective points to the inspection that they can tear apart and claim you failed. Its a motivational tool to make you try even harder for the "real" inspections later on. Your bed isnt made "tight enough" your boots arent shiny "enough" "Look at all this dust!" as they show you immaculate white gloves. And even the real ones are silly because once again, over half of it is subjective so its clear that you will pass or fail mainly off of the TI's whim. They serve a purpose I guess. Teaching attention to detail, fostering teamwork as everyone goes over everyone elses space to make sure its all perfect, etc. But its a lot of stress with a false purpose they either expect you to figure out for yourself, as they will never admit it, or dont care if you understand as long as you do what they expect.