for Deal With The Devil4/19 c13 Good Story
The ending is very sad, but it fits for them, especially Seto. The way he treats her and all, it seems hard to actually think Tea could forgive and forgive forever. I think a person has to have a lot of patience to forgive forever. Anyways, good story, really realistic! (:
The ending is very sad, but it fits for them, especially Seto. The way he treats her and all, it seems hard to actually think Tea could forgive and forgive forever. I think a person has to have a lot of patience to forgive forever. Anyways, good story, really realistic! (:
3/4 c13 Z Angel-chan
The best Azureshipping story I have ever read :D. I am a big bookwoorm and a sucker for romance novels and any kinds of books that interest me :P. I fel so much for Tea/Anzu it was like I was reading an actual novel. I myself am writing a book and based off of my own fantasy world and would love to add a few characteristics from Seto's behaviour to one of my own characters. I have read many fanfics and there are obly a few of them that actually catch my attention. This one is my all time favourite and another one of a sasusaku fanfic which I read a few months ago. Seto's behaviour reminds me so much of Sasuke's behaviour in the parallel universe towards Sakura but the real Sasuke treats the real Sakura much better than the parallel univers Sasuke. Well I just wanted to praise you on writing such a good fanfic and I don't normally read an angst type fanfic but this one had me hooked. If YU-GI-OH didn't exist this would be a great short novel. Keep up the good work (_).
The best Azureshipping story I have ever read :D. I am a big bookwoorm and a sucker for romance novels and any kinds of books that interest me :P. I fel so much for Tea/Anzu it was like I was reading an actual novel. I myself am writing a book and based off of my own fantasy world and would love to add a few characteristics from Seto's behaviour to one of my own characters. I have read many fanfics and there are obly a few of them that actually catch my attention. This one is my all time favourite and another one of a sasusaku fanfic which I read a few months ago. Seto's behaviour reminds me so much of Sasuke's behaviour in the parallel universe towards Sakura but the real Sasuke treats the real Sakura much better than the parallel univers Sasuke. Well I just wanted to praise you on writing such a good fanfic and I don't normally read an angst type fanfic but this one had me hooked. If YU-GI-OH didn't exist this would be a great short novel. Keep up the good work (_).
12/26/2012 c13 Rebecca
Best ever. Love it!
Best ever. Love it!
11/14/2012 c13
4La Nuit Noire
Thanks goodness they didn't end up living together, happily ever after. That would've just been wrong. Their deaths surprised me. I thought maybe Tea would escape and he'd pay for his crimes and work on himself, but I guess I can see how all of this would end in death. Interesting story, great job.
4La Nuit NoireThanks goodness they didn't end up living together, happily ever after. That would've just been wrong. Their deaths surprised me. I thought maybe Tea would escape and he'd pay for his crimes and work on himself, but I guess I can see how all of this would end in death. Interesting story, great job.
7/8/2012 c13 Guest
uhh...i don't know about the ending. i was hoping seto would be locked up for all the crap he put tea through. I felt like you should've said something about how through death she was finally free of seto. But this is your story so i have no right to complain.
uhh...i don't know about the ending. i was hoping seto would be locked up for all the crap he put tea through. I felt like you should've said something about how through death she was finally free of seto. But this is your story so i have no right to complain.
6/27/2012 c13 Pancake030
This was amazing. The ending fit so well with it's tragic turns and bringing Seto and tea both to rest in each others arms seemed so...right! I cried!
This was amazing. The ending fit so well with it's tragic turns and bringing Seto and tea both to rest in each others arms seemed so...right! I cried!
5/7/2012 c13
14xXxSaiyanPrincessxXx
This was great, I definitely was not expecting that ending. The biggest problem I have with this story however, is all of the grammatical mistakes. It made the flow of the story bumpy.
14xXxSaiyanPrincessxXxThis was great, I definitely was not expecting that ending. The biggest problem I have with this story however, is all of the grammatical mistakes. It made the flow of the story bumpy.
12/20/2011 c8 Guest
omg... how i cringe whenever i read tea and seto together, espcially when they are getting intimate with each other. Cuz I'll never know if seto will slap tea and abuse her
this is really something different that i have ever read.Cant wait for the chapters i will be reading.
omg... how i cringe whenever i read tea and seto together, espcially when they are getting intimate with each other. Cuz I'll never know if seto will slap tea and abuse her
this is really something different that i have ever read.Cant wait for the chapters i will be reading.
9/11/2011 c13
2animechick999
I just would like to say that I find this story very disturbing. You had my stomach in knots. It was a wonderful read though, I read all 13 chapters in 4 hours! Hats off to you! Great work! :)
2animechick999I just would like to say that I find this story very disturbing. You had my stomach in knots. It was a wonderful read though, I read all 13 chapters in 4 hours! Hats off to you! Great work! :)
7/23/2011 c13
6Bishoppe
This is, no doubt, your best work. The portrayal of Kaiba as an abusive boyfriend seemed a little strange at first, but you made it very believable with the whole autophobia thing. You have an excellent knack for writing with emotion and you made me actually feel fear for Tea as the story progresses. Hats off to you (;
6BishoppeThis is, no doubt, your best work. The portrayal of Kaiba as an abusive boyfriend seemed a little strange at first, but you made it very believable with the whole autophobia thing. You have an excellent knack for writing with emotion and you made me actually feel fear for Tea as the story progresses. Hats off to you (;
7/21/2011 c13
12DramaQueen95
This is like my third time rereading this story and it seems to get better and better every time I read it! Your writing skills are amazing and your portrayal of Seto and Tea is amazing. I never would have associated autophobia with Seto. It's amazing how you pulled psychology into your story as well, lolz. Amazing story!
12DramaQueen95This is like my third time rereading this story and it seems to get better and better every time I read it! Your writing skills are amazing and your portrayal of Seto and Tea is amazing. I never would have associated autophobia with Seto. It's amazing how you pulled psychology into your story as well, lolz. Amazing story!
7/6/2011 c13 HoodedAngel
Such a well written story! I absolutely loved reading this! Well with the exception of Seto being so evil. I read this in one sitting, I just couldn't put it down. Thank you!
Such a well written story! I absolutely loved reading this! Well with the exception of Seto being so evil. I read this in one sitting, I just couldn't put it down. Thank you!
7/5/2011 c13 HoodedAngel
Such a well written story! I absolutely loved reading this! Well with the exception of Seto being so evil. I read this in one sitting, I just couldn't put it down. Thank you!
Such a well written story! I absolutely loved reading this! Well with the exception of Seto being so evil. I read this in one sitting, I just couldn't put it down. Thank you!
