for Why10/14/2009 c1 
1Nightmare on Stillwater
*crys* poor pyro, whys Magma vertually his perfect girl friend gotta be so mean on him T_T.
and as for his build he had a runners body not to buff not to thin
1Nightmare on Stillwater*crys* poor pyro, whys Magma vertually his perfect girl friend gotta be so mean on him T_T.
and as for his build he had a runners body not to buff not to thin
1/31/2009 c1 11Snoball13
aww... poor Pyro. i've never really thought of him that way. to me he's always been one of those very misunderstood characters who just needs something more to give him a purpose in life, or something like that. i've not yet decided if i like it or not, but that's just my personal taste. i don't like seeing pyro get hurt at all. altho, by ur writing, he's not. anyway, it was well written, just not to my personal taste.
11Snoball13aww... poor Pyro. i've never really thought of him that way. to me he's always been one of those very misunderstood characters who just needs something more to give him a purpose in life, or something like that. i've not yet decided if i like it or not, but that's just my personal taste. i don't like seeing pyro get hurt at all. altho, by ur writing, he's not. anyway, it was well written, just not to my personal taste.
11/26/2006 c1 asp
a wonderfully concise piece. didn't quite understand the last line tho. thanks for posting amyro fanfiction :)
a wonderfully concise piece. didn't quite understand the last line tho. thanks for posting amyro fanfiction :)
6/10/2006 c1 106Lizard Pie
i've read this... four or five times now, and it's still very good. excellent characterization of pyro!
106Lizard Piei've read this... four or five times now, and it's still very good. excellent characterization of pyro!
2/25/2006 c1 7Andy and Kevin French
Breathtaking in it's simplicity. What an intriguing couple. You're description of John was so very intune. I look forward to reading more from you.
7Andy and Kevin FrenchBreathtaking in it's simplicity. What an intriguing couple. You're description of John was so very intune. I look forward to reading more from you.