12/31/2010 c1 Duh
One word continuity some facts from buffy and charmed arnt exactly correct

8/27/2006 c1 52Stormshadow13
Hahahaha! Magneto as a girl. Hahahahaha! That's great! can't wait to read more.

3/25/2006 c1 4LycoX
lmfao! Hillarity throughout the fic! Turning Magnus into a woman! Priceless! Good work and I can't wait for the next fic!

3/6/2006 c1 2asha-man72
Great job, RogueFan!

I like how you start the story by setting up the peaceful surroundings only to blow them up. Andrew and Todd and Xi are going to do a lot of cleaning up over there, and Jake might just end up helping out.

One thing that becomes clear is that this one-shot doesn't just exist to further the Ghostbuster plot, but also to set up plot elements for the Kingdom Hearts crossover. I like that becuase there are a lot of things that need to be set-up. Take Angel and co., for example. Giles is cmpletely right to think that their stated reasons for joining W&H are illogical because the PTB have only revealed half the story. I wonder how he will react when the whole thing comes out.

While I want to have seen the entire conversation with Mr. Wyndham-Pryce, I think you did a good job giving us the highlights (He called the wrong sister selfish, but he still deserved the slap).

Another example of the set-up is how you describe which 'teams' will be going to which locations as part of the recruitment drive. We know some of the people you'll be bringing in and let us know that /both/ sides are making preparations for the Gathering. Very well done. I love the reason why Andrew is going to the past, by the way.

I also like that Sandra will be working with the Ghostbusters. I'm not loving the Quentin-love, though. Don't the Slayers pay attention to the words that come out of Quentin's mouth?

The Hellboy/Xander interaction is awesome. That is all.

Illyria likes ice cream? Who knew? Speaking of not knowing, I wonder when the Scoobies are finally going to let Buffy and Dawn know about Spike. /That/ would be something to see.

And then we come to Giles' spectacular failure to be helpful. To be fair, as it turned out there was probably nothing that Willow could have done to help, but Giles was still less than helpful. I like Willow and Faith brushing him off (especially Willow's 'Ripper' dig), but I also like Phoebe withholding judgement. I wonder how Giles' opinion of Angel will change when he finds out what really happened at W&H (on the one hand, he joined up to save his son and afterwards he did everything he could to minimize the damage W&H did. On the other, some of the stuff he did near the end was vile- betraying and murdering Drogyn, letting Bruckner's opponent be mindfucked into thinking he's a pedophile, etc.).

The Angel/Andrew conversation was very nicely done. "Andrew…I’m the last person around here who deserves the right to hold a grudge." All too true, I'm afraid.

But before things get too serious, the story shifts to feudal Japan. I like how Quenting is trying to explain everything while Andrew is in the background pocketing everything he can get his hands on- including a shard of the sacred Shikon Jewel. I shudder to think of what might happen if he kept the shard. That there is a terrifying thought.

I like Dana becoming a geek by osmosis. I don't know why exactly, but I do.

And then we meet Inuyasha and co. While Kagome is gushing, and everybody else is just staring blankly, Miroku starts hitting on the new pretty women. I'm not sure about him groping breasts, though. He's usually more of an ass-man, from what I remember. Whether breat or ass, Caridad's response is completely appropriate. I'm only surprised that Sango didn't join in.

I had to snicker at Paige's response to Miroku about 'innocents.' No matter what the time period, people don't exactly think about what constitues 'innocent.'

The end scene was hysterical. I like how you slowly top each bad day with one even worse. Phoebe: sparring with Giles and receiving the mother of all homework assignments. Paige: fighting off a demon army and a complete perv. Piper: encountering the world's foremost mutant terrorists on their own turf, on what was supposed to be a romantic getaway.

And then you had Piper turn Magneto into a woman. You do realize that the X-Men and Misfits will love Piper if that gets out, especially if they find out that Magneto's going through 'her' period, right? Hell, Wanda will probably beg Piper to do the same to Pietro!

"And the Powers That Be are never wrong." This version of Jenny really likes to fudge the truth, doesn't she? *coughJASMINE!JASMINE!cough* Granted, she's completely correct (and definitely telling the truth) about needing all the help they can get, but she shouldn't go around flat-out lying.

I like the Charmed Ones concluding that jail would be better than Ghostbusters HQ. It would not be so funny if it was not so very true. Of course, they wouldn't be able to do much good from a jail cell, but even so...

Once again: great job, RogueFan! Enjoy your vacation! Have fun at Disney World!

3/4/2006 c1 36Theodore Hawkwood
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Paige responded, doing her best to maintain her temper with great annoyance and restraint, “Long story short, fought a bunch of ogres in feudal Japan and gained a few new recruits, in which one of them is a complete and disgusting perverted letch named Miroku!”

“So…you got hurt fighting the army of ogres?” Phoebe asked.

“No, I got hurt from stubbing my toe when I kicked Miroku for groping me during battle!” Paige shouted, now turning very red in the face and nearly losing her composure. Phoebe raised an eyebrow.

End Quote...

Heh heh heh heh heh...I wonder what would happen if Miroku from this story were to run across Ted from my story...

Ted: He'll get a Canuck-Israeli style ass kicking!

Miroku: HELP! AGH!

Me: Ted, put down that ice ax! I mean it! It's for scaling walls of ice, not murdering Japanese priests!

Ted: Neccessity is the mother of invention!

Miroku: Aren't you religious or something Ted!

Ted: In this case I'm making an exception.

Me: Roguefan, you'd best help me keep Ted from killing Miroku for groping Paige...Or call Lifeline.

I must say, Piper in full bitch mode never gets old. I love the fact that she promptly waded in and beat the living daylights outta Louie! I just about died laughing at that scene. Not to mention the fact that the entire Island caught fire, they waded through a swamp, and LEO got involved in beating someone up. My has hell frozen over.

Piper: YOU'RE BOTH INSANE!

Me: Hey, calm down, at least you got to beat Sands up last chapter of my fic.

Sands: Yeah, it's abuse of the handicapped...

And the real kicker was the fact that Magneto got turned into a woman! BWAH HAH HAH HAH HAH! Dare I ask if that transformation is going to be of the permanent variety? I wonder how the Misfits are gonna react to the sight of Magneto as a woman. I look forward to the rest of what you have written...

Theodore Hawkwood

3/4/2006 c1 Sparky Genocide
This was competlely awesome! I love the direction your taking. I also loved the conflict between Angel and Giles, although Angel wasn't wrong about what he said. And Willow and Faith's reactions adding to the drama made it more intense. I'm glad Angel and Andrew patched things up.

But I did notice a couple of mistakes...

Quentin doesn't refer to people by their first names- his way of not getting attached to mortals. He refers them to their last names if they have one.

Also, it's Ghosbusters Inc, not Ghostbusters United. Ghostbusters United is just a title.

And Toby's not a teenager anymore. He was when he joined the EGBs in 1998. But that's okay!

Also, I do have a suggestion...You might have wanted to make more details about the Ghostbusters, especially the EGBs since their show was syndicated, along with my OCs. Readers might not be familiar with EGB or my characters. Although Quentin is an old man, he has the body of a teenager.

RGB and EGB aren't owned by Filmation. RGB is owned by Sony and DIC. And EGB is owned by Sony and BKN. The group Tracy's in is owned by Filmation.

But all in all, good job!

I was happy to see Hellboy make a guest appearance. But remember, in my story, his buddy Abe Sapien joins the firm. Also, it was cool that Phantom Investigators, Danny Phantom, Tracy and Spawn were mentioned.

Well, it's going to be a little painful that you'll be off for a month. But you deserve some time off.

I found it hysterrical that Andrew was psyched about the ancient weapons and Miroku coming on to Paige and the Potentials. The monk never learns, does he?

By the way, how did the Ghostbusters find out about Vlad and the Purifiers?

It was also funny that Illyria beat up Spike for eating her ice cream. Bad move on Spike's part.

And Magneto being turned into a woman was outrageously funny...and he's having his ladies' days. Priceless!

Anyway, I loved this. Thanks for doing this.