for Harry Potter and the Final Battle5/2 c12 Engrprince
Great Job with Ginny angry, jealous but still did not want Hermione dead. Depth of character. You did well :)
Great Job with Ginny angry, jealous but still did not want Hermione dead. Depth of character. You did well :)
5/2 c11 Engrprince
Great writing concerning Molly most stories have her with no depth and very selfish, but you handled it very well
Great writing concerning Molly most stories have her with no depth and very selfish, but you handled it very well
5/2 c10 Engrprince
Great chapter, believable HP/HG conflict. Only criticism is how did Draco find them? I have always thought Draco and Snape got off easy in the books. You have dealt well with Draco I hope Snape gets the same fate.
Great chapter, believable HP/HG conflict. Only criticism is how did Draco find them? I have always thought Draco and Snape got off easy in the books. You have dealt well with Draco I hope Snape gets the same fate.
5/2 c3 Engrprince
I enjoy your premise and the slow development of the relationship. Very captivating.
I enjoy your premise and the slow development of the relationship. Very captivating.
3/28 c33 Guest
Like the ending.
Like the ending.
3/28 c24 Guest
Funny.
Funny.
2/27 c30 
4Covante
You have Hermione tell Ron that it's only 9 o'clock and ask why Seamus and Dean would already be in bed then the next thing we see she is heading to bed with Harry and herself is too tired to bother undressing. That's not exactly a seamless transition.
4CovanteYou have Hermione tell Ron that it's only 9 o'clock and ask why Seamus and Dean would already be in bed then the next thing we see she is heading to bed with Harry and herself is too tired to bother undressing. That's not exactly a seamless transition.
2/2 c10 Guest
Angst angst angst angst angst angst. No plot. Pure angst. Idiot Harry who would even THINK to say Hermione took advantage of him. More angst. Angst angst.
Outside of the immaturity and angst you are a talented writer. Id LOVE to see you write anything except this drama filled piece of crap we have here.
Angst angst angst angst angst angst. No plot. Pure angst. Idiot Harry who would even THINK to say Hermione took advantage of him. More angst. Angst angst.
Outside of the immaturity and angst you are a talented writer. Id LOVE to see you write anything except this drama filled piece of crap we have here.
11/18/2012 c7 Nargles Rock
Awesomely written.
Awesomely written.
10/8/2012 c33 2dEVIL iN dISGUISE2
This story was absolutely amazing! I've never read anything like it. The way that you interpreted the horcrux problem was awesome. I cant wait to read more of your work!
This story was absolutely amazing! I've never read anything like it. The way that you interpreted the horcrux problem was awesome. I cant wait to read more of your work!
10/4/2012 c33 Dagger-Seishin
lol good point i would be to lol
could use one last chapter to kinda exaplin life after marriage maybe. let us know about everyones life now.
lol good point i would be to lol
could use one last chapter to kinda exaplin life after marriage maybe. let us know about everyones life now.
8/19/2012 c33 10LucidRush
This was a brilliant fic and although i was a bit disappointed in there not being an epilogue, it is still one of my favorite fics that i have read to date (and i read quite a bit). I would love to see another fic set in the Harry Potter universe from you. Thank you for taking the time to write this.
Kenoske
10LucidRushThis was a brilliant fic and although i was a bit disappointed in there not being an epilogue, it is still one of my favorite fics that i have read to date (and i read quite a bit). I would love to see another fic set in the Harry Potter universe from you. Thank you for taking the time to write this.
Kenoske
6/13/2012 c33 RandomFanDude
Great story. I'm glad you had the resolution between Harry and Hermione in the last chapter; it really bugged me that in 32 it seemed like the entire problem was dropped after one night. Putting it on hold until after the final battle seems much better.
I think it's ended pretty well without an epilogue.
Great story. I'm glad you had the resolution between Harry and Hermione in the last chapter; it really bugged me that in 32 it seemed like the entire problem was dropped after one night. Putting it on hold until after the final battle seems much better.
I think it's ended pretty well without an epilogue.