for Harry Potter and the Final Battle4/5/2006 c6 
4shdurrani
the insufferable git will always be one and Ginny is going to be a bit jealous for sure. keep up thegreat work.
till next time
Alex
4shdurranithe insufferable git will always be one and Ginny is going to be a bit jealous for sure. keep up thegreat work.
till next time
Alex
4/5/2006 c6 7jabarber69
Hey great story, love it, wish I could say more but I see my boss heading toward me!
7jabarber69Hey great story, love it, wish I could say more but I see my boss heading toward me!
4/5/2006 c6 7Gryffindor-Sword
All I can say is not a bad chapter and I hope that Ginny doesn't blow her top when she finds out what Harry and Hermione are up to. Keep up the good work!
7Gryffindor-SwordAll I can say is not a bad chapter and I hope that Ginny doesn't blow her top when she finds out what Harry and Hermione are up to. Keep up the good work!
4/5/2006 c5 1Jarno
Nice story, I like the idea.
I would have Harry train though because Love is all fine and dandy but it won't work if you can't reach Voldemort. And seeing as harry can't even beat Snape, he'll need a lot of training to be able to take on the deatheaters, let alone Voldemort.
1JarnoNice story, I like the idea.
I would have Harry train though because Love is all fine and dandy but it won't work if you can't reach Voldemort. And seeing as harry can't even beat Snape, he'll need a lot of training to be able to take on the deatheaters, let alone Voldemort.
4/4/2006 c5 bjon66
This is a nice story.. You do a very good job of putting Harry and Hermione together,, as it should be...lol..
i can't wait for the next chapter...
This is a nice story.. You do a very good job of putting Harry and Hermione together,, as it should be...lol..
i can't wait for the next chapter...
4/4/2006 c5 7Gryffindor-Sword
What a lovely set of chapters! Loved the way that Hermione blew her top at the Dursleys' and they deserved that shot of insults. Not much else to say except keep up the good work!
7Gryffindor-SwordWhat a lovely set of chapters! Loved the way that Hermione blew her top at the Dursleys' and they deserved that shot of insults. Not much else to say except keep up the good work!
4/4/2006 c5 Jab843
Great Story!
I can hardly wait untill you update it, and I hope it is in the very near feature.
I like how you have made an excelent marrage between the two characters Hermoine and Harry, for I have been looking for a story like yours for a long time.
You preformed excelently on the connection between the wedding band's.
One part of your writing that confused me a little bit, was the fact that everyone knew Hermoine's name. I mean in previous books there was no connection b/t Ms. Fig or Griphoke and Hermoine.
Another sugesstion is that you don't make the action of Harry so jumpy, for an example I got lost when Hermoine had placed her hand on his thigh went a little to fast, but when they went into the hallway you fixed it.
Also I like the fact that the other Characters vanish, b/c the story really desn't need them anymore. I hope its not a lord of the rings where one chapter is the followers of the ring ( the best part) then you have to read the boring part about frodo and the ring.
I like how you handled Hermoine and Harry leaving the wizarding world. I also like how these situations you outline are ones that almost everyone can connect to.
I don't know whether your a girl or boy, but you have the part of a boy well outlined in the fact of their eyes being unable to keep away from the woman's chest or the man constantly thinking about the girl in question.
Overall an excelent story,
Hope you update son!
I mean really soon.
Your Faithfull Reader,
Jab843
Great Story!
I can hardly wait untill you update it, and I hope it is in the very near feature.
I like how you have made an excelent marrage between the two characters Hermoine and Harry, for I have been looking for a story like yours for a long time.
You preformed excelently on the connection between the wedding band's.
One part of your writing that confused me a little bit, was the fact that everyone knew Hermoine's name. I mean in previous books there was no connection b/t Ms. Fig or Griphoke and Hermoine.
Another sugesstion is that you don't make the action of Harry so jumpy, for an example I got lost when Hermoine had placed her hand on his thigh went a little to fast, but when they went into the hallway you fixed it.
Also I like the fact that the other Characters vanish, b/c the story really desn't need them anymore. I hope its not a lord of the rings where one chapter is the followers of the ring ( the best part) then you have to read the boring part about frodo and the ring.
I like how you handled Hermoine and Harry leaving the wizarding world. I also like how these situations you outline are ones that almost everyone can connect to.
I don't know whether your a girl or boy, but you have the part of a boy well outlined in the fact of their eyes being unable to keep away from the woman's chest or the man constantly thinking about the girl in question.
Overall an excelent story,
Hope you update son!
I mean really soon.
Your Faithfull Reader,
Jab843
4/4/2006 c5 The Thirteenth Sapphire
I love your story, and I love how you took HBP and turned the future into the best coupling. I hope that you'll be able to update soon, I cant wait til you make it offical for them. It was also nice to see Hermoine taking charge in getting Harry away from the Dursley's. Thanks for such a great story!
I love your story, and I love how you took HBP and turned the future into the best coupling. I hope that you'll be able to update soon, I cant wait til you make it offical for them. It was also nice to see Hermoine taking charge in getting Harry away from the Dursley's. Thanks for such a great story!
4/4/2006 c5 1xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx
This chapter was great, i love this story! Is Harry eventually going to admit he loves Hermione? Is Hermione eventually going to admit she loves Harry? I hope they do they're ment for each other, it's like a match made in heaven. They couldn't hear each others thought straight after they put the rings on so, i think it's that kiss that triggered it because they love each other. Please update soon i really want to see what happens with Harry and Hermione.
1xxxxParvati-PatilxxxxThis chapter was great, i love this story! Is Harry eventually going to admit he loves Hermione? Is Hermione eventually going to admit she loves Harry? I hope they do they're ment for each other, it's like a match made in heaven. They couldn't hear each others thought straight after they put the rings on so, i think it's that kiss that triggered it because they love each other. Please update soon i really want to see what happens with Harry and Hermione.
4/4/2006 c5 HarryPotter'sCharmedTwilight
Great story so far. I can't wait to read more.
Update again soon.
Great story so far. I can't wait to read more.
Update again soon.