for To See the Unnoticed When Blind5/17 c62 Locura
Well! now I've read more! It's still fun, though I wish I hadn't stayed up until 3 to finish it, especially as I have just discovered it's not done. :P
Well! now I've read more! It's still fun, though I wish I hadn't stayed up until 3 to finish it, especially as I have just discovered it's not done. :P
5/2 c62
2Tooloverorhate
Please update this story soon. It is one of the very best stories that I have ever read. I love the raw emotional feeling and details that you put into. So please update it soon
2TooloverorhatePlease update this story soon. It is one of the very best stories that I have ever read. I love the raw emotional feeling and details that you put into. So please update it soon
3/30 c62
1v-alice
Wow! Awesome story! Can't wait for more! And oh god Sesshoumaru...you kill me with suspense
1v-aliceWow! Awesome story! Can't wait for more! And oh god Sesshoumaru...you kill me with suspense
3/27 c31 v-alice
Halfway through the story and this hardheaded fool is still ignoring his feelings. Tsk tsk
On another note, I love ur story
Halfway through the story and this hardheaded fool is still ignoring his feelings. Tsk tsk
On another note, I love ur story
3/10 c62 Kathy
I wrote a very long review anti don't think it saved!
Well I read all 62 chaps and I love this story a lot. I can't wait for more and I love the pace that you've taken for their relationship. Very appropriate. Some stories start off very good but then they hook Kags and Sesshomaru too fast and ruin the whole thing. Good job in keeping so many readers. Also, love the bit with the demigod and Kagome
I wrote a very long review anti don't think it saved!
Well I read all 62 chaps and I love this story a lot. I can't wait for more and I love the pace that you've taken for their relationship. Very appropriate. Some stories start off very good but then they hook Kags and Sesshomaru too fast and ruin the whole thing. Good job in keeping so many readers. Also, love the bit with the demigod and Kagome
3/8 c62 Kathy
I have finally read all 62 chapters... What a story. I really like it. And I loved that part of the Demi-god kiss. Awesome! I also love the pace that its been getting at. Some writers just couple Sesshomaru and Kagome so fast I lose interest in the story and stop reading. But this one had me hooked. Kagome gets a little annoying sometimes, she needs to start kicking some butts! I really liked the Demi- god. You should bring him a little more. Lol
But of course.. Sesshomaru is the number one! Can't wait for your update. Good job with this story.
I have finally read all 62 chapters... What a story. I really like it. And I loved that part of the Demi-god kiss. Awesome! I also love the pace that its been getting at. Some writers just couple Sesshomaru and Kagome so fast I lose interest in the story and stop reading. But this one had me hooked. Kagome gets a little annoying sometimes, she needs to start kicking some butts! I really liked the Demi- god. You should bring him a little more. Lol
But of course.. Sesshomaru is the number one! Can't wait for your update. Good job with this story.
2/14 c62 Hfkgit
I've never reviewed before, but I thought It would be a good idea to start now. After all, I've read lots of fanfictions, mostly sesskag, and this is still my favorite one. Maybe because you've managed to make a romance between Sesshoumaru and Kagome without them being OOC. Some fanfiction authos, when writting a romance with this two characters, either make one or both of their personalities so different that it's almost impossible to recognize the characters. There are some awesome stories like that too, when the storie's plot is good, but most are not. When the author gives good and beliavable reasons in the story for the character's change in personality, then it's fine. But there are stories where Kagome suddenly becames a ** or a killer without any reason. It's more common for Sesshoumaru to be OOC, which is usually not a problem because his personality is so difficult to work with that we usuallly don't mind that it's a bit modified. Of course, there are times the authors exagerate. Sesshoumaru being a cold-blooded psicopath killer in one chapter and all sweet and caring one thousand words later is rather weird to see. It's usually strange when things happen very fast in the stories and the situations doesn't have much descriptions. I've seen a story where Kagome takes all of her feudal era friends to her time and all that happens there is explained in four lines. Or where she meets Sesshoumaru, falls in love with, marry and divorce him, and then marry him again and have a child in a little more than three hundred words. This story (your story, not the one I just mentioned) is my favorite because their personalities are quite right, the things that happened in the storie were beliavable, making the changes that happened to the chacacters along the stories beliavable, and the story is well written (english is not my natural language, but that was the impression I got). There are people out there who put internet languages, abreviations and even emoticons in the stories (there are authors who instead of saying, for example, "Kagome was surprised at his reaction" simply put "Kagome :-O at his reaction"). Sorry for the big review. I know I talk too much.
I've never reviewed before, but I thought It would be a good idea to start now. After all, I've read lots of fanfictions, mostly sesskag, and this is still my favorite one. Maybe because you've managed to make a romance between Sesshoumaru and Kagome without them being OOC. Some fanfiction authos, when writting a romance with this two characters, either make one or both of their personalities so different that it's almost impossible to recognize the characters. There are some awesome stories like that too, when the storie's plot is good, but most are not. When the author gives good and beliavable reasons in the story for the character's change in personality, then it's fine. But there are stories where Kagome suddenly becames a ** or a killer without any reason. It's more common for Sesshoumaru to be OOC, which is usually not a problem because his personality is so difficult to work with that we usuallly don't mind that it's a bit modified. Of course, there are times the authors exagerate. Sesshoumaru being a cold-blooded psicopath killer in one chapter and all sweet and caring one thousand words later is rather weird to see. It's usually strange when things happen very fast in the stories and the situations doesn't have much descriptions. I've seen a story where Kagome takes all of her feudal era friends to her time and all that happens there is explained in four lines. Or where she meets Sesshoumaru, falls in love with, marry and divorce him, and then marry him again and have a child in a little more than three hundred words. This story (your story, not the one I just mentioned) is my favorite because their personalities are quite right, the things that happened in the storie were beliavable, making the changes that happened to the chacacters along the stories beliavable, and the story is well written (english is not my natural language, but that was the impression I got). There are people out there who put internet languages, abreviations and even emoticons in the stories (there are authors who instead of saying, for example, "Kagome was surprised at his reaction" simply put "Kagome :-O at his reaction"). Sorry for the big review. I know I talk too much.
2/12 c62 strawberryknight
what!? noooo i didnt even realize that there was no more, i love this story, please write more!
what!? noooo i didnt even realize that there was no more, i love this story, please write more!
2/10 c62 Guest
love it
love it
2/10 c62
6Ditto Princess
WHAT!
Amazing update and I love this story and I love it and I love it and I love it!
I love your mind for scoming up with this and I just love it!
Things are about to get real and I'll be here every step of the way :)
_-_ - Ditto Princess
6Ditto PrincessWHAT!
Amazing update and I love this story and I love it and I love it and I love it!
I love your mind for scoming up with this and I just love it!
Things are about to get real and I'll be here every step of the way :)
_-_ - Ditto Princess
