for Breaking Walls3/26 c18 Redstart
I'm really enjoying the story but PLEASE! look up the difference between depravation (from depraved) and deprivation (from deprived) and update all the places you malign Rodney when talking about him undergoing sensory depravation (or maybe for the fun of it you really did mean depravation?).
I'm really enjoying the story but PLEASE! look up the difference between depravation (from depraved) and deprivation (from deprived) and update all the places you malign Rodney when talking about him undergoing sensory depravation (or maybe for the fun of it you really did mean depravation?).
3/19 c31 Irowael
This is my third time reading this story and I still love it. Some parts are a little bit slow but I blame that on my very small knowledge of more than 2 seasons of SG1. Just wanted to tell you that this is my favorite story on ff B-)
This is my third time reading this story and I still love it. Some parts are a little bit slow but I blame that on my very small knowledge of more than 2 seasons of SG1. Just wanted to tell you that this is my favorite story on ff B-)
8/13/2012 c31 ovolactopesco
Hey me again ! I checked and shame on me I didn't post a review for BW. Sometimes I'm reading several stories at the same time and forget to congratulate the writers. This one desserves it ! To be accurate it desserves 31 reviews and some good ones lol. I have nothing to add expect to reiterate my wishes to see you again on FF !
Hey me again ! I checked and shame on me I didn't post a review for BW. Sometimes I'm reading several stories at the same time and forget to congratulate the writers. This one desserves it ! To be accurate it desserves 31 reviews and some good ones lol. I have nothing to add expect to reiterate my wishes to see you again on FF !
5/10/2012 c31 
5clerical medical
wow, this was amazing, totally epic. And I completely love what you did with Zelenka.
5clerical medicalwow, this was amazing, totally epic. And I completely love what you did with Zelenka.
4/29/2012 c8 Guest
Why is Radek trying to kill Rodney? Citrus allergy, orange juice. Bad combo. You might want to edit that to apple?
Why is Radek trying to kill Rodney? Citrus allergy, orange juice. Bad combo. You might want to edit that to apple?
1/23/2012 c31 9frauleina
I loved this story! I'm so glad I went looking through my old bookmarks for something to read. I think the last time I read this story you were on about chapter 13! Awesome, well thought out plot and characterization is really your strength. I have just spent the weekend reading all 31 chapters and am pleased in every way with how you developed the story, Rodney's past and present being revealed often through other cast members was excellent.
You have a true knack at spinning a tale that is believable - given the story line of the show as well as keeping some thing unpredictable. I honestly did not see many of the plot developments coming. Lastly you have a nice way of adding character touches to the story that make it feel - somehow more real - fore instance, I remember your writing in the early part of the story that Weir and Teyla discussed which were the most charming men on the base and how Elizabeth felt Rodney should be considered part of that group, simply for his very matter of a fact way of complimenting others when it struck him to do so. Also, the new characters - the NID/CIA men were human and real enough that they didn't seem like villians, nor did we feel forced to dislike them from the beginning, it was through the story telling process that our dislike was allowed to grow - through the perceptions of your other characters receiving the story as it unfolded.
I'm looking forward to reading the sequel! Thanks for sharing!
9frauleinaI loved this story! I'm so glad I went looking through my old bookmarks for something to read. I think the last time I read this story you were on about chapter 13! Awesome, well thought out plot and characterization is really your strength. I have just spent the weekend reading all 31 chapters and am pleased in every way with how you developed the story, Rodney's past and present being revealed often through other cast members was excellent.
You have a true knack at spinning a tale that is believable - given the story line of the show as well as keeping some thing unpredictable. I honestly did not see many of the plot developments coming. Lastly you have a nice way of adding character touches to the story that make it feel - somehow more real - fore instance, I remember your writing in the early part of the story that Weir and Teyla discussed which were the most charming men on the base and how Elizabeth felt Rodney should be considered part of that group, simply for his very matter of a fact way of complimenting others when it struck him to do so. Also, the new characters - the NID/CIA men were human and real enough that they didn't seem like villians, nor did we feel forced to dislike them from the beginning, it was through the story telling process that our dislike was allowed to grow - through the perceptions of your other characters receiving the story as it unfolded.
I'm looking forward to reading the sequel! Thanks for sharing!
10/6/2011 c31 4Feather32
How have I not read this before! It was so amazingly written. I've stayed up the last two nights just reading this. I loved how incorporated some of the actual episodes into your story and made them fit in with everything that was happening. This story is now on my favorites list. :)
4Feather32How have I not read this before! It was so amazingly written. I've stayed up the last two nights just reading this. I loved how incorporated some of the actual episodes into your story and made them fit in with everything that was happening. This story is now on my favorites list. :)
4/27/2011 c31 alokin
I cant remember , is this how Baal is in Stargate ?
Cause I wonder what would have happened if he got his way ...
He clearly doesnt care about anyone and wants to make himself god but he is trying to do it in a way that makes "almost" everyone happy ... Or at least taken care of ...
Remember Stargate Continuum ?
He won over the Goauld by clever strategy not massacre , gave Jaffa freedom and even didnt want to destroy Earth even if without the Stargate it was defenseless against a huge fleet ...
His unusual policy was to give everyone what they want .
Well , Im not sure how Earth would fare divided between the Goaulds .
Its kinda weird . When he came to Earth , he became the embodiment of cruel side of capitalism in my opinion .
I cant quite describe my feelings about Baals character ...
Awesome story . Supreme ending .
I cant remember , is this how Baal is in Stargate ?
Cause I wonder what would have happened if he got his way ...
He clearly doesnt care about anyone and wants to make himself god but he is trying to do it in a way that makes "almost" everyone happy ... Or at least taken care of ...
Remember Stargate Continuum ?
He won over the Goauld by clever strategy not massacre , gave Jaffa freedom and even didnt want to destroy Earth even if without the Stargate it was defenseless against a huge fleet ...
His unusual policy was to give everyone what they want .
Well , Im not sure how Earth would fare divided between the Goaulds .
Its kinda weird . When he came to Earth , he became the embodiment of cruel side of capitalism in my opinion .
I cant quite describe my feelings about Baals character ...
Awesome story . Supreme ending .
4/26/2011 c12 alokin
Oh my God .
My eyes actually watered at the end of the chapter ...
Ive read plenty of fanfiction and in my humble opinion , this can make it into top 20 of best written and best characterization fics ...
Oh my God .
My eyes actually watered at the end of the chapter ...
Ive read plenty of fanfiction and in my humble opinion , this can make it into top 20 of best written and best characterization fics ...
4/21/2011 c7 Zigzag Tiger
Zed pm's.. Two mistakes there.
One, it doesn't have an apostrophe. It doesn't own anything ;D.
And two, it should just be ZPM. It's only a different pronounciation. See, I'm Australian. It would just be wrong if I made everyone say Zea PM, except for Rodney, and a few others, wouldn't it? It's a mistake used EVERYWHERE in fanfics.
Ahh, sorry :(. I just can't stand mistakes, Haha..
No, I am truly sorry or poking holes in your story.. Well, not really 'poking holes', but.. Oh, and btw, while I'm at it...
O'NEILL! TWO 'L's Hahahaha! Love him! Glad you put him in :D
Happy Easter!
Zed pm's.. Two mistakes there.
One, it doesn't have an apostrophe. It doesn't own anything ;D.
And two, it should just be ZPM. It's only a different pronounciation. See, I'm Australian. It would just be wrong if I made everyone say Zea PM, except for Rodney, and a few others, wouldn't it? It's a mistake used EVERYWHERE in fanfics.
Ahh, sorry :(. I just can't stand mistakes, Haha..
No, I am truly sorry or poking holes in your story.. Well, not really 'poking holes', but.. Oh, and btw, while I'm at it...
O'NEILL! TWO 'L's Hahahaha! Love him! Glad you put him in :D
Happy Easter!
4/2/2011 c25 gar-bit
Oh, my gosh! (wild flailing) It was Bobby Freedman! In C-block! With the Rodney! (hopping in place) I'm having the good kind of heart attack!...if there is such a thing as a good heart attack...
Oh, my gosh! (wild flailing) It was Bobby Freedman! In C-block! With the Rodney! (hopping in place) I'm having the good kind of heart attack!...if there is such a thing as a good heart attack...
5/12/2010 c19 2hajimebassaidai
I liked Daniel trying very hard not to repeat dying! I guess the novelty value has seriously worn off!
Also love the whole role that you've carved out for Jack, along with not having SG1 believe his cover for a minute.
2hajimebassaidaiI liked Daniel trying very hard not to repeat dying! I guess the novelty value has seriously worn off!
Also love the whole role that you've carved out for Jack, along with not having SG1 believe his cover for a minute.