for Loving You Behind Closed Doors2/18 c1 Nuggets
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Everyone that sees this sign the petition to get Kim Possible back! Copy and Paste this everywhere to try and get people to signing it. Sigh up with everyone in your family that has an email.
DO WHAT HAS TO BE DONE! Just take out the space and sign on that page!
www .thepetition /164/600/385/bring-kim-possible-back-to-disney-channel/
Wooh!
1/21 c16 Khazad
Seriously? A cliff hanger on a story that hasn't been updated in 5 months? ._.
Now that's just mean, I really hope you will update this story since it was pretty fantastic so far.
Seriously? A cliff hanger on a story that hasn't been updated in 5 months? ._.
Now that's just mean, I really hope you will update this story since it was pretty fantastic so far.
1/13 c1 Guest
I am vary much looking fowerd to the next chapter and the one after that as well i hope to see them soon
I am vary much looking fowerd to the next chapter and the one after that as well i hope to see them soon
12/8/2012 c16 
3ExtremeHelix1
Great story! For some reason I seem to always look forward to the next chapter (most the time anyways) like I was going to start a new story, even though some of the chapters kind of get boring (kind of). It's like the information has to be told it just gets kind of tiring, but still you seem to keep it more interesting than a lot of others, well I not sure if interesting is the right word to use, like I said I what to read the next chapter cliff hanger or not, I guess that's not correct either, I what to see what happens next whether it is exciting or not might be a better way to put it.
Anyways I think your better at Drama, Romance, Anger, and feelings rather then action, but that doesn't mean I don't what to see what happens next.
I would like to congratulate you on your successful Rongo story (why isn't it called RoGo) not on it popularity but on a great storyline, and writing.
Unity for better writing
3ExtremeHelix1Great story! For some reason I seem to always look forward to the next chapter (most the time anyways) like I was going to start a new story, even though some of the chapters kind of get boring (kind of). It's like the information has to be told it just gets kind of tiring, but still you seem to keep it more interesting than a lot of others, well I not sure if interesting is the right word to use, like I said I what to read the next chapter cliff hanger or not, I guess that's not correct either, I what to see what happens next whether it is exciting or not might be a better way to put it.
Anyways I think your better at Drama, Romance, Anger, and feelings rather then action, but that doesn't mean I don't what to see what happens next.
I would like to congratulate you on your successful Rongo story (why isn't it called RoGo) not on it popularity but on a great storyline, and writing.
Unity for better writing
11/6/2012 c16 Noplayster
Hey, I'm glad you aren't dead and that you're still writing this story. One of the things that I love about this that you portray Kim as pushy, nosy, and self-centered (which she is how she really is in the show). Very few writers (including the writers of the show) actually call her out on these characteristics.
One of the things that always bugged me about the show is that we were just expected to overlook her negative character traits and mistreatment of others around her simply because she's beautiful, funny, and smart. We see the tv show make Ron go through hell every time he does anything wrong, but Kim gets a free pass nearly every time. And honestly, her misdeeds are usually worse and more hypocritical.
Though I believe that this is actually pretty strong evidence that the story of "Kim Possible" is not actually about Kim. It's about Ron. He is the one with the character arc. The one who improves and overcomes his natural imperfections. He's the one who actually has real challenges, difficulties, and painful obstacles that he overcomes. Most of his problems, issues, and difficulties are overcome by the last episode of the series and he ends the story having triumphed over all of them (with almost no help from Kim). The whole series is simply Ron's "Coming of Age" and "Accepting his Destiny" story. At least in my opinion.
So yeah, good job on not pulling punches on Kim's character.
Hey, I'm glad you aren't dead and that you're still writing this story. One of the things that I love about this that you portray Kim as pushy, nosy, and self-centered (which she is how she really is in the show). Very few writers (including the writers of the show) actually call her out on these characteristics.
One of the things that always bugged me about the show is that we were just expected to overlook her negative character traits and mistreatment of others around her simply because she's beautiful, funny, and smart. We see the tv show make Ron go through hell every time he does anything wrong, but Kim gets a free pass nearly every time. And honestly, her misdeeds are usually worse and more hypocritical.
Though I believe that this is actually pretty strong evidence that the story of "Kim Possible" is not actually about Kim. It's about Ron. He is the one with the character arc. The one who improves and overcomes his natural imperfections. He's the one who actually has real challenges, difficulties, and painful obstacles that he overcomes. Most of his problems, issues, and difficulties are overcome by the last episode of the series and he ends the story having triumphed over all of them (with almost no help from Kim). The whole series is simply Ron's "Coming of Age" and "Accepting his Destiny" story. At least in my opinion.
So yeah, good job on not pulling punches on Kim's character.
11/6/2012 c16 5Nico Di Angelo101
Dude, the suspense is killing me! What happens! You haven't posted in 3 months! UPDATE! Got it?!
5Nico Di Angelo101Dude, the suspense is killing me! What happens! You haven't posted in 3 months! UPDATE! Got it?!
9/23/2012 c16 Guest
frogy i am looking forward to the next cahapter
frogy i am looking forward to the next cahapter
9/17/2012 c16 3spyderslicer
This is good, although all the spelling errors make me cringe. I've really enjoyed reading through this. You better hurry up with that next chapter. Because I want to see what happens next.
3spyderslicerThis is good, although all the spelling errors make me cringe. I've really enjoyed reading through this. You better hurry up with that next chapter. Because I want to see what happens next.
9/3/2012 c16 Guest
It's a good story.
Few funny things. Chapter 15 is out, yes. But so is 16... It's wrongly rated. I mean, K? Thats 5 years or older. This is not appropriate for kids. That's good - I prefer M stories after all. But this is a T, no doubt about it. Why? Because of the emotional part of it, mostly, but also the heavier themes. So yeah, thats 2 things you should update.
I do wonder who's kidnapped Shego. Everything points towards Kim. She'd do that, and since she's missing, it makes you wonder. Can't be Drakken, he'd never do that, but then again, Monkey Fist...
Well, it's good so far. More Ron/Shego goodness, more bashing of Kim, that's what we want.
I love that you don't rename Shego. It's her name after all, and it's nice.
The alias made me worry, but you came through. I despise people calling her Shiela, Shanna or Jenny... You know, idiots.
But your no idiot, thankfully. Ron is a bit too nice, but he should realize that he don't love Kim, he loves the idea of loving his best friend, the only person not to hate him. At least, that's how I feel you've written him. He always think about Kim as a thing more then a person, unlike Shego. He should hate Kim, but he don't. Sadly. If it's Kim who's the kidnapper, that could change, thankfully. Ron could become more of a bad guy. Shego is, after all, evil. Like seen in ep55. Fully adorably, evil. You have soften her too much, but it's okay with a soft side, if you don't try to make her "misunderstood victim" or something.
Looking forward to 17
It's a good story.
Few funny things. Chapter 15 is out, yes. But so is 16... It's wrongly rated. I mean, K? Thats 5 years or older. This is not appropriate for kids. That's good - I prefer M stories after all. But this is a T, no doubt about it. Why? Because of the emotional part of it, mostly, but also the heavier themes. So yeah, thats 2 things you should update.
I do wonder who's kidnapped Shego. Everything points towards Kim. She'd do that, and since she's missing, it makes you wonder. Can't be Drakken, he'd never do that, but then again, Monkey Fist...
Well, it's good so far. More Ron/Shego goodness, more bashing of Kim, that's what we want.
I love that you don't rename Shego. It's her name after all, and it's nice.
The alias made me worry, but you came through. I despise people calling her Shiela, Shanna or Jenny... You know, idiots.
But your no idiot, thankfully. Ron is a bit too nice, but he should realize that he don't love Kim, he loves the idea of loving his best friend, the only person not to hate him. At least, that's how I feel you've written him. He always think about Kim as a thing more then a person, unlike Shego. He should hate Kim, but he don't. Sadly. If it's Kim who's the kidnapper, that could change, thankfully. Ron could become more of a bad guy. Shego is, after all, evil. Like seen in ep55. Fully adorably, evil. You have soften her too much, but it's okay with a soft side, if you don't try to make her "misunderstood victim" or something.
Looking forward to 17
9/3/2012 c16 120489
I'm so glad that you came back to continued to write this story can't wait for the next part
I'm so glad that you came back to continued to write this story can't wait for the next part
9/1/2012 c16 JPElles
Took a while, but a really good chapter. Considering Ron has a much better success rate with solo missions than Kim in the show i'm curious what you do with that.
When the chips are down he usually more than steps up. Even before the Monkey Fist episode and the MMP infusion.
Took a while, but a really good chapter. Considering Ron has a much better success rate with solo missions than Kim in the show i'm curious what you do with that.
When the chips are down he usually more than steps up. Even before the Monkey Fist episode and the MMP infusion.