for scent11/16/2012 c1 mmarie2986
I don't think it's too OOc. I mean she does like food and its not like if she is talking about looks. the sense of smell is some thing that can sometimes leave a lasting impression. any way it was really good thanks for writing.
I don't think it's too OOc. I mean she does like food and its not like if she is talking about looks. the sense of smell is some thing that can sometimes leave a lasting impression. any way it was really good thanks for writing.
5/8/2012 c1 emi
"possesiveness or two lovers at once"- -drools- the twins are awesome!
this was really funny!
"possesiveness or two lovers at once"- -drools- the twins are awesome!
this was really funny!
5/6/2012 c1 Guest
Loved it.
Loved it.
3/10/2012 c1 
9Amu52
I don't mind the oocness it's more in character than the Haruhi in my story is lol I feel sorry for ranka XD
9Amu52I don't mind the oocness it's more in character than the Haruhi in my story is lol I feel sorry for ranka XD
1/9/2012 c1 1isara-love
I do like your a story .both haruhi and kyoya so lovely as pair . I love seen them together as pair .
Thank you
1isara-loveI do like your a story .both haruhi and kyoya so lovely as pair . I love seen them together as pair .
Thank you
11/16/2011 c1 1Scribbler NeKo Meow
haha, nice one.
Haruhi should be more careful some time.
~NeKo Meow
1Scribbler NeKo Meowhaha, nice one.
Haruhi should be more careful some time.
~NeKo Meow
7/4/2011 c1 1Nuisha
I loved this story, especially what Kyóya's scent is, haha :D I loved the whole concept and the way it was written, great job with that :) Gee, oh how I love Ranka, but he's so cruel to Haruhi :P lol, awesome job with this story, I thought it was great :P
1NuishaI loved this story, especially what Kyóya's scent is, haha :D I loved the whole concept and the way it was written, great job with that :) Gee, oh how I love Ranka, but he's so cruel to Haruhi :P lol, awesome job with this story, I thought it was great :P
12/30/2010 c1 Sissi
I think it was really good. I wouldn't call Haruhi OOC. Maybe just thoughtful? lol
I think it was really good. I wouldn't call Haruhi OOC. Maybe just thoughtful? lol
8/10/2010 c1 4Uncertain Anonymous
Wow. That was amazing. I'm subscribing and favoring you. Keep up the good work!
4Uncertain AnonymousWow. That was amazing. I'm subscribing and favoring you. Keep up the good work!
7/10/2010 c1 6fullmoonsinner
haha haruhi just got ultimately PWNED! i couldnt stop cracking up for ten minutes whne i finished XD
6fullmoonsinnerhaha haruhi just got ultimately PWNED! i couldnt stop cracking up for ten minutes whne i finished XD