for Doctor Who and the Traveler1/23 c5 borusa
The series never said that the Doctor and Rose were in love. Whether not not you think it was true, having him admit it to himself is out of character. It's not as bad as a sex scene between them, which some fics actually do, but still...Anyway, it was never a case of just another companion. For ANY of them.
The series never said that the Doctor and Rose were in love. Whether not not you think it was true, having him admit it to himself is out of character. It's not as bad as a sex scene between them, which some fics actually do, but still...Anyway, it was never a case of just another companion. For ANY of them.
1/12 c4 borusa
The Doctor and the TARDIS do not talk to each other that way. The TARDIS does have telepathic circuits, but does not use them to communicate. The line about Semit being far older than the Doctor is also unfair. It's a claim many characters in crossover fanfics make-you're nine hundred? That's nothing!-but the truth is no one knows how old he really is. He once said he was several thousand years old.
The Doctor and the TARDIS do not talk to each other that way. The TARDIS does have telepathic circuits, but does not use them to communicate. The line about Semit being far older than the Doctor is also unfair. It's a claim many characters in crossover fanfics make-you're nine hundred? That's nothing!-but the truth is no one knows how old he really is. He once said he was several thousand years old.
7/28/2008 c1 
20Olaf74
I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
20Olaf74I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
5/22/2008 c5 6Wolf Tears-v1.0
I have a few things to say.
The first: YES! Doctor Who+Pendragon=official and total awesomeness. Seriously, you've managed to merge two of my favorite series ever.
The only hing that could have made it any better was a Dalek. :D (Yeah... I love daleks... sorry. *cough*
Second: Someone mentioned typos... They were right. There are several noticable typos here and there, and you also have a tendency to say "speck" instead of "speak"- the first being a small, infinitesimal piece of something, the second being spoken (or, in the telepathic sense, thought) words.
Third: Other than that, it was very well-written, original, and much-loved. It's a wonderful "prequel" to the series, and a new and interesting perspective on Saint Dane.
And... that's about all. ^^ Cookies to you!
-~-Tears
6Wolf Tears-v1.0I have a few things to say.
The first: YES! Doctor Who+Pendragon=official and total awesomeness. Seriously, you've managed to merge two of my favorite series ever.
The only hing that could have made it any better was a Dalek. :D (Yeah... I love daleks... sorry. *cough*
Second: Someone mentioned typos... They were right. There are several noticable typos here and there, and you also have a tendency to say "speck" instead of "speak"- the first being a small, infinitesimal piece of something, the second being spoken (or, in the telepathic sense, thought) words.
Third: Other than that, it was very well-written, original, and much-loved. It's a wonderful "prequel" to the series, and a new and interesting perspective on Saint Dane.
And... that's about all. ^^ Cookies to you!
-~-Tears
10/1/2007 c3 16Agon Dy
Wow... I loved this! Crossing Pendragon with Doctor Who is sheer brilliance. I really want to read more! But can Travelers go through both Time and Dementions or just Dementions? Is that cuz the Time Lords go through Time? Please write more to this!
16Agon DyWow... I loved this! Crossing Pendragon with Doctor Who is sheer brilliance. I really want to read more! But can Travelers go through both Time and Dementions or just Dementions? Is that cuz the Time Lords go through Time? Please write more to this!
11/24/2006 c3 Rain the Revenant
The Doctor AND Saint Dane? Oh, yes!
This is awesome so far, very mysterious and creative. You've blended two very different fandoms very well. The only thing I want to point out is that you should watch for typos...maybe get someone to proofread for you?
Anyway, I am eagerly awaiting more of this. It just keeps getting better!
The Doctor AND Saint Dane? Oh, yes!
This is awesome so far, very mysterious and creative. You've blended two very different fandoms very well. The only thing I want to point out is that you should watch for typos...maybe get someone to proofread for you?
Anyway, I am eagerly awaiting more of this. It just keeps getting better!