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8/26/2009 c1 14jesphoenix05
Oh that is just so Saito! (sigh) That wolf really knows how to get your heart going! He is just too awesome. I am impressed by how well you could describe the wolf in so few words! I almost cried and I certainly did squeal in delight. My son gave me a weird look when I did! lol
4/9/2008 c2 5The Puppeteer
I think Saitou and Tokio fics outway my love for Misao and Aoshi. Great little ficlets and I love reading more on Tokio and her perspectives on her life and her man. I'm going to read all your work (well the ones around Tokio and Saitou at least) and add you to my faves list...
2/11/2008 c2 50Night-Mare-Chan
That's really sweet, though I think I enjoyed Saitou's part a bit more. All together though it's nice. ^_^
5/28/2006 c2 4blushinglily
Short but very deep for Tokio. I can just picture her at night sipping tea while all this goes through her head. =) Good job again! ^_^
5/28/2006 c2 15Warg
^_^... good for us!

This is another lovely piece... you'v done Tokio very well... given we know next to nothing of her... she would logically be the counterpart of Saito..

Once more, the drive to the fic makes it very appealing, as does Tokio's repeatedly remembering her husband...

The bond between them and the obvious love shows nicely here..

More soon i hope :D
5/27/2006 c1 37sueb262
I like your choice of moment-this is one of the more revealing of Saitou's character, and you've caught it well. It's tricky, touching the part of Saitou that is "normal", that is about something other than battle and duty, but you've managed it with believability and poignancy.

I particularly liked his thinking that he _had_ to return, acknowledging that he had been "away so long"-I liked thinking about him having a small part of himself that is truly bonded to Tokio and to that part of his life. Somehow, the fact that he keeps this so nearly completely hidden, protected, if you will, from the eyes and intrusions and opinions of others, makes it all the more powerful.
5/27/2006 c1 4blushinglily
Good job! ^_^ It fits Saitoh's character very well.
5/27/2006 c1 15Warg
Hey..

This is a good Saito IC piece..

The focus and the drive in the fic characterizes Saito well, as does the finallity near the end.

To attach Tokio to the smile(not smirk) that he has as he turns and walks into the flame works great...

Cya

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