for Dear Diary7/23/2010 c1 
2Wishing Rose
i love it! i've also read the 2nd chapter too and i love it also! please write a third chapter please! I want to know what happens really bad!
2Wishing Rosei love it! i've also read the 2nd chapter too and i love it also! please write a third chapter please! I want to know what happens really bad!
6/22/2007 c2 DD
I think that it was farely good. I think that you should of written different things for both of the characters though, so that it didn't get boring. I like the fact that you used different things from the five books. You did good and I think that I would like to read some more of your work!
I think that it was farely good. I think that you should of written different things for both of the characters though, so that it didn't get boring. I like the fact that you used different things from the five books. You did good and I think that I would like to read some more of your work!
8/28/2006 c1 Cassy
It is really good and really realistic! It is cute that Emma has a crush on Charlie:). I really love this fic keep on writing!
It is really good and really realistic! It is cute that Emma has a crush on Charlie:). I really love this fic keep on writing!
8/4/2006 c2 Anna
wow... you did good. I can't wait to find out what happens w/ charlie.
wow... you did good. I can't wait to find out what happens w/ charlie.
7/18/2006 c2 Drummergirl379
~Hey~
This is a really good story! You should do a diary entry in Charlie's POV too, I'd love to know what he thinks. I really like your story, and please keep on writing!
~XOXO~
Drummergirl379
~Hey~
This is a really good story! You should do a diary entry in Charlie's POV too, I'd love to know what he thinks. I really like your story, and please keep on writing!
~XOXO~
Drummergirl379
6/19/2006 c2 2Inu girl 101
I thought it was a great story. I'm looking forward to reading more so please update soon.
2Inu girl 101I thought it was a great story. I'm looking forward to reading more so please update soon.
6/14/2006 c2 Emma
sry i didn't review earilier! i really like the idea of having to ppl's pov! update soon!~Emmy
sry i didn't review earilier! i really like the idea of having to ppl's pov! update soon!~Emmy
6/14/2006 c2 DancingPickle101
hmm I like the concept(i vote for Olivia) and it's written really nicely so update soon 'K?
Your favorite dancing pickle!
hmm I like the concept(i vote for Olivia) and it's written really nicely so update soon 'K?
Your favorite dancing pickle!
6/14/2006 c2 Star
This looks rily good could u do a pov for charlie?
This looks rily good could u do a pov for charlie?
6/14/2006 c2 Alder
I think that it's funny that Olivia has longer entries then Emma, but their voice sound a lot a like.
Maybe make Olivia into more of a drama queen.
Keep writing, and remeber, you can develop a plot.
I think that it's funny that Olivia has longer entries then Emma, but their voice sound a lot a like.
Maybe make Olivia into more of a drama queen.
Keep writing, and remeber, you can develop a plot.
6/4/2006 c1 Alder
Even if the diary idea wasn't yours to begin with, it is still a great idea.
Emma does sound like a pre-teen girl
you can show a plot through some one's diary, she doesn't just have to be ranting about Charlie, that would make it more amusing.
but keep writing
Even if the diary idea wasn't yours to begin with, it is still a great idea.
Emma does sound like a pre-teen girl
you can show a plot through some one's diary, she doesn't just have to be ranting about Charlie, that would make it more amusing.
but keep writing
6/3/2006 c1 Emma
I liked it. Acutally it kinda sounds like my diary... just replace every charlie w/ matthew and every naren w/ meghan. matthew is so hot! *oops* did i say that out loud! anyhoo i really liked it! update soon!~Emmy
I liked it. Acutally it kinda sounds like my diary... just replace every charlie w/ matthew and every naren w/ meghan. matthew is so hot! *oops* did i say that out loud! anyhoo i really liked it! update soon!~Emmy