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5/31/2009 c3 2Dust to Dusk
Gotta love Kaoru. XD Sano kinda had that last punch coming.
5/31/2009 c2 Dust to Dusk
Oh God, the pants! XDD

This story is endlessly amusing. I love how Sano gives Kenshin such a hard time.
6/8/2008 c3 skenshingumi
Cute idea. I actually haven't seen this triangle quite this way before. I hope you keep going.
10/12/2007 c3 23The Only Love For Soujiro Seta
this is really good, please keep writing! ^ ^
9/25/2007 c3 New-Weeen
wow! that was great! i had fun reading this! Please update soon! =]
8/17/2007 c3 3x-aiden-x
i luffs it! ^^
8/13/2007 c3 almondroca
Yay! Finally a chapter. Did you know that you are only my second reviewee this summer? THANKS!
8/12/2007 c3 5kettish
Ooh, I like how this is turning out! Very unique situation you've got going here. I don't believe I've read another fic where Kaoru and Sano were together previously, or where Kaoru was a single mother. I like it though! Please continue.

Peace-kettish.
8/9/2007 c3 9miniwoo
So glad you updated. Does this mean that there will be more steady updates in the future?
8/9/2007 c3 anon
i loved this chapter! did sano have an affair with this sakura? hm...anyhoo update soon! (^_^)
8/9/2007 c3 12Onhiro
Hmm. I thought it would be Kenshin getting slugged, not Sanosuke. What exactly is 'Sankontessou'? I've only seen InuYasha in English, and I don't recognize the name.

KEEP ON WRITING!
8/9/2007 c3 alwyzme
I am so over the moon happy that the story was not abandoned. I love this story. It's different and gives me a few good laughs. With Kenshin getting involved with Kaoru he is going to have to be involved with her two darling girls. They so far have no whims about macerating their daddy's jewels and from Sano and Kaoru's perspective she is hardly involved with anyone how will they react to Kenshin in the mix?

So we got a bit of Sano's transgression I am actually glad it didn't involve Megumi. For her to be the other women would have made her such a unwelcome character. So Kaoru hasn't gotten over Sano's infidelity besides beating him to a pulp what else did she do to show her displeasure in Sano's actions? What did Misao do when Sano messed up? She seems even less forgiving.

Kenshin is so much better off being upfront about thngs he wants to know rather than ask a third party. There is so sympathy for him because he is entering the space occupied by a unique relationship and he wants to impress Kaoru. Only after one day and he has become jealous and possessive will it be a long courtship or whirlwind-like? Kenshin is getting such a cliff notes version of what to expect can't wait for the others to be involved. The laughter seems promising and delightful. Thanks for the read until next time.
8/9/2007 c3 sulou
Ah, so glad you updated. I can tell already this is going to be a very fun story to read.
11/16/2006 c2 alwyzme
The ending had me roflol. It was sweet and the chapter added more questions to what was to come. What else was Misao supposed to tell Kaoru? The dojo is it her family's dojo like in the main story? So far we know Kaoru has a complicated past will Kenshin also have complicated past also? The hilarity that is promised in this story makes the wait a little hard because it was enjoyable to read. Thanks for the read. Looking forward the next chapter and more.
11/2/2006 c2 sulou
oh my god this was so funny! I love this fic. I will definitely be watching for more updates!
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