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10/13/2006 c2 8Michelle Gilman
LOL! I LOVE THIS STORY! I love the ending! Oh man that's a riot!

~Mikki
8/18/2006 c2 mappsgo
very funny
8/9/2006 c2 6a rose by any other name71591
Ha, funny way to LEAVE A PERSON HANGING! I really like this story, its real cute. Please update!
7/6/2006 c2 3YourSecret'sOut
Poor Kenshin. You're funny. Keep that up. The chapters so far have been very entertaining and I really can't wait to read more, so update as soon as you can!
7/6/2006 c1 YourSecret'sOut
I liked this, I really did! It's a nice idea and you worked out the whole relationship with Sano and Kaoru nicely :o) Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see where this goes and I'm putting you on my favorite story list.
6/26/2006 c2 New-Weeen
Funni ass story! really lyke it! ^_^ Please update soon!
6/21/2006 c2 LilBrokenDolly
Cute start! Keep writing!
6/20/2006 c2 4iamALEX
WOW! KENSHIN IN PINK PANTS WITH BIG BOLD LETTERS SAYING "NAUGHTY" ON THE BUTT?

now that's a mental picture that I can bring with me to heaven!

thanks for it ^_~ kidding!

anyways, please do continue and if I can ask for more funny situations... life is already frustrating as it is ^_^

good luck with this one!
6/20/2006 c2 5nightshade belle
Wahhaa! Too funny. And also too cute. Kenshin in pink pants with naughty on the bottom. That's kinda hot!

Any way great story, I especially love Sano. Keep up the good work.
6/20/2006 c2 happyangel123
that was great well from what i read it does seem like some ting are missing from karous and sanos relationship like there might be a little more tha meets the eye but i hope tha kenshins and karou's relationship might get started heh

well this story so far is great funny too lol
6/19/2006 c2 avria
This sure was a funny chapter!*^^* loved it! I think the Sano and Kaoru idea would be good to pursue. Afterall, it's because of their relationship that made everything complicated for Kenshin. So, adding a bit of tension between them wouldn't hurt but might even bring out the best in your story.

Update soon!*^^*
6/19/2006 c2 4Aya45
LOL! This chapter was so funny! Especially the last sentence. I like the interaction you have between Kaoru and Sanosuke. The friendship they still have even after all they've been through is awesome :). Well! Update soon! Great story you have here.
6/19/2006 c2 1Stella-neko
Pink pants with naughty written on them? I love it! It's a nice twist to the usual pink shirts or gis. Poor Kenshin!
6/19/2006 c2 happyloveygirl
Lmao! The last part was halerious. X3 I was thinking Kaoru would say that the pants look better on him or something but I like the "naughty" saying 10x more. ^^ Please update soon. XD
6/19/2006 c2 IAMANINACTIVEUSER
aw, that was cute and funny. I really liked this chapter. I loved what you wrote about on the pink pants and boy shorts, you made them so funny. yep, i'm looking forward to the next chapter! =]
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