for Enter the Illusion5/20/2008 c1 Innerstruggle88
"Use your imagination?...
USE YOR FUCKIN IMAGINATION"(weep in corner)
"your the devil"
"Use your imagination?...
USE YOR FUCKIN IMAGINATION"(weep in corner)
"your the devil"
10/22/2007 c1 
5Sienrurouni
greetings friend. An amusing read, although I don't usually read this kinda stuff. It could use some work, but it is believable as a porno. About as well written as the limited number of lemons or limes that I have read.
5Sienrurounigreetings friend. An amusing read, although I don't usually read this kinda stuff. It could use some work, but it is believable as a porno. About as well written as the limited number of lemons or limes that I have read.
8/19/2007 c1 John
Good...but...strange. Its like whoa and then huh? and then like its over?
Good...but...strange. Its like whoa and then huh? and then like its over?
3/7/2007 c1 arhand
only reviewing because you begged interesting and kinda funny but it isnt enough to be a stand alone chapter no real beggining or end. like you got an idea and didnt bother to finish it.
only reviewing because you begged interesting and kinda funny but it isnt enough to be a stand alone chapter no real beggining or end. like you got an idea and didnt bother to finish it.
10/4/2006 c1 MysteryLady-Tx
well, that was interesting...I like the play of words for the title:D
THANKS:D
well, that was interesting...I like the play of words for the title:D
THANKS:D
7/19/2006 c1 2Souji x Rise x Yukiko
Well i kind of like it but i do not use too much imagination on this kind of stuff. It was also shorter than i expected (sorry for that comment though).
2Souji x Rise x YukikoWell i kind of like it but i do not use too much imagination on this kind of stuff. It was also shorter than i expected (sorry for that comment though).