for The Night the Moon Fell6/17/2008 c1 
8Sesshys only girls
so...sniff...sad!
but still great! and also very deep. i like the way you ended with a quetion.
Hoshixx
8Sesshys only girlsso...sniff...sad!
but still great! and also very deep. i like the way you ended with a quetion.
Hoshixx
12/19/2006 c1 9Spookje
Actually quite truthful insight to Chikane's thoughts at that moment. The last line just made it all perfect. :)
-Spookje
9SpookjeActually quite truthful insight to Chikane's thoughts at that moment. The last line just made it all perfect. :)
-Spookje
11/21/2006 c1 9IsuzuForever
How sad! Good job at capturing Chikane's thoughts before she makes the *dun dun dun* descion! I always wondered what she was thinking...now I know! Or have a good idea of it! lol. Keep up the great writing!
love,
Rin
9IsuzuForeverHow sad! Good job at capturing Chikane's thoughts before she makes the *dun dun dun* descion! I always wondered what she was thinking...now I know! Or have a good idea of it! lol. Keep up the great writing!
love,
Rin
8/16/2006 c1 5HungarianPrincessRina
Aw! That was so Kawaii! i really liked it, it was very poetic too! Awsome job!
Rina~
5HungarianPrincessRinaAw! That was so Kawaii! i really liked it, it was very poetic too! Awsome job!
Rina~
8/10/2006 c1 delete whenever you can please
*hugs Hoppy-chan* I enjoyed that thoroughly. Matched Chikane's thoughts almost PERFECTLY!
*hugs Hoppy-chan* I enjoyed that thoroughly. Matched Chikane's thoughts almost PERFECTLY!
7/31/2006 c1 46breaktherules
Wow. This was a very good story. I love the way you wrote it and I love the last line of the story! Great job!
46breaktherulesWow. This was a very good story. I love the way you wrote it and I love the last line of the story! Great job!
7/27/2006 c1 apprentice celt
This is not a bad piece. I'm not so sure that Chikane would ask Himeko to forgive her, but that is entirely off the point. I do like your wording through out the one shot, the end especially. Overall, well done :)
This is not a bad piece. I'm not so sure that Chikane would ask Himeko to forgive her, but that is entirely off the point. I do like your wording through out the one shot, the end especially. Overall, well done :)
7/22/2006 c1 185Jimmy the Gothic Egg
It's fairly well written. The wording is nice and I like the perspective.
I don't know if it's in character or not. My brain is trying to escape.
I feel the ending could've come out better, but I like it.
185Jimmy the Gothic EggIt's fairly well written. The wording is nice and I like the perspective.
I don't know if it's in character or not. My brain is trying to escape.
I feel the ending could've come out better, but I like it.
7/13/2006 c1 19ThrottaKaze
Dear God that was beautiful X3 an you said it would suck, yoou...!
Very deep and emotional, the last line was just... fomg... so awesome.
19ThrottaKazeDear God that was beautiful X3 an you said it would suck, yoou...!
Very deep and emotional, the last line was just... fomg... so awesome.