for Tentative Steps7/11/2006 c1 
26Chance2
Yea! My ficathon story! This was great. Teyla and Elizabeth rarely get time to bond without the boys around. And even though I know Elizabeth's a bit of a pacifist, I always thought it was a little strange that she would be in such a hostile galaxy without any weapons training of any sort. This was a nice insight into some unanswered question. Thanks!
26Chance2Yea! My ficathon story! This was great. Teyla and Elizabeth rarely get time to bond without the boys around. And even though I know Elizabeth's a bit of a pacifist, I always thought it was a little strange that she would be in such a hostile galaxy without any weapons training of any sort. This was a nice insight into some unanswered question. Thanks!
7/9/2006 c1 44Cpt. Ritter
So this is VB's triumphant return to fanfic.. very nice... simple.. but that's all it needed to be. Again... very nice.
44Cpt. RitterSo this is VB's triumphant return to fanfic.. very nice... simple.. but that's all it needed to be. Again... very nice.
7/8/2006 c1 2gatelover12
At first I didn't think I was going to like it, but then I realized you were typing in Teyla's thoughts and everything fell into place. It was an experience, you have the characterization perfectly. It was just... wow.
2gatelover12At first I didn't think I was going to like it, but then I realized you were typing in Teyla's thoughts and everything fell into place. It was an experience, you have the characterization perfectly. It was just... wow.
7/8/2006 c1 7Furlings are Cats
Spelled week wrong. :P:P:P
I'm teh evil.
It looks WAY better than you said! How can you doubt your own writing? If you felt forced doing this... I'd LOVE to see something you felt REALLY inspired on!
7Furlings are CatsSpelled week wrong. :P:P:P
I'm teh evil.
It looks WAY better than you said! How can you doubt your own writing? If you felt forced doing this... I'd LOVE to see something you felt REALLY inspired on!