for No Common Allegiance: Death in the Key of G7/23/2006 c14 
130FraidyCat
ah, the trilogy.
personal favorite of mine.
my office is also whacked this week, so i appreciate yout not starting right away. wouldn't want to miss any!
130FraidyCatah, the trilogy.
personal favorite of mine.
my office is also whacked this week, so i appreciate yout not starting right away. wouldn't want to miss any!
7/23/2006 c14 rhesus
Great ending...very much looking forward to the next section of your trilogy. Was glad to see a story where Charlie is shown as more than weepy.
About the pajama thing, just mentioned in passing, not to be nit picking.
Keep going...
Great ending...very much looking forward to the next section of your trilogy. Was glad to see a story where Charlie is shown as more than weepy.
About the pajama thing, just mentioned in passing, not to be nit picking.
Keep going...
7/23/2006 c14 maurbill
I am so loving you right now. Another sequel. Hurray!These last two stories you did were so good. I will be anxiously awaiting the last of this trilogy. Do what you have to do and get back here as fast as you can, the next one sounds so interesting that I can hardly wait. Great Job.
I am so loving you right now. Another sequel. Hurray!These last two stories you did were so good. I will be anxiously awaiting the last of this trilogy. Do what you have to do and get back here as fast as you can, the next one sounds so interesting that I can hardly wait. Great Job.
7/23/2006 c14 FluffNutter
Great story. Of course, being an h/c!whore, I would have liked to see a little more of Charlie's reunion with his family, but I have a whole tri-quel to look forward to, so yay!
Grammar lesson!(*evil laugh*) - you shouldn't put FED in all caps like that: it's an abbreviation, not an acronym. Only acronyms (e.g. FBI stands for Federal Bureau of Investigation) should be in all caps.
See ya in a week!
Great story. Of course, being an h/c!whore, I would have liked to see a little more of Charlie's reunion with his family, but I have a whole tri-quel to look forward to, so yay!
Grammar lesson!(*evil laugh*) - you shouldn't put FED in all caps like that: it's an abbreviation, not an acronym. Only acronyms (e.g. FBI stands for Federal Bureau of Investigation) should be in all caps.
See ya in a week!
7/23/2006 c14 40jlm110108
Great chapter (these reviews are getting redundant, but I know I enjoy getting feedback on my stories!)! I'm looking forward to the next part of the trilogy. I know what offices can be like. Luckily for me, mine has been peaceful, but sometimes it can be anything but!
40jlm110108Great chapter (these reviews are getting redundant, but I know I enjoy getting feedback on my stories!)! I'm looking forward to the next part of the trilogy. I know what offices can be like. Luckily for me, mine has been peaceful, but sometimes it can be anything but!
7/23/2006 c14 Isabelle S
Congratulations on a great story. I really enjoyed it! The plot was very interesting and solid. It had good action. It was well written. I like the way you wrote Don and, particularly, Charlie. You demonstrated both is strength and is weakness very well. The Don-fan that I am is looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for sharing!
Congratulations on a great story. I really enjoyed it! The plot was very interesting and solid. It had good action. It was well written. I like the way you wrote Don and, particularly, Charlie. You demonstrated both is strength and is weakness very well. The Don-fan that I am is looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for sharing!
7/23/2006 c14 Timespirt
Hi,
Great stories so far. I generally don't read a story unless it's finished, but you had me from the start of the first story to this trilogy and I have been reading chapter by chapter ever since. I await with anticipation the next story to this series and look forward to more of it or more stories from you in the future.
Thank You
Hi,
Great stories so far. I generally don't read a story unless it's finished, but you had me from the start of the first story to this trilogy and I have been reading chapter by chapter ever since. I await with anticipation the next story to this series and look forward to more of it or more stories from you in the future.
Thank You
7/23/2006 c14 1BratCat
KUDOS! KUDOS! excellent ending! i've read the yr next fic n i cant wait for it! hope to read soon!
1BratCatKUDOS! KUDOS! excellent ending! i've read the yr next fic n i cant wait for it! hope to read soon!
7/23/2006 c14 Chikory
You're right, it was a fantastic place to end it.
The next story sounds like it's going to be good. I can't wait to see it up! I do hope you'll test your boundries and try to make the next better than the last two. Not that there is anything wrong with either of them, they're great! But it's always good to see writers pushing their limits and trying something knew. It's especially great when they master the challenge they set themselves, which I'm sure you would have no problems doing.
As I said before, can't wait for the next saga!
~Chikory
You're right, it was a fantastic place to end it.
The next story sounds like it's going to be good. I can't wait to see it up! I do hope you'll test your boundries and try to make the next better than the last two. Not that there is anything wrong with either of them, they're great! But it's always good to see writers pushing their limits and trying something knew. It's especially great when they master the challenge they set themselves, which I'm sure you would have no problems doing.
As I said before, can't wait for the next saga!
~Chikory
7/22/2006 c14 7Taura Callisto
Wow, I loved this last chapter, I love when people give Charlie a backbone and after what happened to him, it had to take some guts to face any kind of gang member again.
Can't wait for the next story. =)
7Taura CallistoWow, I loved this last chapter, I love when people give Charlie a backbone and after what happened to him, it had to take some guts to face any kind of gang member again.
Can't wait for the next story. =)
7/22/2006 c14 Robyn
I don't believe I've reviewed your stories in the past, and that should be a crime. This one, like all the others you've written, is brilliant... absolutely brilliant. The plot is fantastic, the characters interact together very well, and your writing is simply great! I loved this story, and its companion, and hope to see more brillant works from you in the near future. :)
I don't believe I've reviewed your stories in the past, and that should be a crime. This one, like all the others you've written, is brilliant... absolutely brilliant. The plot is fantastic, the characters interact together very well, and your writing is simply great! I loved this story, and its companion, and hope to see more brillant works from you in the near future. :)
7/22/2006 c14 1DramaDreamer08
A trilogy, yes! You are a great writer and I love your stories! I can't wait for the next part, it sounds like it will be intense! Keep up the great work!
"Dream of things that never were..." J.F.K.
That is my writer's creed, dreaming of things that aren't on the show but can be, should be and are in the minds of those who love it!
1DramaDreamer08A trilogy, yes! You are a great writer and I love your stories! I can't wait for the next part, it sounds like it will be intense! Keep up the great work!
"Dream of things that never were..." J.F.K.
That is my writer's creed, dreaming of things that aren't on the show but can be, should be and are in the minds of those who love it!
7/22/2006 c14 16thebondgirl
hello again:) just happened to be awake, and online incidentally, and got this alert for the final chapter in one of the best fics around, and figured i'd stop in and state my oppinion ;)
and the final verdict is: AMAZING!:):) yup, it is once more open fact that you did a great job with the writing of this fic, and this last chapter - i espcially love the whole thing after charlie interrogated marcus, where don is on the phone with their dad and trying to get them out of there, and fast!:P - (made me laugh out loud the first time i read it, and it did it again now!)
really looking forward to the third part!:) take care and happy writing;)
16thebondgirlhello again:) just happened to be awake, and online incidentally, and got this alert for the final chapter in one of the best fics around, and figured i'd stop in and state my oppinion ;)
and the final verdict is: AMAZING!:):) yup, it is once more open fact that you did a great job with the writing of this fic, and this last chapter - i espcially love the whole thing after charlie interrogated marcus, where don is on the phone with their dad and trying to get them out of there, and fast!:P - (made me laugh out loud the first time i read it, and it did it again now!)
really looking forward to the third part!:) take care and happy writing;)
7/22/2006 c13 thebondgirl
hey there! sorry that with all the emailing back and forth, i kinda forgot to keep up the reviewing - a little impolite, to read and not review (*shakes head at self*) well, to make up for it, this review here goes for every single chapter: skillfully and excellently put together and written, and i'm loving every minute i spend reading it:):) keep up the great work!;)
hey there! sorry that with all the emailing back and forth, i kinda forgot to keep up the reviewing - a little impolite, to read and not review (*shakes head at self*) well, to make up for it, this review here goes for every single chapter: skillfully and excellently put together and written, and i'm loving every minute i spend reading it:):) keep up the great work!;)