for Heist6/11/2009 c17 secret eternal dreams
I loved the first half to death. I thought I'd hate the second part but I was proved wrong. All in all, very well written! ;D
I loved the first half to death. I thought I'd hate the second part but I was proved wrong. All in all, very well written! ;D
3/14/2008 c18 blahhx49
This was an awesome story! This probably has to be the best angst out of all I've read.
In the beginning of the chapters, I didn't know that the robbery would be that bad. I just pitied Ryan because he didn't know what to do - choosing between Sandy and the lady. He also had to be stuck in that hot vault for how many hours. Then he turns out he has epilepsy which is one of the worst things to happen to you. And it was really hard for him to control his sickness so I really felt bad for him.
I'm glad that you added Taylor in here. She was just the person Ryan needed. No matter what she supported him all the way and they were really hot in here. Lol. And plus I really love this couple.
One of my favs!
This was an awesome story! This probably has to be the best angst out of all I've read.
In the beginning of the chapters, I didn't know that the robbery would be that bad. I just pitied Ryan because he didn't know what to do - choosing between Sandy and the lady. He also had to be stuck in that hot vault for how many hours. Then he turns out he has epilepsy which is one of the worst things to happen to you. And it was really hard for him to control his sickness so I really felt bad for him.
I'm glad that you added Taylor in here. She was just the person Ryan needed. No matter what she supported him all the way and they were really hot in here. Lol. And plus I really love this couple.
One of my favs!
1/23/2007 c18 
38Ansy Pansy aka Panz
ahahaha brilliant
really surprised me with that ending
good stuff
and hot stuff with Taylor!
38Ansy Pansy aka Panzahahaha brilliant
really surprised me with that ending
good stuff
and hot stuff with Taylor!
1/19/2007 c18 Ninavs2
Wow! That was really good! This fic was awesome...you're a great writer!Congrats! =)
Wow! That was really good! This fic was awesome...you're a great writer!Congrats! =)
1/18/2007 c18 forgottenletters
Bravo : ) I really liked the ending, it was very sweet and just what the story needed. Thanks for the great read!
Bravo : ) I really liked the ending, it was very sweet and just what the story needed. Thanks for the great read!
1/16/2007 c17 Dogsbody
I'm happy with how you ended this.I loved how Seth tortured Kirsten by suggesting Thailand, and then Amsterdam.Now how would Seth know, that British chicks can be nuts?;)
I'm happy with how you ended this.I loved how Seth tortured Kirsten by suggesting Thailand, and then Amsterdam.Now how would Seth know, that British chicks can be nuts?;)
1/15/2007 c17 SassyCassie08
Wonderful You're an excellent writer. I liked that you kept humor in it right up to the end. Though the Sandy/Ryan talk was neccessary. Way to go making Taylor sexy!..but still quite, uh, unique? This is going on my favorites list. PLEASE continue with more O.C. fics
Wonderful You're an excellent writer. I liked that you kept humor in it right up to the end. Though the Sandy/Ryan talk was neccessary. Way to go making Taylor sexy!..but still quite, uh, unique? This is going on my favorites list. PLEASE continue with more O.C. fics