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9/9/2009 c1 36Nr.Six
great story! I love the episodes with Lucius, they are so funny!
8/1/2006 c1 17jtjaforever
Good read. And I don't think Teyla was on the balcony.
8/1/2006 c1 13MadCapSciFiWriter
The things people write that I would love to see actually have happened on the show...this is surely one of them!

Teyla didn't seemed to be effected as much to liking Lucious as the other, such as Weir and Carson, maybe that was due to the fact she wasn't with him all that much but I like to think that she had feelings for another or maybe her wraith DNA had something to do with it...

But anyway...fabulous tag to the episode...and how long did it take you to write this after the show aired?
7/29/2006 c1 Camy
OH..nice, Ritter...very nice...
7/29/2006 c1 spiritedchihiro
excellent tag! very touching! and excellently written as per usual!
7/29/2006 c1 HazelEyes18
Another wonderful story! I absolutely loved this. I wish something to this extent particuraly John trying to get through Teyla would have happened. I love your stories you're a truly awesome writer. Anyways hope to see some more from you soon.
7/29/2006 c1 noro
Loved it can't wait to see more of your stories.
7/29/2006 c1 15Yarrharr
i like this a lot! you're really good at writing these characters. plus this is an interesting complication of John and Teyla's relationship. nice ending :)

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