for Caged Robin3/26/2008 c11 
48101spacemonkey
they all know now, or at least to an extent...
at least they are safe, but i think robin would have been able to handle the aftermath of all this had his men not seen...
48101spacemonkeythey all know now, or at least to an extent...
at least they are safe, but i think robin would have been able to handle the aftermath of all this had his men not seen...
3/26/2008 c10 101spacemonkey
i love robin and wills relationship...
that was descriptive to say the least, and the guys saw it, he cant deny it...
i love robin and wills relationship...
that was descriptive to say the least, and the guys saw it, he cant deny it...
3/26/2008 c9 101spacemonkey
i wonder what the plan is...
i want will to tell his fears to marian...
robin has suddenly emerged from the slight shell he had placed himself in previously, he seems unbroken...
i wonder what the plan is...
i want will to tell his fears to marian...
robin has suddenly emerged from the slight shell he had placed himself in previously, he seems unbroken...
3/26/2008 c8 101spacemonkey
you know the closer they get the more worried i am. how will marian react and what will be the scene that awaits the rescuer and what of wills prediction?
you know the closer they get the more worried i am. how will marian react and what will be the scene that awaits the rescuer and what of wills prediction?
3/26/2008 c6 101spacemonkey
they are so going to find robin and they are going to get the shock of their life
they are so going to find robin and they are going to get the shock of their life
3/26/2008 c5 101spacemonkey
im not convinced guy is clueless, but part of me thinks he is, so i dont know, and will really does need to confide in marian, so then she might be prepared for the sight that awaits her...
im not convinced guy is clueless, but part of me thinks he is, so i dont know, and will really does need to confide in marian, so then she might be prepared for the sight that awaits her...
3/26/2008 c4 101spacemonkey
will needs to tell her
and the merry men need to cotton on to the fact that robin is in serious danger
will needs to tell her
and the merry men need to cotton on to the fact that robin is in serious danger
3/26/2008 c1 101spacemonkey
that is such an evil ending! i'm wondering if i missed something, how was robin captured? is it in another fic?
i feel a few of the details were a bit sketchy, but meh
that is such an evil ending! i'm wondering if i missed something, how was robin captured? is it in another fic?
i feel a few of the details were a bit sketchy, but meh
11/9/2007 c9 KnightGuardian
My oh my was this good!
This was well worth the wait! The lines were magic, the decription plentyful while not overdone leaving some to the imagination sometimes (methinks) that can be a very powerfl tool in an expert writer (such as thee's) hands. Keep going, I am dying to see the rescue, and even more i wonder, how will all the little pices of this puzzle fall into place for Robins Merry Men, and most of all his Fair Lady, the brazen and brave-hearted Marian!
I loved these 2 chapters to death, there was nothing that I didnt love, i have to many lines that I favor to list them all but this was one of the ones that caught my eye.
“I’m so sorry,” said Loxley, “perhaps next time; you must tell your men not to be so rough.”
(from The Search Continues)
Still fighting back, robin thru and thru, a cheer for our robin who this one thinks, dearly needs it here in one of his (many) darkest days...
Keep writing my friend, because this was truly a work of art, a picture is worth a thousand words, but a thousand words that can amount to the same if worth more than mere silver and gold. Thats perfection.
~KG
My oh my was this good!
This was well worth the wait! The lines were magic, the decription plentyful while not overdone leaving some to the imagination sometimes (methinks) that can be a very powerfl tool in an expert writer (such as thee's) hands. Keep going, I am dying to see the rescue, and even more i wonder, how will all the little pices of this puzzle fall into place for Robins Merry Men, and most of all his Fair Lady, the brazen and brave-hearted Marian!
I loved these 2 chapters to death, there was nothing that I didnt love, i have to many lines that I favor to list them all but this was one of the ones that caught my eye.
“I’m so sorry,” said Loxley, “perhaps next time; you must tell your men not to be so rough.”
(from The Search Continues)
Still fighting back, robin thru and thru, a cheer for our robin who this one thinks, dearly needs it here in one of his (many) darkest days...
Keep writing my friend, because this was truly a work of art, a picture is worth a thousand words, but a thousand words that can amount to the same if worth more than mere silver and gold. Thats perfection.
~KG
11/1/2007 c6 15KnightGuardian
I thought I'd reviews this...gues not, well I read it and will only say, because to say more would be pointless because you already know:
You are the best!
This was awesome!
I love how you write Much as the youn 'un of the band!
And so on and so forth, lol, see you already KNOW that but I guess I can tell you again, this was great I loved it like I loved all the other chapters of this story, and can I just say I so want to see the sheriff get his due, have marian hit him! Yes, i can see her giving him a good sock to the jaw, but that nether here nor there...i digress, kudos to you for another brilliant chapter under your belt!
May the spring of your inspiration contiune!
15KnightGuardianI thought I'd reviews this...gues not, well I read it and will only say, because to say more would be pointless because you already know:
You are the best!
This was awesome!
I love how you write Much as the youn 'un of the band!
And so on and so forth, lol, see you already KNOW that but I guess I can tell you again, this was great I loved it like I loved all the other chapters of this story, and can I just say I so want to see the sheriff get his due, have marian hit him! Yes, i can see her giving him a good sock to the jaw, but that nether here nor there...i digress, kudos to you for another brilliant chapter under your belt!
May the spring of your inspiration contiune!
11/1/2007 c7 KnightGuardian
Hey, sorry for the wait but this story was so worth logging onto the 'net for, firtzy 'net or not! This was wonderful, and devious starting with the dastardly sheriff we all love ot HATE, you always write him exceptionally well which I deem very significant, if you cant write your bad guys and make everyone hate 'em, (i mean blood rushing yelling at the screen hate here) then we can't love our hero's as much, so yeah, awesome all the way. And Robins thoughts, his doubts, humanize him make him more than just "Robin Hood" more than just "legend" which is the catagory most shelve him under, you write him with a mans doubts and a mans purest of loves for his Marian. Even with all this violence going on about, he still have a thought to spare for her wonderig 'has she notcied i'm not there' something any one of us would think in that situation I would bet.
“How are you, Loxley?” he asked, casually.
“Since when do you care?” Robin asked, mutinously.
The Sheriff pretended to be hurt.
“I am hurt, Loxley,” he said, “That was not a fair thing to say.”
Wonderful dialouge, witty and biting while just plain obnoxious on the sheriffs part, biting and angry on Robins (well deservedly). I love the reactions that they wring from eachother...
“Hello,” Will said, before knocking the man out.
“Thank you, Will,” said Marian, stepping over the unconscious man.
“No problem, Dauid,” replied Will.
If a chapter must end, can I just say what a way to do it! lol Loved it, this was pure written magic, the words flowed over the page like a smooth running river.
Any chance you're working on that next chapter, hmm?
; )
Hey, sorry for the wait but this story was so worth logging onto the 'net for, firtzy 'net or not! This was wonderful, and devious starting with the dastardly sheriff we all love ot HATE, you always write him exceptionally well which I deem very significant, if you cant write your bad guys and make everyone hate 'em, (i mean blood rushing yelling at the screen hate here) then we can't love our hero's as much, so yeah, awesome all the way. And Robins thoughts, his doubts, humanize him make him more than just "Robin Hood" more than just "legend" which is the catagory most shelve him under, you write him with a mans doubts and a mans purest of loves for his Marian. Even with all this violence going on about, he still have a thought to spare for her wonderig 'has she notcied i'm not there' something any one of us would think in that situation I would bet.
“How are you, Loxley?” he asked, casually.
“Since when do you care?” Robin asked, mutinously.
The Sheriff pretended to be hurt.
“I am hurt, Loxley,” he said, “That was not a fair thing to say.”
Wonderful dialouge, witty and biting while just plain obnoxious on the sheriffs part, biting and angry on Robins (well deservedly). I love the reactions that they wring from eachother...
“Hello,” Will said, before knocking the man out.
“Thank you, Will,” said Marian, stepping over the unconscious man.
“No problem, Dauid,” replied Will.
If a chapter must end, can I just say what a way to do it! lol Loved it, this was pure written magic, the words flowed over the page like a smooth running river.
Any chance you're working on that next chapter, hmm?
; )
10/28/2007 c7 vendy5
Your posted! Bravo! This is great! I hope his men WOULD come for him. I'm begging for more!
Your posted! Bravo! This is great! I hope his men WOULD come for him. I'm begging for more!