for Are We There Yet?10/1/2007 c16 
9thebloodrose
Thanks for updating this with an excellent chapter. I loved the bit at the start - “Blessed is the name of O’Neill.”
Classic! Please update soon!
9thebloodroseThanks for updating this with an excellent chapter. I loved the bit at the start - “Blessed is the name of O’Neill.”
Classic! Please update soon!
9/30/2007 c16 68Su Freund
“I assumed it did it differently, opened a trap door or something...” Great line. Lololol!
I loved Jack in this, Livi. Humour right alongside being a hard nosed, bad assed SoB.
And now you add the Genii into this volatile mix, sheesh! Plus the Nox. Nice touch with the Asgard deferring to them.
The plot thickens at every turn. Marvellous stuff. Blessed is the name of O'Neill - and of Livi2Jack! :-D What are you gonna do for an encore?
68Su Freund“I assumed it did it differently, opened a trap door or something...” Great line. Lololol!
I loved Jack in this, Livi. Humour right alongside being a hard nosed, bad assed SoB.
And now you add the Genii into this volatile mix, sheesh! Plus the Nox. Nice touch with the Asgard deferring to them.
The plot thickens at every turn. Marvellous stuff. Blessed is the name of O'Neill - and of Livi2Jack! :-D What are you gonna do for an encore?
9/30/2007 c16 1teh blumchenkinder
I can't believe I *missed this* on Saturday! ... *Wahh!*
Yay! Update! *does the kirby dance*
“Blessed is the name of O’Neill.” The chorus of voices echoed.
Ack! Can't... breathe... oh my goodness. Ow. Ow.
Oh. The ridiculousness of it all... and it *makes* *sense*. Ow... owch...
Ah yes. The ah... Genii. o_-
With that he disappeared in a flash of bright white light. Radim blinked. Carter shrugged and looked at Woolsey to continue.
Dammit! Can I go *five* *minutes* without having to try to remember to breathe correctly! . ^o^
Lulz! Call *everaybady!* ^.^
baby-making farm
... I seem to recall Nazi policy to include such. ._. *blink*
Can you do anything *else* to make them creepier? Geez.
Is this all cannon? What is/isn't?
No doubt about it, Jack was playing for keeps.
O'Neill can be one scary s.o.b. when he wants to be... o.o
1teh blumchenkinderI can't believe I *missed this* on Saturday! ... *Wahh!*
Yay! Update! *does the kirby dance*
“Blessed is the name of O’Neill.” The chorus of voices echoed.
Ack! Can't... breathe... oh my goodness. Ow. Ow.
Oh. The ridiculousness of it all... and it *makes* *sense*. Ow... owch...
Ah yes. The ah... Genii. o_-
With that he disappeared in a flash of bright white light. Radim blinked. Carter shrugged and looked at Woolsey to continue.
Dammit! Can I go *five* *minutes* without having to try to remember to breathe correctly! . ^o^
Lulz! Call *everaybady!* ^.^
baby-making farm
... I seem to recall Nazi policy to include such. ._. *blink*
Can you do anything *else* to make them creepier? Geez.
Is this all cannon? What is/isn't?
No doubt about it, Jack was playing for keeps.
O'Neill can be one scary s.o.b. when he wants to be... o.o
9/30/2007 c16 1Draonheart0000
omg, thank u so much for updating, i've been waiting and waiting for another chapter.
and i love the badass jack. good job, it is so awesome
and i was wondering, who is stronger than who, the nox or the asgard?
update soon
-dragonheart
1Draonheart0000omg, thank u so much for updating, i've been waiting and waiting for another chapter.
and i love the badass jack. good job, it is so awesome
and i was wondering, who is stronger than who, the nox or the asgard?
update soon
-dragonheart
9/30/2007 c16 gibblesgal
Holy frakking science lab, Batman! I do believe I've had my lesson for today, week, month, and year! I am so happy that there wasn't a test at the end of this chapter. Just give me an 'F' right now and be done with it. LOL You must have researched well into the night to get all that technobabble down pat. But it was needed to advance the story properly. Seriously, I have a pretty good idea of what you're saying. Just don't ask me to explain it. Well done.
Jack is going to play hardball with this 'robot' from the very beginning. He's not going to pussyfoot around. Too many lives at stake here. Good for him. We all knew he had it in him to put the thumbscrews to work. He just wasn't given the opportunity or the backup to do it before. They have finally realized that they don't have time to waste if they don't want to be wiped out.
Another commendable chapter put to bed.
Holy frakking science lab, Batman! I do believe I've had my lesson for today, week, month, and year! I am so happy that there wasn't a test at the end of this chapter. Just give me an 'F' right now and be done with it. LOL You must have researched well into the night to get all that technobabble down pat. But it was needed to advance the story properly. Seriously, I have a pretty good idea of what you're saying. Just don't ask me to explain it. Well done.
Jack is going to play hardball with this 'robot' from the very beginning. He's not going to pussyfoot around. Too many lives at stake here. Good for him. We all knew he had it in him to put the thumbscrews to work. He just wasn't given the opportunity or the backup to do it before. They have finally realized that they don't have time to waste if they don't want to be wiped out.
Another commendable chapter put to bed.
9/30/2007 c16 deitarionSSokolow
Alright, now things get interesting again. :)
(The two areas of BSG crossovers I like most are the crossover aspect (seeing how the different groups react to each other) and the exploration of what Cylons are (in all aspects and from all views))
Alright, now things get interesting again. :)
(The two areas of BSG crossovers I like most are the crossover aspect (seeing how the different groups react to each other) and the exploration of what Cylons are (in all aspects and from all views))
9/20/2007 c15 jeremy hollis
Hello again it been awhile I am fan of your work I finished rereading your story and notice things that where frist miss.
1. the colonal ship destory by the wraith, and their weapons useless
2. shown video of wraith feeding
You think having this happen to the colonals will be more worry about the things OUT THERE TRYING TO KILL/EAT THEM, but no they are more worry about getting to earth and have earth fix their problems.
re watch the whole BSG series 1-2 in Australia. I see them going to earth with an attitude of come brothers reunite with us and aid us, against our enemy that destroy our way of life and conquered our 12 planets in a day and have lead them to earth.
Note: Colonials being the downfall of mankind leading the destroyers to earth, good thing we in another galaxy with the SGA stopping their genocide march.
Hello again it been awhile I am fan of your work I finished rereading your story and notice things that where frist miss.
1. the colonal ship destory by the wraith, and their weapons useless
2. shown video of wraith feeding
You think having this happen to the colonals will be more worry about the things OUT THERE TRYING TO KILL/EAT THEM, but no they are more worry about getting to earth and have earth fix their problems.
re watch the whole BSG series 1-2 in Australia. I see them going to earth with an attitude of come brothers reunite with us and aid us, against our enemy that destroy our way of life and conquered our 12 planets in a day and have lead them to earth.
Note: Colonials being the downfall of mankind leading the destroyers to earth, good thing we in another galaxy with the SGA stopping their genocide march.
9/11/2007 c15 1Dr Gero
Great chapter.
It's kinda sad to see that the Asgard are huma- ...mortal? Too. Even if what they're doing isn't out of anger/hate/harmful intent.
It's good to see Tau'ri sharing information; now if only the Colonials weren't quite so thickheaded and so quick to 'crazy make'.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
1Dr GeroGreat chapter.
It's kinda sad to see that the Asgard are huma- ...mortal? Too. Even if what they're doing isn't out of anger/hate/harmful intent.
It's good to see Tau'ri sharing information; now if only the Colonials weren't quite so thickheaded and so quick to 'crazy make'.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
9/3/2007 c15 1teh blumchenkinder
Now, they and their alien friends had brought the scourge of the Cylons upon everyone. To Roslin’s horror, the Colonials were back to square one after the two and a half month reprieve.
Eh. Don't worry about it. SGC/A will blast the becrackers out of them and send them packing just like everyone else.
Their saviors were not their own masters.
*sigh* Quit making assumptions without all the facts.
Hearing that one alien group named a capital ship after another alien was incomprehensible. “They like him that much?”
Darn straight! :D
“These people are at war with multiple alien groups?” Zarek began to understand the truly serious nature of the situation. They were not dealing with just a few humans on Atlantis and one planet in another galaxy.
Frakking *finally*
If she did not like him before, she truly hated him now.
aw, dude. That's totally not how it is... -.-
Call Everyone! o.0 oy.
Zena- I thought it was Xena...?
1teh blumchenkinderNow, they and their alien friends had brought the scourge of the Cylons upon everyone. To Roslin’s horror, the Colonials were back to square one after the two and a half month reprieve.
Eh. Don't worry about it. SGC/A will blast the becrackers out of them and send them packing just like everyone else.
Their saviors were not their own masters.
*sigh* Quit making assumptions without all the facts.
Hearing that one alien group named a capital ship after another alien was incomprehensible. “They like him that much?”
Darn straight! :D
“These people are at war with multiple alien groups?” Zarek began to understand the truly serious nature of the situation. They were not dealing with just a few humans on Atlantis and one planet in another galaxy.
Frakking *finally*
If she did not like him before, she truly hated him now.
aw, dude. That's totally not how it is... -.-
Call Everyone! o.0 oy.
Zena- I thought it was Xena...?
9/3/2007 c14 teh blumchenkinder
“Well, I could show you the Library,” Daniel offered. Only Adama disappeared in a flash of bright white light. Daniel shrugged and went to get some lunch, letting Carter know what happened over the headset.
Bwaahawha! haah! Poor Danny... haha... ow.
“No, not on this ship, but soon they will arrive.”
oh. Great. As if the Goa'ould, Ori, Wraith, and Replicators aren't enough, now Cylons are going to munch on things!
“Now the Cylons know where the Colonials are and about Atlantis. With Asgard knowledge, they can build efficient intergalactic engines.”
Um. Munch on things.
I love how... how *placidly* Carter, Jackson, and O'Neill take the whole, "zap, somewhere else" thing!
“Well, I could show you the Library,” Daniel offered. Only Adama disappeared in a flash of bright white light. Daniel shrugged and went to get some lunch, letting Carter know what happened over the headset.
Bwaahawha! haah! Poor Danny... haha... ow.
“No, not on this ship, but soon they will arrive.”
oh. Great. As if the Goa'ould, Ori, Wraith, and Replicators aren't enough, now Cylons are going to munch on things!
“Now the Cylons know where the Colonials are and about Atlantis. With Asgard knowledge, they can build efficient intergalactic engines.”
Um. Munch on things.
I love how... how *placidly* Carter, Jackson, and O'Neill take the whole, "zap, somewhere else" thing!
9/3/2007 c13 teh blumchenkinder
Atlantis personnel watched a blood sacrifice for the first time in their lives with a mix of fascination, horror, disgust, and their own religious impediments.
Ooh. Me like. Nice turn of phrase.
Zatting everything in 60 ft
I must be easily amused- I love this phrase!
“They think Daniel and I are the gods, Castor Oil and Pollywantsacracker.” Jack frowned. “So they decided to appease us with a sacrifice.”
o.o
Yay for channeling Jack!
They think Chulak is Hades
Man... whatever they do, things just keep escalating... I almost* feel sorry for them. :D
Waiting for them was Lt. Anastasia Dualla, the Colonial Liaison Representative. She was not looking forward to debriefing them. General O’Neill had made it clear to her directly. Make them understand this whole religious thing was a load of crap. She would obey and do her best for the Divinity.
*sigh* not... quite.
“Can it wait? I’m up to my earballs in snafu.”
Haha! but... earballs?
“Promise you aren’t going to get mad when I tell you. I don’t need that right now. We have enough problems.”
about six seasons of crazy alien shat/drama has now been busted out. Enjoy the explosion.
Sheppard talked to a whole bunch and dated two
wait. What?
“Well, the real problem, Bill, is not knowing when my birthday is.”
*takes a deep breath thru nostrils* ahh... banter. Daniel/Jack banter. *kicks back and takes a sip of soda*
Atlantis personnel watched a blood sacrifice for the first time in their lives with a mix of fascination, horror, disgust, and their own religious impediments.
Ooh. Me like. Nice turn of phrase.
Zatting everything in 60 ft
I must be easily amused- I love this phrase!
“They think Daniel and I are the gods, Castor Oil and Pollywantsacracker.” Jack frowned. “So they decided to appease us with a sacrifice.”
o.o
Yay for channeling Jack!
They think Chulak is Hades
Man... whatever they do, things just keep escalating... I almost* feel sorry for them. :D
Waiting for them was Lt. Anastasia Dualla, the Colonial Liaison Representative. She was not looking forward to debriefing them. General O’Neill had made it clear to her directly. Make them understand this whole religious thing was a load of crap. She would obey and do her best for the Divinity.
*sigh* not... quite.
“Can it wait? I’m up to my earballs in snafu.”
Haha! but... earballs?
“Promise you aren’t going to get mad when I tell you. I don’t need that right now. We have enough problems.”
about six seasons of crazy alien shat/drama has now been busted out. Enjoy the explosion.
Sheppard talked to a whole bunch and dated two
wait. What?
“Well, the real problem, Bill, is not knowing when my birthday is.”
*takes a deep breath thru nostrils* ahh... banter. Daniel/Jack banter. *kicks back and takes a sip of soda*
9/3/2007 c12 teh blumchenkinder
Closing her eyes, she prayed for it all to stop, repenting, and promising to obey the gods living among them.
She was not the only one.
Oh, dude. You're embarrassing them. C'mon! ._.
“Who are they? Is this the underworld?”
“You are in a very important place with um, extremely irritable important people who can kill you just for looking at them the wrong way. Now shut it.”
*giggles* Yes. So McKay. ^.^
Chief Tyrol fell to his knees in awe. It was all true. O’Neill was a god who ordered his servant’s return from the dead. Even the Lords of the Underworld obeyed him to do it.
I am a sick person: I've laughed at most of the Colonials' reactions. This, takes the proverbial cake! Death, and godhood. Oh. Ow.
“It’s to pray to Dr. Jackson.”
No. It's this! I've been laughing for the last 10 minutes. I can just picture him, all freaked out and hiding behind something in the tomb, trying to figure a way out. Everyone's gone ape-s**t
Closing her eyes, she prayed for it all to stop, repenting, and promising to obey the gods living among them.
She was not the only one.
Oh, dude. You're embarrassing them. C'mon! ._.
“Who are they? Is this the underworld?”
“You are in a very important place with um, extremely irritable important people who can kill you just for looking at them the wrong way. Now shut it.”
*giggles* Yes. So McKay. ^.^
Chief Tyrol fell to his knees in awe. It was all true. O’Neill was a god who ordered his servant’s return from the dead. Even the Lords of the Underworld obeyed him to do it.
I am a sick person: I've laughed at most of the Colonials' reactions. This, takes the proverbial cake! Death, and godhood. Oh. Ow.
“It’s to pray to Dr. Jackson.”
No. It's this! I've been laughing for the last 10 minutes. I can just picture him, all freaked out and hiding behind something in the tomb, trying to figure a way out. Everyone's gone ape-s**t
9/3/2007 c11 teh blumchenkinder
“What?” McKay looked at the others. “Did he take another Ancient download?” Everyone shrugged. Chief Tyrol looked at them without understanding. “McKay to General O’Neill.”
Dude. this is SG. Strange shat happens, b1ch3s. o.0 *cough*
“O’Neill is an immortal.”
*sigh* time to bust out the Goa'ould. -.-^
The discussion was surreal.
Yeah. Get used to it. You just fell down the rabbit hole.
“What?” McKay looked at the others. “Did he take another Ancient download?” Everyone shrugged. Chief Tyrol looked at them without understanding. “McKay to General O’Neill.”
Dude. this is SG. Strange shat happens, b1ch3s. o.0 *cough*
“O’Neill is an immortal.”
*sigh* time to bust out the Goa'ould. -.-^
The discussion was surreal.
Yeah. Get used to it. You just fell down the rabbit hole.
9/3/2007 c10 teh blumchenkinder
Don't worry, Tyrol. McKay gets on all our nerves.
Jack had a mental shudder. His blending with Kanan left residual naquadah in his blood so he could operate Goa’uld devices. He didn’t like to admit it or dwell. Everyone knew a blended host could.
Oh. Great. Godhood, here he comes.
Woot! Jaffa!
Even so, Adama was surprised to learn that O’Neill was coming in person. He shook his head at the notion of a commander leaving his post during a crisis to micro-manage a situation.
See? This is why Jack's weird! Bad officer! Bad! No cookie!
“It’s true,” he whispered.
This is where the excrement hits the ocillator. L.L
Don't worry, Tyrol. McKay gets on all our nerves.
Jack had a mental shudder. His blending with Kanan left residual naquadah in his blood so he could operate Goa’uld devices. He didn’t like to admit it or dwell. Everyone knew a blended host could.
Oh. Great. Godhood, here he comes.
Woot! Jaffa!
Even so, Adama was surprised to learn that O’Neill was coming in person. He shook his head at the notion of a commander leaving his post during a crisis to micro-manage a situation.
See? This is why Jack's weird! Bad officer! Bad! No cookie!
“It’s true,” he whispered.
This is where the excrement hits the ocillator. L.L