for Dangers of a staring contest between Krad and Dark12/13/2007 c1 abelfight195
wow dey r in pe kwel i mean fuck them both i am one horny gal that i am! XD
wow dey r in pe kwel i mean fuck them both i am one horny gal that i am! XD
1810/29/2006 c1 Anonymous Reviewer of Evil
I'm not logging in. I refuse to...this story...to say the least, is not very good. Why, you may ask? I will tell you. It's short...nearly pointless...makes no sense...and...well, that's just it. You're not a BAD writer, it's just...this is a BAD work-if you want any praise from me, I demand you give it logic and a point to work around-GIVE IT SENSE!
I don't like to be mean, and I'm not trying to, but I had to say it. Bleh-Please don't be upset, because I only meant for this to be constructive criticism.
I'm not logging in. I refuse to...this story...to say the least, is not very good. Why, you may ask? I will tell you. It's short...nearly pointless...makes no sense...and...well, that's just it. You're not a BAD writer, it's just...this is a BAD work-if you want any praise from me, I demand you give it logic and a point to work around-GIVE IT SENSE!
I don't like to be mean, and I'm not trying to, but I had to say it. Bleh-Please don't be upset, because I only meant for this to be constructive criticism.