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2DigitalWarrior96
I'm not sure if from what you said if this is the last chapter or not. But if it isn't I can't explain how excited I am from reading this. You're story is amazing and I shed tears at multiple parts whilst reading it. It was a pleasure reading this and "Autumn Leaves". I love how everything with Kazu happened for a reason and even the short parts with Kenta meant a whole lot. I. Loved. This.
2DigitalWarrior96I'm not sure if from what you said if this is the last chapter or not. But if it isn't I can't explain how excited I am from reading this. You're story is amazing and I shed tears at multiple parts whilst reading it. It was a pleasure reading this and "Autumn Leaves". I love how everything with Kazu happened for a reason and even the short parts with Kenta meant a whole lot. I. Loved. This.
1/9 c24 Trutown
"I didn't give it a lot of detail..."
I find a problem with this statement. In literature, it is better to show rather than to tell. Giving detail is a fundamental part of showing. If you think you could have given more detail or could have shown more, then you probably should have. Remember, always show. Telling should only be reserved for skimming over the really boring bits. That one scene could have really benefited with more showing. Not more dialogue, but more detail given in the narration.
Other than that, good story and good presentation overall.
"I didn't give it a lot of detail..."
I find a problem with this statement. In literature, it is better to show rather than to tell. Giving detail is a fundamental part of showing. If you think you could have given more detail or could have shown more, then you probably should have. Remember, always show. Telling should only be reserved for skimming over the really boring bits. That one scene could have really benefited with more showing. Not more dialogue, but more detail given in the narration.
Other than that, good story and good presentation overall.
12/29/2012 c24 14bubbajack
Damn... Poor Kazu. Victroy againist the Darnkess is bittersweet for Takato in this fic that's for sure. I loved the reunion between Rika and Takato at long last. I wonder how they are going to explain this to Kazu's parents...that's gonna be an akward conversation. Gosh I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Till next time, Happy Holldays/New Year!
-Bubbajack
14bubbajackDamn... Poor Kazu. Victroy againist the Darnkess is bittersweet for Takato in this fic that's for sure. I loved the reunion between Rika and Takato at long last. I wonder how they are going to explain this to Kazu's parents...that's gonna be an akward conversation. Gosh I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Till next time, Happy Holldays/New Year!
-Bubbajack
7/22/2012 c23 3Blu Mist the Potato
*MOTHER OF ALL SWARES*
I really have no words to describe how enthraled I am in this story, really.
Great job, regards from Portugal!
3Blu Mist the Potato*MOTHER OF ALL SWARES*
I really have no words to describe how enthraled I am in this story, really.
Great job, regards from Portugal!
6/19/2012 c22 14bubbajack
Damn dude you sure know how to make people think and tug at the heart strings at the same time! Excellent job but I seriously hope Kazu and the others aren't "dead dead" because that would suck! It would be like rubbing salt into an open wound at this point! I kinda hope there is goning to be another sequel to this because A. this fic is great and I love reading your writing and B. Finding out HOW Takato g!ets the others back could be a WHOLE nother story in and of itself. No matter what you decide to do you can be sure I'LL be along for the ride!
Till your next fantastic update,
-Bubbajack out!
14bubbajackDamn dude you sure know how to make people think and tug at the heart strings at the same time! Excellent job but I seriously hope Kazu and the others aren't "dead dead" because that would suck! It would be like rubbing salt into an open wound at this point! I kinda hope there is goning to be another sequel to this because A. this fic is great and I love reading your writing and B. Finding out HOW Takato g!ets the others back could be a WHOLE nother story in and of itself. No matter what you decide to do you can be sure I'LL be along for the ride!
Till your next fantastic update,
-Bubbajack out!
6/19/2012 c21 bubbajack
Wow you killed Kazu...Damn! This chap was amazing dark but amazing! Incredable job keep up the good work dude!
Wow you killed Kazu...Damn! This chap was amazing dark but amazing! Incredable job keep up the good work dude!
6/7/2012 c20 bubbajack
As usual Pat you've done an amazing job! This chapter just like most of this fic was heart wrenching but at the same time totally awesome in the action department! I look forward to future chapters and (hopefully)one final sequel to this amazing saga of yours! Best reguards and Till your next update,
-Bubbajack out!
As usual Pat you've done an amazing job! This chapter just like most of this fic was heart wrenching but at the same time totally awesome in the action department! I look forward to future chapters and (hopefully)one final sequel to this amazing saga of yours! Best reguards and Till your next update,
-Bubbajack out!
5/30/2012 c19 bubbajack
Dang is it good to have you back Pat! I loved this chap! The fight scene was just so deep and detailed not to mention emotional! This was a great way to say your back and I hope to see another chapter at some point. Till your next update,
-Bubbajack out!
Dang is it good to have you back Pat! I loved this chap! The fight scene was just so deep and detailed not to mention emotional! This was a great way to say your back and I hope to see another chapter at some point. Till your next update,
-Bubbajack out!
4/8/2012 c18 bubbajack
HOLY **! They killed Black Wargreymon...FINALLY! Epic fight scene I loved it! I hope you update soon and I usually don't ask that of authors because I know they have personal lives but now I GOTTA know what happens next! Till your next update C'ya!
-Bubbajack
HOLY **! They killed Black Wargreymon...FINALLY! Epic fight scene I loved it! I hope you update soon and I usually don't ask that of authors because I know they have personal lives but now I GOTTA know what happens next! Till your next update C'ya!
-Bubbajack
4/7/2012 c17 bubbajack
This chap was the best yet! I love how Takato basically needs to kick his own ** to win this war. Good luck with the Darknesses Dialouge your gonna need it I think.
This chap was the best yet! I love how Takato basically needs to kick his own ** to win this war. Good luck with the Darknesses Dialouge your gonna need it I think.
4/7/2012 c16 bubbajack
Wow I'm Shocked that Takato just let himself get the ** beat outta himself like that. But then again it IS Rika we're talkin bout here. Nice chap.
Wow I'm Shocked that Takato just let himself get the ** beat outta himself like that. But then again it IS Rika we're talkin bout here. Nice chap.