1/4/2007 c1 semprence86
great story hope u write a few more chapters i luv it

keep up the good work hope to see the next chapter soon

12/31/2006 c1 nahane
Original idea, but seems a bit rushed, especially the ending and the speech. :)

12/29/2006 c1 28Ardin
This is a really brilliant idea, but I feel that you tried to rush through it a bit too much. Try a rewrite and take the time to let it be a longer story. Great concept though, it fits really well with the story characters.