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1/26/2008 c1 31477166
debriefing?

okkay...

LOL so Jack
7/18/2007 c1 CindyLou13
What a great story! It brought tears to my eyes when Vala honestly answered Daniel. Then to have Jack added in with a little J/S was wicked! But the final Cam line was so funny! Brought the mood right around again. Please write more Daniel/Vala. You really have the feel for it!

Thanks so much for writing!
5/4/2007 c1 MariShal
Sweet! Very nice DV interaction.
3/17/2007 c1 38FBI Bones
lol! loved the end! and the rest was just perfect, going on my favourites definitely!

~Red~
2/18/2007 c1 Mom
Not being a big fan of Stargate, I will be from now on! When a child achieves goals in life, the parent is also sharing the same goals for they are a part of you . I am bias and proud to say she is my daughter, and keep up the good work.Love always Mom...
2/7/2007 c1 Verity Kindle
AWESOME. Sam/Jack a teeny bit, Daniel/Vala. If this fic were a person, I'd marry it!
1/21/2007 c1 Cheeseburger Cheeseburger
wonderful! I love the characterization. hope you write more!
1/18/2007 c1 27SG-Fan
That was good!

Welcome to fanfiction! By the way, you have excellent taste in TV shows. (-:
1/17/2007 c1 3abydonian
great story. i love the shows relationship between daniel and vala and you captured it perfectly
1/16/2007 c1 18BkWurm1
Crazy sweet. Also loved this line: "for Daniel Jackson and Vala Mal Doran life had been crushingly unfair"

So simple and apt.

Mitchell is lucky to be alive.
1/16/2007 c1 terranlily
Beautiful. As a D/V shipper myself, this is exactly how I imagine them.

..."to make you smile, even when fleeting, gives me the strength to continue standing by your side...Standing by you fixes the things in me.”
1/16/2007 c1 17Shinki
I loved that! It was sweet.
1/16/2007 c1 138Briar Elwood
AW! Adorable, great job for your first step into the realm of fanfiction! I hope to see more of you!

Great fic, a few technical errors (grammar/spelling) every once and a while (a beta might help-I'm available, if you're interested!) but the story was great! You got the characters down really well and I loved the little bit of humor at the end.

Great job, it's going on my favorites.

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